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*NEW FF~TUM BIN*Prt10..TRUTH IS ALWAYS BITTER!pg19 (Page 2)

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 7:46am | IP Logged
nice update sheeba!!

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 7:46am | IP Logged
Gud one sheeba Thumbs Up

Please continue.... Luking forward.... Big smile.

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 7:57am | IP Logged
Great OS sheeba...
Awww Nakku doesnt believe his dead... good she should keep faith... .. Hailaa the precap... i hope it isnt a dream...
Continue soon

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 10:32am | IP Logged
lovely part..........plzzzz continue..........

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 1:13pm | IP Logged
big congo sheeba!! rli need somthng 2 cheer us up atm..nt dat dis OS wz mnt 2 cheer us up bt unlike cvs u wud reunite tasha insted of bringin sum1 els! :'((( enwyz hun do continue soon..wud luv 2 read on...oh n plz continue wv ur oda ffz..i rli ope oda membrz stil continue writin der ffz n finish it of..evn wiv da sad trak das goin on atm n 2 top it ol of da news bou D dead n mishal leavin...it wil b rli hard inh :((((...xxx

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
Sheeba, hope you don't mind...I kind of skipped Kala's bak bak (except for one line maybe)....I just didn't want to ....just couldn't...Stern Smile....but the OS was great and so were the emotions from Naku...as well as the sad but beautifully written ending. Hope you have time to update soon. Smile

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 7:07pm | IP Logged
Hi,

Sheebu...Tune to mere dil mein jaan phoonkdi....My heart was bleeding yesterday...Today it is breathing...Thanks a lot....Love you dear...It was nice update....Smile

Dutta zaroor vapas aayega....hamareliye...Our usko aanahi hoga....Kyu...yeh tum jaanti ho...Smile

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 5:11am | IP Logged

Guys First things first................Just don't worry Mishal won't go anywhere..............Ltl is meant for him and he for ltl..............Its just publicity................All of u plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cheer and smile....................EmbarrassedSAB THEEK HO JAYEGA!...........................Hug




PART 2…………….P.S. Don't leave me………..

 

 

Here's the next longg part hope u all enjoy this too……………

 

 

U see a broken naku walks into the room………….cool breeze blows and curtains fly as tears well up in naku's eyes…………..she looks around the empty room and recalls………how she used to bring food for dutta and make him eat………….she looks at the bed and recalls how the other day dutta had slept with his hand in naku's as she slept on the ground by his side………….(tears roll down nau's eyes as she walks upto the portrait which had fallen down)……………Cry

 

Naku recalls how dutta had walked in that scene where the song mera dil bhi kitna agal hai………….played………..she looks at the broken pieces of glass and remove them from dutta's picture………..and as she does this she hurts her hand………….and blood starts flowing from her injured fingers…………naku cries as she holds dutta's picture close to herself and sobs----AAp……….aap mujhey chod kar nahiin jaa saktey ho saab…………main………..main aapko kuch nahiin honey degii………….main………..main jaanti hai aapko kuch nahiin hua…………Cry

 

 

Naku feels a hand on her shoulder………….she turns to find dutta dressed in the same black kurta pyjama he had left in smiling at naku…………..

 

Naku leaves the picture and gets up to face him………….smile crosses her face as tears flow down her cheeks and she just keeps on gazing at dutta and says softly----SAAB…………..

 

Dutta steps closer to naku and takes her hand in his…………looks down at her bleeding hand and then back at her saying----Aye naku……..tu toh………Dutta shreeram Patil kii patnii hai naa………phir kyun iss tarah se kamzor padh rahii hai ………………..(he raises his hands and wipes away nak's tears saying on………….)……….aur tu jaanti hai………….main teri aakhon mein ansu nahiin dekh saktaa……………..Clap

 

Naku says----Saab………..meri takat toh aap hii ho………….aapko hii dekh kar……….main abb tak jeeti aayi hai…………aap hii saath chodogey toh main kya karegii……………….Embarrassed

 

Dutta says stepping closer to naku----saath kahaan choda hai teraa naku……………tera saath chodkar main kahaan jayegaa………….tu humesha apni muskurahat mein………….mere ko paayegi…………..apni aakhon mein meri nazron ko dekhegii……………apney cherey mein…………..mere pyar ko dekhegii…………….aur har pal……….. har lamhaa mere ko apney paas hii paayegii………Maut mere ko meri nakusha se alag nahiin kar sakti……………(Naku cries hard as Dutta says)…………Ti himmat nahiin haar sakti hai naku!………….Abb………….aayi sahib………….baji…………madhu……………taayi leela roops………..sab teri zimedarii hain……………unkii khushi mein hii meri khush hai tu yeh jaanti hai ……………..aur unhein abb tujhey hii sahara denaa hai…………….Cry

 

 

Naku moves her head sideways and cries saying----NAHIIN……………MAIN NAHIIN KAREGII……….AAPKE BINA MAIN KUCH NAHIIN KAR SAKEGII SAAB…………AAPKEY BINA MAIN JEEYEGII KAISEY?!..................EmbarrassedCry

 

Dutta steps even more close to naku…………slowly he embraces her face lovingly and holding her chin she makes her look up at him………….Naku closes her eyes and tears roll down her eyes as Dutta lays his lips on naku's forehead and kisses her saying----Main jaanta hai………MERI NAKUShA MERE BINA………MERE LIYE………OuchConfusedOuchConfusedShockedCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCry….. JEE SAKTII HAI!.............. ………….while naku just wanted the time to stand still……….and dutta be with her like that forever…………….the song plays in the Background…………

 

Rishtey bharosey………chahat yakeen………

Inn sab kaa daaman abb chaak hai……….

Samjhey the haathon mein hai zameen………..

Mutthhii jo kholi bas rakh hai………..

Dil mein yeh shor hai kyun……….

Imaan kamzor hain kyun………..

Nazuk yeh dorr hai kyun…………

Yeh honsla kaise jhukey…………

Yeh arzu kaisey rukey…………..CryEmbarrassed

 

Here's the link to a VM I made on the song…………..Hope u all like it…………..Smile

 

 

 

Naku opens her eyes and finds the room empty………………and she looks around frantically unable to see dutta anywhere………..she screams---saab…….SAAB!................

 

Naku wakes up with a start shouting out----SAABBBBBBBBB>…………….OuchShocked

 

 

U see naku wakes up……….and finds herself in bed………..baji and madhu r by her side as a doc examines her…………..

 

 

 

FLASHBACK---

 

Naku was down with high fever and baji and madhu had found her on the ground clinging upto dutta's picture when they had entered the room after consoling ayi sahib……………..

 

 

They had seen naku running  a high temperature and as madhu called up the doc baji picked up naku and took her to dutta's bed…………….Ouch

 

 

In the room u see the doc gives some medicine and leaves………..(no its not me…………I am busy doing dutta kaa ilaaj………….ok bad joke sorry………….)…………….

 

 

And as baji goes out to leave the doc madhu says----Bhabhi……….aap……..aapko khud ko sambhalnaa hogaa…………

 

Naku remains silent………….and when madhu sees naku wasn't saying a word she leaves from there…………..Confused

 

 

Outside she cries as baji comes saying----kya hua madhu?..........

 

Madhu says----Baji mujhse bhabhi kii yeh halat nahiin dekhii jaa rahii………….wohh………wohh kuch bol hii nahiin rahii………….wohh manna hii nahiin chahtii kii abb………ABB BHAIYA HUMAREY BEECH NAHIIN RAHEY!...............

 

 

Baji and madhu look at naku from outside worried for her well being…………they had lost dutta and noww they didn't want anything to happen to naku at all……………

 

 

Its late in the night………..Naku is still silent looking into emptiness…………she recalls how when she was in bed ailing after being shot in the arm…….Dutta had walked upto her and pushed the tray close to her as she found it difficult to reach upto it………………OuchEmbarrassed

 

 

Naku gets out of  the bed………..and feels a little dizzy……….she was still having fever and was weak…………she takes support of the nearby table lest she would have fallen………….and her eyes fall on dutta's photoframe kept by her bedside and she takes it in her hands and says sternly…..ek dum shernii mode mein-----MAIN JAANTI HAI SAAB………..KII AAPKO KUCH NAHIIN HUA………Cry

 

With the pic she walks down the stairs into the hall and reaches ganeshji's idol and says------Bappa…………jo kuch tunney karnaa tha kar diyaa……….LEKIN MAIN HAAR MAANNEY WALON MEIN SE NAHIIN HAI!.............MAIN USS KALAVATII KO NAHIIN JEETNEY DEGII!.............MAIN JAANTI HAI MERE SAAB KUCH NAHIIN HUA!............AUR ABB MAIN JAAYEGI………UNHEIN DHOOND KAR ISS GHAR MEIN AUR APNI ZINDAGI MEIN WAPAS LAAYEGI!.................(she keeps dutta's picture at bappa's feet and says………….)………AUR JAB TAK MAIN SAAB KE PAAS NAHIIN PAHONCHTII>………….TUJHEY UNKII RAKSHA KARNII PADEGI!.................Clap

 

 

With that naku leaves PN alone…………ill and weak………..but with a sheer determination to find her love…………and save him from all kinds of trouble and hurt………………Clap

 

Kaisa lagaa?............Smile

 

 

Jaldii bataao…………….Smile



Edited by MishalLeoSheeba - 06 January 2011 at 5:14am

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