Life partner Michi ff (Page 9)

jeb1 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 3:21am | IP Logged
Great update jasmine
plz continue soon

111priyan IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 9:32am | IP Logged
nice part . Part 9 was good , but Part 10 was very short.

Mohini's character is quite  suspicious, not able to understand what's cooking in her brain, is she really that much nice or u have planed something. Continue soon.
jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Pt 11

Mohini knocks the door:Milind!
Milind removes his arm from Prachi.
MILIND:This mom....
He is irritated.Prachi smiles. Milind opens the door.
M:Tomorrow there is Holi's puja.Get ready early.So sleep soon.
MILIND:Yes mom.
Mohini goes away.Milind closes the door and looks at Prachi.
MILIND:This mom is sometimes...
P:We need to sleep early.Because we have to make arrangements for the puja.I will change and come.

The next day...
Puja is going on in the house.Prachi puts a gopi on Milind's forehead with saffron and gives prasad to Milind.

All are celebrating holi.They all throw colour on each other.
Milind goes near Prachi and puts colour on her face slowly.They both look deeply into each other eyes.
Prachi thinks:I like Milind.May be i love him.But when he touched me now i felt very different.I felt secure.
Milind smiles at her.She also smiles.They both hold hands together and smile.
Mohini:Milind and Prachi...come..pose for a photograph.
They both stand together before the camera.
M:Milind...stand close to Prachi.
He is shy:What are you telling mom?
M:Stand close to her.
Milind stands close to her.They both are shy.Ronit takes their photograph.

It's raining...Prachi is standing out with a smile.Milind goes out looking for her.
MILIND:What are you doing here at night?All are sleeping.
P:Rain is so lovely.I love it.So cool.
She is dancing in the rain.Milind feels nice seeing her wet in the rain.He goes near her and pulls her close to her.
Prachi can't move.They both can't utter a word.Their eyes speak to each other.
MILIND:I love you Prachi.It's time to break the distance between us.
She is shy:I love you too.
Milind sings the song 'Zindagi Do Pal Ki...' while becoming intimate with Prachi.

The next morning...
Prachi is drying her hair.She sees a rose flower on the bed.
P:Who kept this here?Milind?
She hears somebody entering the room.She looks at him.That is Milind. She is shy to face him.So she tries to go out of the room.But he holds her hand.
She is shy:Leave my hand Milind.
She removes her hand from him and runs away.Milind smiles.

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OptimisticEyes IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 10:12am | IP Logged
Beautiful update jasmine.
plz cont soon.
thanks for the pm.
111priyan IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 10:16am | IP Logged
wow nice part loved it , really Mohini has got a great timing. Thumbs Up
good work very nice ClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
Cutie_Pri IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 10:40am | IP Logged
Thanx 4 dis Beautiful part Jass Hug
So at last MiChi r husband n wife in true sense WinkEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Luved d cute MiChi moments hope dey remain lyk dis Tongue

Plzz do cont. soon luv d way d story is progressing Big smile
jeb1 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 11:55am | IP Logged
very nice update jasmine
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 9:14pm | IP Logged
nice update
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