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tinatartari IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 6:25am | IP Logged
why z tis monini so creepy??

jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 6:12am | IP Logged

Life Partner Part 18

Maan:it must be here itself.
Mohini:No.I have to search everywhere including Geet's box.
All are shocked.
Mohini searches in Geet's box and she finds the necklace there.
All are shocked.
M:Geet!I loved you like your own daughter.But what did you do to me?
Geet tells in her mind:You never loved me like your own daughter.If you would not have suspected me.I loved you..i trusted you...but after gaining my trust you wounded my heart.
Her eyes are wet.
GEET:I did'nt steal it.
M:Then how did it reach your box?
GEET:I don't know.
Geet turns to Maan:Please don't be cruel...please don't say that i'm a thief.
MAAN:I know that you have not stolen it.
Geet is relieved.
M:Geet's parents can't afford a diamond necklace.So she...
MAAN:You go to your room Geet.
Geet goes to her room with Mayank.
MAAN:Mom...don't try to play games with me.I know you very well.
Mohini is embarassed.
M:What do you mean?
MAAN:I meant what i said.
Maan goes away.
Mohini enters Geet's room.
M:Geet!Usually daughter in laws gove their gold to the mother in law.But you did'nt do it.
GEET:That is because Maan told me to keep it with me.
M:You made Maan speak so.You were just an orphan living in an orphanage.I gave you shelter.
Geet says in her mind:When i was in the orphanage,my parents only gave me shelter.When you took me to your family i was not in an orphanage.
M:Your parents may be taking your gold.Since you are not their real daughter your wealth is more important than you for them.Their love is not true.
Geet says in her mind:I know my parents very well.I know how much they have sacrificed for me.I don't need your proof to to know whether my parents love me or not.
M:You made me buy a dress for your sister's birthday party.It was not my duty to buy a dress for the function you conducted.I don't know your genes or blood.I did'nt enquire about your real family before marriage.i did a great thing to you eventhough you are an adopted daughter.Everyone told me that i did a great thing.If i had'nt given my son to you you would have remained as a spinster through out your life.
Maan shouts.
MAAN:I told you not to hurt Geet.
M:She is an adopted daughter.It is a fact.Geet,...don't be hurt when i tell you the truth.The whole world knows that you are an adopted girl.You must accept it.
MAAN:Get out mom.
Mohini is hurt.
M:Geet!You took my son.You made my son shout at me.I'm cursing you...your son will do the same to you.Your daughter in law will take away your son.
Mohini leaves the room.
Geet cries.
MAAN:Don't worry Geet..i'm with you.Have i ever hurt you?
GEET:No.But Auntyji...
MAAN:Mom is mad sometimes.

Mohini rings up Parvati.
Par:How are you Mohini?
M:Why do you want to know that?
Parvati can't understand why she is talking like this.
M:You advised your daughter to separate my son from me.You all are trying to taske away my grand son from me.You all took Maan home.
Par:What are you saying?
M:We did a great thing by taking your adopted daughter to our family.But you people fooled us.Geet got bad upbringing.Since she is an adopted daughter you people did'nt correct her when she did wrong things.I brought up my kids very well.She does'nt even know how to bring up her own baby.She shouted at my son also.She behaves as if i tortured her.I have not made her do any work at home.Still she lies to my son that i tortured her.
Parvati becomes upset.She tells this to Om.Om is also upset.
Par:We never took things seriously when Geet told us about Mohini's behaviour.Now we realized that what Geet told about Mohini is true.
Mohini rings up Om:I talked to your wife.Your daughter Geet is making our heaven a hell.
Mohini talks rudely:Maan would have got a richer girl.Nobody supported this proposal as she is n adopted daughter.
Finally Om loses his control:Then why did you bring the proposal?We never begged you.
M:You are insulting us instead of becoming grateful to us.Disgusting!

After some time Anirudh rings up Om:Om,you were my best friend till now.But not anymore.You insulted my wife.
O:Sorry Anirudh.
A:After everything,apologising will be easy for you.But we can't forgive you.
He puts the phone down.Om becomes upset.

Geet cries in her room.She thinks:Because of me my dad lost his best friend.

Geet at home with her parents and siblings.
Geet is crying:Everyone hates me since i'm an adopted girl.Is it my fault?
Geet's question forms tears in everyone's eyes.
Parvati:No Geet...It's not your fault.
Bhoomi:You don't have to be ashamed of being called as an adopted daughter.Because that's not a bad thing.
Manthan:Don't be upset when Mohini aunty calls you an orphan.Because you are not an orphan.You have parents and siblings.
Om:If Mohini hurts you again, i will not leave her simply.
Geet raises her eyebrows and looks at Om. are a calm person.But now you seem to be very tough.
O:Yes.Circumstance made me like this.If Mohini insults you again i will not keep my mouth shut.
GEET:No dad.Please don't do that.
O:No Geet.I can't control myself if she irritates us.
Par:Even i can't keep my mouth shut.I'm fed up of tolerating everything silently.
Geet is helpless.
She thinks:What all things are taking place?Only Lord Krishna knows what to be done.

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 6:18am | IP Logged
loved the update...
mohini has just crossed her limits...Angry
was glad when maan shouted at her...n took geet's side...
even more happy to know that her family is with her...

Radhika Shah IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 6:29am | IP Logged
Nice part!
Hate mohini!!!
ambbiha IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 6:32am | IP Logged
nice update
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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 6:44am | IP Logged
Mohini have crossed all limits...... Its high tym dis is too much....... I hate her.
dimpzz Goldie

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 6:46am | IP Logged
mohini is seriously crossing her limits!
hate her!
rsroopali IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 6:47am | IP Logged
oh god nw d peaceful families will turn into enemies
atleast maan is with geet im happy for tht

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