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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 10:16am | IP Logged
Part 11
 
Mohini knocks the door:Maan!
Maan removes his arm from Geet.
M:This mom....
He is irritated.Geet smiles. Maan opens the door.
Mo:Tomorrow there is Holi's puja.Get ready early.So sleep soon.
M:Yes mom.
Mohini goes away.Maan closes the door and looks at Geet
M:This mom is sometimes...
G:We need to sleep early.Because we have to make arrangements for the puja.I will change and come.
M:Ok.

The next day...
Puja is going on in the house.Geet puts a gopi on Maan's forehead with saffron and gives prasad to Maan.

All are celebrating holi.They all throw colour on each other.
Maan goes near geet and puts colour on her face slowly.They both look deeply into each other eyes.
Geet thinks:I like Maan.May be i love him.But when he touched me now i felt very different.I felt secure.
Maan smiles at her.She also smiles.They both hold hands together and smile.
Mohini:Maan & geet...come..pose for a photograph.
They both stand together before the camera.
M:Maan...stand close to geet.
He is shy:What are you telling mom?
Mo:Stand close to her.
Maan stands close to her.They both are shy.Ronit takes their photograph.

Night....
It's raining...Geet is standing out with a smile.Maan goes out looking for her.
M:What are you doing here at night?All are sleeping.
G:Rain is so lovely.I love it.So cool.
She is dancing in the rain.Maan feels nice seeing her wet in the rain.He goes near her and pulls her close to her.
Geet can't move.They both can't utter a word.Their eyes speak to each other.
M:I love you Geet.It's time to break the distance between us.
She is shy:I love you too.
Maan sings the song 'Zindagi Do Pal Ki...' while becoming intimate with geet.

The next morning...
Geet is drying her hair.She sees a rose flower on the bed.
G:Who kept this here?Maan?
She hears somebody entering the room.She looks at him.That is Maan. She is shy to face him.So she tries to go out of the room.But he holds her hand.
She is shy:Leave my hand Maan.
She removes her hand from him and runs away.Maan smiles.

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 10:22am | IP Logged
really nice part.....
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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 10:28am | IP Logged
nice part dear... i still feel something is cooking in mohini's mind
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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 10:30am | IP Logged
nice updateeeeee
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nice part
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Nice part... loved it
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lovely update dear
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nice part..
do continue soon

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