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hey  great  update  dear..........
wat???????????????  shivAngry  wanna  marry  geet...........
i  wanna  geet  say  no  to  shiv.............plz  do  it..............
looking  fwd.......

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Life Partner Part 24

Shiv:I will give you whatever you
Geet:With diamonds and gold you can't win a girl's heart Sir.Through diamonds and gold you can get only a girl's body..not her heart and soul.
Maan is relieved.He thinks:I always thought even you loved me only because i'm rich.But i was wrong Geet.
S:I love you Geet.I can give you a lot of love.I will never let your eyes to be wet.
GEET:I'm sorry Sir.I can't.
Ayesha:Why not?Because you want to snatch my husband from me?
GEET:Ayesha..i told you before also.I'm not interested in your husband.
Maan feels upset.Ayesha looks at Maan with an evil smile.She whispers to him:See..your beloved does'nt like you at all.
GEET:Shiv are very nice.But..i can't..i don't believe in love.
GEET:I feel love gives us only pain.
S:Why do you think like that?You have any such experience?
GEET:No.I did not have a boy friend.I'm not married.But my mind tells me that love means pain.I don't know why.
Maan tells in his mind:Your painful past with me is haunting you in your unconsious mind Geet..That's why..
Shiv is upset:It's ok.I can understand.Don't worry.
GEET:Thank you Sir for understanding me.
Though everyone leaves the place after the party Maan remains there.
Unexpectedly Maan holds Shiv's collar.
S:Maan..are you mad?
MAAN:Why did you propose to Geet?Don't you know that she is my wife?
S:She was your wife.But not now.When she was your wife you could give her only pain.That made her reach this stage.Your mother wounded her heart for being an adopted daugter.But my mom won't do that to her.Because i'm also an adopted son.
Maan becomes silent for a few moments.
MAAN:Geet does'nt love you.
S:Yes.But that does'nt mean that she loves you.I will wait for her.She will come to me.
MAAN:Never.She is only mine.I have full faith in my love.She will get her memory back and come back to me.Wait and see.
Maan challenges him.
Shiv smiles:You love her that much?Where was your love when she need your support the most?Where were you when your mom tortured her mentally?
Maan is petrified.He does'nt know what to say and he leaves the place.
Shiv smiles.

At home.
Bhoomi is angry:Why did you reject such a nice man Geet?You did a foolish thing.
GEET:I don't know why.I don't know i can't love Shiv Sir.
GEET:I don't know..but Bhoomi..there is a man in my dreams.
B:Who is he?
GEET:His face is veiled in my dreams.
Bhoomi thinks:Thank God.If she falls in love with Maan jeeju she will have more pain in the future.
GEET:But when i see him i feel pain.I don't know why.
B:Stop this nonsense and think about your future with a practical mind.
Geet is silent.

Geet sees rain falling while walking on the road.She swayed in the rain.Suddenly somebody holds her hip and pulls her closer to him.She is scared and looks at him.That was Maan.She is shocked.They both look into each other's eyes deeply.Maan's fingers move through her wet hair and face.Suddenly she moves away from him and slaps him.
GEET:How dare you touch me Mr.Maan?You thought i'm a loose girl?But i'm not that type.I never ever thought that you are such a dirty man.Poor Ayesha.She got an unfaithful husband.That's why she is suspecting me.
MAAN:Listen to me before shouting at me.Do you know who i am?
GEET:I don't want to hear anything.I don't want to see a dangerous man like you.
She runs away.Maan looks at her with pain.
MAAN:Though i'm trying to be near you,you are moving away from me.Come back Geet.After you went only i understood your position in my heart.


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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 7:23am | IP Logged
thank god...she rejected his proposal....
loved shiv for telling the blunt truth to is because of his carelessness that he lost geet....
so she sees someone....her dream man...its maan...i hope she realizes it soon....
doubt that she will ever believe in love...or go back to maan..coz for her LOVE MEANS PAIN...

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great part
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good one.
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oh poor mann and geet... thanks!!

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