Shanak - Sunny OS (Part 3) Pg - 9 - Page 3

EEK! I get to join the friends circle! Yay! *runs around in circles*

Zzzzzzeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeennnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn God...loved it loved it loved it and please please post the 2nd part soonnnnnnn...caaaannnnnnttttt wait to read it soon...You have written what most of us are thinking and want to see...so..get down to writing ....😆

Continue Karo please.....

itz lovely!

pls Zennn...dont be so modest ha...it was awesome....and agli part jaldi...warna...u know na...😆.....hum sare tumpar tut parenge...

thanks guys! i am over whelmed, really. thank you so much. part 2 pakka coming tomorrow😳

zenn that was amazing yaar!Very good! and i am SO glad you kept to the emotional bit of it as well, when shaan felt like hugging khanak, when khanak's eyes welled up with tears it was just perfect! See this is what i want! i want the emotional bit to remain because like i said sunny's look alike coming in is huge! way to go zenn! very well wrtten! :)

will come back and read soon...piramise

@beenz

thanks hun! means a lot coming from the OS queen!🤗

it was actually my intention to make it a little emotional. i love intense shanak!

lol what is this the OS queen?! i promise no one has ever called me that before!😲😆 aww everyone is equally good yaar! i was inspired to write through the ones i read here too so how can i be a queen?lol! no seriously zenn i really liked it! i was actually thinking of something like this anyway, you know where shanak's eyes would meet and it would be like an unspoken thing! this is truly what i would call intense good going yaar! i'm so glad you wrote! :D