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hey  nice update  dear............
maan  lies  to  make  his  mom happy........he  was soooooooooooo  sweet...............n  mohini  aunty  was soooooooooo  possessive  abt  maanConfused..............looking  fwd.............

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Part 16

Geet's Godhbharai function...
She wears a beautiful majenda saree.Mohini tells her:Pray for a baby who does'nt trouble parents.I prayed for that.So i nrver had anyproblem because of my children.Pray for a son.Son is better.If it's a girl,we wll have to spend a lot of money.
Geet thinks:What a disgusting thought!For me girl and a boy are equal.
the function goes well.

Maan gives baby clothes to Geet:This is for our baby.
Geet smiles:You are dreaming a lot for our baby.
MAAN:Yes.You are my baby's mother.That's why i gave our baby's dresses to you.
Mohini sees it.

Geet is eating sweets.Mohini goes near her:Eat these sweets.But don't eat chocolates.The baby will become dark.
Geet thinks:What a funny thought!
M:Maan is very shy.That's why he gave baby's dresses to you.
Geet is silent.
M:Our guests say that you must have done some good deeds in the past life,that's why you got a guy like Maan.There were so many rich girls after him.But only you got him.Om and Parvati seem to be very happy.They did'nt have a baby soon.That's why you entered their life.They are happy about your sudden pregnancy.
Mohini's words hurt Geet.
Maan comes:What's the discussion?
M:Geet is so sweet.You are lucky to have a good wife like her.
Maan smiles.
Geet thinks:I have been noticing this for quite some time.In front of Maan she is very sweet to me.But when we both are alone she is talking indirectly.Is she doing this purposefully?Or is she talking like this without her own knowledge?

Geet and Maan go for scanning.
Dr:Baby's weight is normal.Everything is fine.
GEET:Thank you doctor.
They both reach home.
M:How was scanning?
GEET:Everything is normal.
M:What's the baby's weight?
M:Only that much?My babies were very healthy and they both had good weight.

Geet rings up Parvati.
Par:How are you?
GEET:The baby's weight is 2.8.The doctor said it is ok.But Mohini aunty is not satisfied with it.
Par:That's ok.The doctor said it's ok.Right?Don't worry.Too much of weight is not good.It will be difficult to have a normal delivery.
Geet thinks:But i want a heavy baby.Otherwise Mohini aunty will be cut up.

Geet eats a lot of food purposefully for a heavy baby.

Last scan..
Parvati and Geet are together.
Doctor:The baby is 4.2.Normal delivery can be dangerous.So we should opt cesarean.
Parvati:Ok.Then we will have it now.
Parvati informs Mohini.Mohini talks to Panditji and gets a good time for the operation to be done.
M:The baby has to be born during this time.Otherwise the baby may take birth at the wrong time.
Par:Ok.I will tell the doctor.

Doctor:Blood is needed.
Om:I will get blood for Geet.

After some time...
Om comes back.He is disappointed.
Par:What happened?Where is the blood?
O:I did'nt get blood.
Par:What?Then what will we do?
Om,Parvati,Bhoomi and Manthan are tensed.

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where d hell is maan if geet is in need in blood n this mohini is sick godddd
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nice part
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what is wrong with mohini???
y is she doing all this...bcoz of her geet is in this conditionAngry
hope everything goes well...

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