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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 10:09am | IP Logged

Life partner Part 22

Maan:You must remember that i have not married you.Then why do you behave to me like a wife?One more thing...staying with a man before marriage is not good.
Ayesha feels insulted.
She leaves the room with pain.Mohini sees it and enters the room.
M:Maan,why did you hurt Ayesha?
MAAN:Why is she after me?Since you brought her here she thinks that she can be my wife.I can't.I just told her openly.Geet will be my wife forever.
M:But you know very well that Geet does'nt even remember who you are.She does'nt love you now.She can't even remember the baby she gave birth to.
MAAN:She will get her memory back and return to me.
M:That will never happen.So you start a new life with Ayesha.
MAAN:Stop it mom.Enough!I always thought that even Geet agreed to marry me because of my position.But she made me understand that all girls are not after money.She taught me that love is more important than money and money is not everything.I will always be grateful to her for that.
Mohini is irritated.

Mohini gives an orange saree to Ganga.
M:You were this for the party.
G:I'm sorry mummyji.I'm not that comfortable in saree.This is not a wedding function.It's a birthday party.So it's not necessary to be in a traditional dress.So i'm wearing a white gown. is better.
G:Sorry..i can wear only what i like.Nobody can force me.
Mohini thinks:She changed a lot.She was not like this before.Geet used to wear whatever i give her.I have even made her change her dress to wear what i have chosen for her.

Maan is carrying Mayank.Somebody goes near them with a gift.
"Happy birthday little Mayank.."
MAAN:Hi Shiv...I'm seeing you after a long time.
S:Me too.Just attended your wedding.After that i have not seen you.
Geet and family enter the party hall.The spotlight is on Geet.She has come in a white attire with curly hair.
Suddenly she sees Shiv and she comes forward.Maan thinks that she is coming towards him.So he is happy.But she went near Shiv.
GEET:Hi Sir..
Maan can't believe it.
MAAN:You both know each other.
S:Yes,she is my private secretary.
Maan is surprised.
S:Maan is my cousin.
Geet looks at Mayank and holds her little fingers:Happy birthday sweet boy.
She puts a chain around his neck.
GEET:A small birthday gift.
Mayank murmers:Na..Ma...
GEET:So sweet.
Maan thinks:She does'nt know that her own son is calling her 'Ma..'

The song 'Pee loon...'{Once upon a time in Mumbai} is going on.Ronit and Ganga dance.Ganga is stunning in the white gown.

Mohini:Now it's time to cut the cake.
Maan holds Mayank's hand to cut the cake.
M:No Maan.
GEET:Yes,the baby's mother has to come.Right?Where is his mother?
"I'm here".Ayesha comes.
Geet is surprised.
A:Yes.My dad Mr.Rakesh is also here.
Geet sees him.
A:Well...why did you come here?
GEET:What are you asking Ayesha?
A:You came here to snatch my husband from me.Right?
All are shocked.
GEET:What nonsense?
A:There were so many boys around you in the college.Then why are you after my husband?
GEET:Ayesha!I'm not interested in your husband.
Bhoomi:What is there in your husband to attract Geet?
A:Don't play too much Bhoomi.
Each sentence is tearing Maan.
A:This is your family's nature.Always irritating others.
GEET:My family or our family Ayesha?
Ayesha sweats.
A:Get lost Geet.
Geet does'nt move.
A:I said get lost.
Ayesha slaps Geet.
"Ayesha!"Maan shouts and is about to slap Ayesha. can you slap your own wife?
A:You shut up Geet.
Ayesha raises her hand to slap her again.That time Manthan holds her hand.
M:How dare you hurt my sister?Never ever..
GEET:Manthan!Leave her hand.
M:But Prati..
GEET:You know very well who is Ayesha for me.Then how could you?
Manthan leaves her hand. onwards Ayesha and this family are your enemies.They insulted you.You must take revenge.
GEET:That's the difference between me and you.I can't take revenge.God will decide each one's fate.
M:Let us go..
Geet goes near Rakesh and whispers:I'm tolerating everything only for you.But I can't always tolerate it dad.
He looks upset.
They all go.

At home.
Manthan:When you saw your real sister you ignored us?
Geet is upset:How could you talk like that Manthan?You both are more important for me than Ayesha.
Her eyes are full of tears.
Geet hugs Manthan and Bhoomi.They all are in tears.


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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 10:19am | IP Logged
wow so sorry about geettt and mann too
cyum321 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 10:29am | IP Logged

very good

feeling sad about maan n geetUnhappy i have feeling that geet is pretending or faking her memory loss ???

Tishuu Goldie

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 10:35am | IP Logged
omg omg omg omg omg...............plzzzzzzzzzzz kuch karo jaldi jaldi - omg omg omg when maan finds out the truth he'll kill someone for sure and when mohini finds out the truth - then she'll beg for geet - oh deary!!!!!!!!!!!
omg i have a feeling geet is doing this on purpose - but then y are manthan n bhoomi acting soo indifferent with maan???
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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 10:45am | IP Logged
feeling sorry for maan... how dare tat ayesha stupid raise her ahnd on Geet...
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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 10:51am | IP Logged
Nice part!!!
shah10 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 10:59am | IP Logged
nice part.
hate ayesha.
swetha10 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 11:18am | IP Logged
felt bad for maan.. erhh mohini n ayesha.. just feel like killing them.. luved geet, bhoomi n manthan bonding.. continue soon

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