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Life partner Maneet FF Climax (Page 76)

blueopal IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 11:50pm | IP Logged
hey mathan n KT  love  story  is  starting  was nice...........
n geet  don't  wanna  go  paris as  honeymoon  trip n she  wants as family tripConfused............poor  maan  all  he was doing is  dream only  na................feel  bad  for him...........
n  new  entry...............hmm..........interesting..............looking  fwd.......

trishap Goldie

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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 5:17am | IP Logged
nice part
jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 11:13am | IP Logged

Life Partner Part 29

Om:What are you saying?
Joydeep:Please don't misunderstand me.I'm Bhoomi's lecturer.I would like to marry her.
Everyone stares at Bhoomi.
Manthan:You hid such a big thing from us sis?
Bhoomi is nervous.
O:I just don't believe this.
J:Please don't blame Bhoomi.We are not seeing each other.But we both know that we have feelings for each other.But we won't take a step forward without your permission.
Om becomes calm.
J:I'm an orphan.So i consider you both as my parents.When Parvati aunty gave us prasad i felt that my mother is giving me prasad.
Parvati and Om smile.
Om goes near Joydeep and pats him.
O:I liked your nature.I'm happy to accept you as my son in law.
Joydeep and Bhoomi are surprised.Parvati and Manthan smile.
Joydeep and Bhoomi touch the feet of Om and Parvati and get their blessings.
Joydeep and Bhoomi move to another room.
They both are shy to face each other.
Bhoomi breaks the ice.
B:I never thought that you would come here.
J:How can i not come when i love you sincerely?
He holds her hand.She is shy.Slowly she looks at his face.He smiles.She blushes.

Bhoomi rings up Maan.
B:Ji jeeju!How is the second honeymoon?
MAAN:Going nice.
B:I'm not able to contact Geet.Her cell is switched off.
MAAN:We are so busy that she could not charge her mobile.My battery is also low.
B:There is a happy news.I want to tell Geet soon.I have no patience.
MAAN:But Geet is in the room.I'm in the hotel garden.You tell me what's the news.I will convey the message to her.
Bhoomi tells him everything.
MAAN:Wow!Congrats Bhoomi.I will tell this to Geet now.
He cuts the phone and goes to the room.He sees Ganga with Geet in the room.
G:Good thing that you came Maan bhaiyya.There is something exciting for us.The hotel people have arranged a dance hall for us.Tonight lots of couples are coming.We shall go.Ok?
G:Geet bhabhi...please don't wear saree for the dance.
Geet smiles.
G:You wear a gown.
GEET:But i don't have any gown.
G:No problem.I will give you a gown.Black is the theme.We will wear a black gown.
G:Come to my room.I will dress you.
Geet goes with Ganga.
MAAN:I will tell her after the party.

Ganga ties Geet's hair in a stylish manner.She places a necklace on her neck.
G:Now you look so stylish.
GEET:I have felt like wearing a gown.But i never thought that it will be possible. Thanks a lot Ganga.If you were not here,i would not have been able to dress well.You made me beautiful.
Ganga smiles:Nothing like that bhabhi.You are already beautiful.I just helped you to dress up.
Geet smiles.

Anirudh,Ronit and Maan are dressed in black.They are waiting in the dance hall.
A:In this age also Mohini takes a lot of time to dress up.
Ronit and Maan laugh.
R:Our wives are not bad.They are crazy about dressing up.
They laugh again.
Mohini,Ganga,Geet and Mayank enter the hall together.
A:Finally they have come.
Mohini has worn a shining black saree and diamond ornaments while Ganga and Geet are in their black gown.Mayank looks cute in his black outfit.
Maan can't take his eyes off Geet.
His eyes sing:
Dil Kyun Yeh Mera Shor Kare
Idhar Nahin Udhar Nahin
Teri Or Chale..{Kites}

Mayank walks towards a one year old white girl who looks sweet and bubbly in her black frock.They both play.They all laugh seeing it.

Mohini:Come Anirudhji..we will dance.
A:My God!In this age?I can't.
M:What nonsense!We used to dance a lot at parties when we were young.That time also you were struggling hard to dance.
Anirudh laughs.
A:Anyways we will dance again.
They both go to the dance floor and start dancing.Beautiful instrumental music is going on.
Ronit takes Ganga to the dance floor and get engrossed in dancing.
Maan does'nt know how to take Geet to the dance floor.They both are confused.
Ronit and Ganga see it.
G:They both are so narrow minded.They are shy to dance before others.
R:We have to do something.
They both go near them.
R:What are you guys doing in the dance hall?We are here to dance.Not to stand simply.
MAAN:I can't know that.
R:No escape.
Ronit and Ganga push Maan and Geet to the dance floor.Ronit and Ganga start dancing again.
Slowly Maan puts his arms on Geet's shoulder and hip.She is uncomfortable.
So she runs away.
Maan follows her.
Geet runs downstrairs.Her leg slips and she falls down.
Her head is covered with blood.Maan goes to her and places her head on his lap.She is unconscious.
He sheds tears.




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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 11:21am | IP Logged
lovely update dear
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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 11:21am | IP Logged
really nice part...
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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 11:23am | IP Logged
oh no geet's accident again.. guess she'll regain her memory.. continue soon
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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 11:33am | IP Logged
oh that so sad my dear
i hope she remember
everything now so they
can reunite fabulous
update my dear pls cont
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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
that was wonderful to gd geet got a head injury again hope this time she remember everything again update soon and thanks 4 the pm

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