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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 5:46am | IP Logged
nice...finally ayesha is gone....hopefully things will get back to normal...n geet gets her memory back...

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Life Partner Part 28

KT is walking along the road.A lorry is coming behind her.She does'nt know that.Suddenly someone pulls her to a side.The lorry passes.She looks at him.He is Manthan.
KT:What is wrong with you?
M:Again blaming me?You have to be blamed.Where is your mind's concentration?Don't dream and walk on the road.If i had not pulled you to this side that lorry would have hit you and you would have died.
KT:If i die...?
M:If you can you score good marks?How can you beat me in every competition?I need a strong competitor every time.
KT loses her control and laughs.Manthan also joins.Suddenly they stop laughing and get drowned in each other's eyes.
KT:Why are you staring at me like this Manthan?
Manthan is embarassed:I don't know.Why did you stare at my eyes?I became shy.
Again they both laugh.
It starts raining.They both dance.Manthan sings looking at her:
'In dino...'{Life in Metro}.

Anirudh comes with tickets:Surprise!I brought honeymoon tickets for Maan and Geet.To Paris...
Mohini:Wow!That's nice.
Maan is happy.
Geet is dull:I'm not in a mood.
They all become dull.
GEET:I don't know why.
A:When you go to Paris,your mood will change.
Ganga:Geet Bhabhi...never trust your mother in law's words.She is double faced.Do you know how much she tortured you?
M:Stop it Ganga.After seeing you i realized Geet's value.I regret for what i did to her.Why you both are here now?You both had gone away.Right?
G:Just came to attend Maan Bhaiyya's and Geet bhabhi's wedding.Because we both love them.
GEET:Ganga...i don't remember whether Mohini aunty has hurt me or not.But now she is very sweet to me.So i love her.
Mohini hugs Geet.
A:Have fun in Paris.
GEET:Ok.But you all should come with us.
Ronit:How is it possible?It your honeymoon trip.How can we come?
GEET:Family tour is more fun.Please...don't say no.It is my come back.Right?So please don't say no.

They all go to Paris and travel all over the place.They stay in an Indian hotel.
Maan takes out the yellow saree which Geet when he went to see her.He remembers that she had worn the same saree for their first date.
MAAN:What if this saree helps to remind Geet of the past?
Geet enters the room.
MAAN:Will you wear this saree to the dining hall?
MAAN:I will wait in the dining hall.

Maan is waiting in the dining hall for Geet.Maan sees Geet coming.She looks beautiful in the yellow saree.
He gives a flower bouquet to Geet.She takes it with a sweet smile.
GEET:You love me this much?
MAAN:Yes,i love you from the bottom of my heart.
GEET:I love you too Maan.
Maan can't control his emotions.He takes her in his arms.
They both dance to the song 'Chupke se..'{Saathiya}.
Suddenly he realizes that it was only a dream.
Geet comes.
Maan gives her the bouquet.She takes it.
MAAN:Shall we have food?
They both eat food with silence.

Virani house...
Parvati does puja.She gives prasad to everyone.She is shocked to see an uninvited guest at the back.He extends his arm for prasad.
She walks towards him with the prasad and gives it to him.Bhoomi is shocked.Om and Manthan are wondered who he is.
Par:After puja i saw you.That shows something good.Who are you? don't know him?I thought you invited him for puja.
O:Who are you?How did you come here?
He:I'm Joydeep.I'm an unvited guest.But i hope for the coming pujas i will be invited.I hope i will be blessed to be the son in law of this family.
Om,Parvati and Manthan are shocked.


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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 6:14am | IP Logged
awsome one yaar..simply superb 
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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 6:21am | IP Logged
superb update..
update soon..
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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 6:22am | IP Logged
Great part!!!!
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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 6:31am | IP Logged
poor maan's tots went into dreams... HM with family...i mean family tour...
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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 6:37am | IP Logged
honeymoon became family tour..poor maan
do continue soon
thanks 4 pm...!!Smile
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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 6:41am | IP Logged
nice ....
loved honeymoon + family vacation....
new entry...hmmm...lets c what happens next..

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