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jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Life Partner Part 23

Maan shouts at Ayesha.
MAAN:You spoiled my son's birthday party.
Mohini:She did'nt do any mistake.No lady can stand her lover's ex-wife.
MAAN:How can you talk like this mom?I don't love Ayesha.Geet is still my wife.
Ganga:Maan bhaiyya is right.
Ronit:Maan bhaiyya and Geet bhabhi are made for each other.
Ayesha's eyes are burning.
MAAN:How do you know Geet personally?
A:We both studied in the same college.
M:Ayesha...don't be sad.One day Maan will realize that you are better than that bas***d Geet.
Maan raises his voice:Mom..Never call her bas***d.
M:I will.Because that is a fact.Geet is a bas***d.
Unexpectedly Rakesh raises his voice:Enough Mohiniji.Don't dare to call her bas***d.She is not a bas***d.You want to know who Geet's parents are?Then listen to me.I'm her father.
All are shocked.
Anirudh:What are you saying?
R:No.I have to reveal the truth atleast now.I never knew that my daughter Geet is suffering like this.For me, my Geet suffered silently.Not anymore.I did secret marriage with my beloved Lalitha since my parents did'nt give us the permission to be one.Geet was born.But we lost Lalitha soon.My parents forced me to remarry a rich lady called Vasundara.Since my business got failed i needed money to recover.So i was forced to leave Geet in an orphanage to remarry.I knew Om and Parvati.They adopted Geet.So i was happy that my daughter is in safe hands.But i'm sad that because of me my daughter is treated like a bas***d by her inlaws.Now my daughter is suffering because of her own sister.I'm a weak father who is not able to control my spoilt daughter Ayesha.She is staying in another man's house to win over him.
R:This is too much Ayesha.
Rakesh leaves the place.Ayesha is very upset.
She thinks:My own dad and my lover are against me because of Geet.I'm ashamed of the fact that Geet is my sister.

Manthan is irritated in the dining room.
Geet:Why are you irritated Manthan?Have food.Only you are left.
M:I'm in a bad mood.That stupid KT.I hate her.She scored more marks than me.I will not leave her alone. don't have to say anything other than KT?Why are you always thinking about KT?KT's marks..KT's dance..KT's music...always KT.
Bhoomi teases him:He is always thinking of KT.
They both laugh.Manthan is irritated.
M:Stop it.
B:Just chill bro.I was just joking.
He thinks:That's true.Why i'm i always thinking of KT?I have many other things to do.

Valentine's day...
Geet gives some files to Shiv.
S:Good work Geet.
GEET:Thank you sir.
S:Today is Valentine's day.Lover's day.I'm throwing a party.You will come no?
GEET:Sure Sir.

Maan and family come.Then comes Geet and family.Geet has worn a beautiful pink costume.
Shiv:Today is lover's day.Let us celebrate love.
Shiv starts singing 'Tu Hi Meri Shab Hai Subha Hai
Tu Hi Din Hai Mera..'looking at Geet.He is walking around her while singing.She has a sweet smile on her face.
Maan is becoming uncomfortable.
Shiv gives the mike to her.
S:Sing along with me.
GEET:No..i can't...
She is shy.She sings a few lines.
She gives the mike to him.
Shiv continues singing.

Shiv takes out a diamond ring and looks at Geet.
S:Geet..i love you.Will you marry me?
All are shocked.
GEET:What are you saying Sir?
S:It's not a joke.I really mean it.I really want to marry you.
Maan is tensed about Geet's reply.

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--aarthi-- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 6:00am | IP Logged
Oh My ... wait shiv knew she is Maan's wife rite... then how dare he is doing like this... but y do i also have a feeling that he his helping Geet to recover...

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mrk-1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 6:02am | IP Logged
awsome one yaar..hey maan why you shut still ?? open your mouth now and say to geet that you are her husband ...continue soon yaar

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--aarthi-- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 6:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mrk_1

awsome one yaar..hey maan why you shut still ?? open your mouth now and say to geet that you are her husband ...continue soon yaar
durga u knw na...sometimes these sudden shock mite lead to danger in health condition
Tyro IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 6:09am | IP Logged
i thought shiv knew that geet was n still is married..Confused
or foes he know something that nobody else does ??? Ermm
Radhika Shah IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 6:12am | IP Logged
Great part!!!
tinatartari IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 6:24am | IP Logged
wats tat?shiv came 2 wedding.rite?n he knows abt maaneet!then y he coming in btw them?plz update soon
Audiwalia IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 6:29am | IP Logged
No way....... Shiv knows she is married had a son how could he...... Geet plz say no.....

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