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blueopal IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 10:51pm | IP Logged
hey  superbbbbbbbbbb  update.............
so  geet  rejected  shiv  proposal..........
poor  maan ,he  was in  pain..............i  wanna geet  be  with  maan..........
i  wanna see  geet  get  her  conscious  soooooooooon..............looking  fwd......

dimpzz Goldie

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 3:45am | IP Logged
awwwwwwww poor maan
hope geet gets her memory back soon
tinatartari IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 4:22am | IP Logged
how much pain love z giving them!!
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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 9:25am | IP Logged

Life Partner Part 25

KT is walking along the road.Four guys surround her on bikes.
"Hi cutie.."One guy calls her.
She is nervous.
Another guy:Are you coming with us?
Another guy:We will have fun.
KT loses her control:Stop it.
The other guy holds her hand:What?Don't shout.
KT:Leave my hand.
Suddenly someone removes his hand from her's.They all look at him.He is Manthan.
M:Don't touch her.
That guy:Who are you to say this?
Manthan has no answer.
M:She is my fiancee.
KT is shocked.Those guys go away without saying anything.
KT:What did you say Manthan?You will never change.
M:Stop it.I lied to save you.Then also you are blaming me?
KT:You hate me.Right?Then why did you save me?
Manthan does'nt know that.
He thinks:Why did i save her?
KT:Tell Manthan.
Manthan goes away without saying anything.
KT keeps looking at him with a smile.When she turns back he looks at her.Then he walks away.
Their heart sings:
Ek ajnabi sa ehsaas dil ko sataye
shayad yahi to pyaar hai
betabiyon mein dhadkan meri chal paye
shayad yahi to pyaar hai
kutch bhi kaha na
kutch bhi suna na
phir bhi
bechain dil hai humara
behke kadam hai
mushkil main hum hai
sambhle bhala kaise yaara
chahe bina bhi
nazdeek hum chale aaye
shayad yahi toh pyaar hai..{Lucky}.

Ganga tastes a dish.
G:What a horrible dish!
Mohini feels insulted:I cook for you with effort.Then also you are insulting me.
G:I'm open.That's why.
M:Don't eat it if you did'nt like.I can't cook again for you.Horrible girl.
Ganga loses her control:What did you say?
She puts the vessel down.
All are shocked.
M:Hey...what did you do?Are you mad?
Mohini raises her hand to slap her.She holds Mohini's hand:I'm not Geet Bhabhi.
Ganga looks at Ronit:Ronit...let us leave this house.I can't tolerate her anymore.She always irritates me.She imposes her rules and regulations on me.Wear this.Eat this.Don't go out.I'm fed up.
R:But Ganga..
G:Or should i leave alone? down.
Ronit looks at Mohini:All daughter in laws can't tolerate you like Geet bhabhi.
Mohini looks at Ganga:Geet was better than you.

Ronit and Ganga leave the house.

After a few days...
Mohini goes near Maan:Maan..Are you thinking of Geet?
Maan does'nt open his mouth.He looks upset.
M:Then bring her back.
Maan is shocked:What?Any new game?
M:No.Now i understand how nice was Geet.Ganga taught me a good lesson.Try to get her back.I will pray for you.
Maan smiles.

Parvati opens the door hearing the calling bell's ring.She is shocked to see Maan.
Om and others also come.They are also shocked.
MAAN:I want to see Geet.I want her.
Bhoomi:Why don't you leave her alone?You destroyed her life and now again you want to...
MAAN:You all know how much i love her.
B:Then how did Ayesha enter your house?
MAAN:My mom did that.I have no role to play.I love only Geet.Please believe me.
All are confused.
Geet overhears it.She is shocked.
She thinks:How did they all know what Maan feels for me?I did'nt tell anyone about Maan's behaviour with me in the rain.Then how?Maan loves me?Why my family is reacting like this?I can't understand anything.
She comes forward.
MAAN:Geet!I came to take you back.
Suddenly Maan remembers the doctor's words that reminding Geet of the past is dangerous.
MAAN:Nothing.Without his knowledge his purse falls down.A photo falls down from his purse.
Geet takes it.She is shocked,because it is Maan and Geet's wedding photo.
She looks at others with tears.All are tensed.


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gangesegb IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 9:34am | IP Logged
lovely part.......
mrk-1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 9:35am | IP Logged
awsome one yaar...loved it !!! looking forward for the next update eagerly !!
namita25 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 13272

Posted: 04 February 2011 at 9:36am | IP Logged
great mohini has realised Geet's worth now......n wants maan n geet together now....
continue soon...

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