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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 8:20am | IP Logged
Both of the parts were great!!!

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lovely update 
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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 9:32am | IP Logged
wow
they r going 2 b parents
loved it
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geet preggy.. hmm tht was quick.. continue soon
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hey  nice  update  dear..........
geet  was pregnant.........nice...............
n  maan  was shyLOL  along  with  geet,it  was cute................
looking  fwd.............

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nice part thanks!!!!
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awww they are going to be parents soon. such lovely news
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Pt 14

 
Maan sees Geet vomiting. He goes near her and holds her.
MAAN:Are you ok?
GEET:Yes.
They both sit on the bed.
MAAN:I think you need your mother's presense for some days.So you go to your house.Your mom will take care of you.
GEET:But...you...
MAAN:Don't think that you will have to stay away from me.Do you think i will spare you?No way.I will also stay with you here.
She is surprised:Really?
MAAN:Yes.Hope your parents will be ok with with it.
GEET:Ya...they have no problems for sure.
She holds his hands.
GEET:Thanks a lot Maan.

Maan and Geet are ready to go to her house.
Mohini:Where are you both going?
MAAN:Let Geet stay with her mom for some days till she becomes ok.
M:Ok.
MAAN:I'm also going to stay there for some days.
Mohini is shocked:What?
MAAN:Ya...to give her a company.
M:But she has everyone there.
MAAN:Yes.But still....ok mom...bye.
GEET:Bye auntyji.
Mohini feels insecure.

Maan and Geet reach her house..
Om:Maan ans Geet!What a pleasant surprise!
MAAN:I think Geet needs her mom's care now.So i decided to keep her here.I'm also thinking of staying here.Uncle...do you have any problem with it?
O:What a question!This is also your house.You have full right here.
Everyone smiles.
Parvati hugs Geet:I missed you.
GEET:Me too.
O:You did a great thing Maan.Parvati was tensed about Geet's health.

Maan buys orange juice and apple juice.
He asks Geet:Which one do you want?
GEET:Orange juiice.That is my favourite.
MAAN:So take it.I will give apple to my mom.

Geet rings up Mohini:Auntyji..how are you?
M:Fine.How are you?
GEET:Fine auntyji.
M:Take care of the baby.It's my grand child.
Geet smiles.
M:Does Maan buy something for you?I know that he does'nt buy gifts for you.But he will start giving you gifts later.
GEET:Maan may not be giving me diamonds and gold.But he bothers a lot about my health.He bought orange juice for me.A big bottle.
Mohini feels insecure.
M:He bought Apple juice for us.It is tastier than orange juice.
Geet smiles.
GEET:Ok auntyji..take care,Bye.
M:Bye.
Geet thinks:Auntyji is becoming insecure i feel.It's ok.I have heard that mother in laws will always feel like this.


Edited by jasminerahul - 21 January 2011 at 11:29am

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