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loved it yaar..awsome one ..

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hey  nice  dear...........
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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 11:11pm | IP Logged
awesome part...continue soon...
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Pt 12

 
Geet is lying on the bed.Maan enters the room:Geet...get ready...let us go out.
GEET:Sorry Maan.I can't.I'm tired.
MAAN:Tired?Why?You have no work at home.Right?
GEET:I met my old friend Satya today.We both went out.So i'm tired.
MAAN:No.You should come.
GEET:Why men can't understand women's feelings?
Maan loses his control:You can roam around with your friend.But you can't go out with our own husband.Then you are talking like this to your own husband?Your tongueis so sharp.Nobody has dared to talk to me like this.I feel like slapping you.
Geet becomes upset as she never expected him to react like this.
He goes out of the room.
GEET:Maan!
Mohini enters the room.
M:What happened Geet?You look upset.
Geet tells her everything.
M:Oh!I never knew that Maan has this kind of a face.I will ask him.
GEET:Please don't talk to him about this.Please don't tell this to anyone.
M:No,i won't tell this to anyone.
Mohini shouts:Maan!Come here.
Maan comes.
M:How dare you shout at my daughter.
MAAN:Mom...her tongue is too long..
M:Your tongue is also long.Never behave like this to her.It's my warning.
She goes out.
Maan stares at Geet:Immediately you told this to my mom and made her scold me?You are disgusting.
Geet feels upset.Maan goes out.

Geet is sitting on the bed.
She thinks:Maan is not talking to me.I can't bear this pain.
Her tears flow.Somebody wipes her tears from the back.She looks at that person.That was Maan.He is standing there with a smile.
MAAN:Forget it Geet.Fights happen between couples.Never mind.
Geet becomes happy and goes to his arms: I feel so relieved and happy.

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 1:34am | IP Logged
hey  nice  update  dear........
OMG maan  scold  geet  n  not  understanding  her..............
but  thank  god  finally  he   comfort   geet..........it  was   sooooooooo   sweet.........
looking  fwd.................

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 2:07am | IP Logged
such a nice update
do continue soon
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 2:25am | IP Logged
awesome
maan scolds geetCryCryCry 
but wat wit this mohini i cant understand her why she s behaving so nive to geetShockedShockedShockedShockedShocked
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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 2:30am | IP Logged
nice update....
but maan scolding geet...Cry...not done...
now maan should manofy geet...
liked maans mom..though i'm always confused about her character...positive or negative...Confused

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