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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow loved it , very nice  continue soon im sure Milind will make her fall in love with him all over again.
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Life Partner Part 28





KT is walking along the road.A lorry is coming behind her.She does'nt know that.Suddenly someone pulls her to a side.The lorry passes.She looks at him.He is Manthan.
KT:What is wrong with you?
M:Again blaming me?You have to be blamed.Where is your mind's concentration?Don't dream and walk on the road.If i had not pulled you to this side that lorry would have hit you and you would have died.
KT:If i die...?
M:If you die...how can you score good marks?How can you beat me in every competition?I need a strong competitor every time.
KT loses her control and laughs.Manthan also joins.Suddenly they stop laughing and get drowned in each other's eyes.
KT:Why are you staring at me like this Manthan?
Manthan is embarassed:I don't know.Why did you stare at my eyes?I became shy.
Again they both laugh.
It starts raining.They both dance.Manthan sings looking at her:
'In dino...'{Life in Metro}.

Anirudh comes with tickets:Surprise!I brought honeymoon tickets for Milind and Prachi.To Paris...
Mohini:Wow!That's nice.
Milind is happy.
Prachi is dull:I'm not in a mood.
They all become dull.
M:Why?
P:I don't know why.
A:When you go to Paris,your mood will change.
Ganga:Prachi Bhabhi...never trust your mother in law's words.She is double faced.Do you know how much she tortured you?
M:Stop it Ganga.After seeing you i realized Prachi's value.I regret for what i did to her.Why you both are here now?You both had gone away.Right?
G:Just came to attend Milind Bhaiyya's and Prachi bhabhi's wedding.Because we both love them.
P:Ganga...i don't remember whether Mohini aunty has hurt me or not.But now she is very sweet to me.So i love her.
Mohini hugs Prachi.
A:Have fun in Paris.
P:Ok.But you all should come with us.
Ronit:How is it possible?It your honeymoon trip.How can we come?
P:Family tour is more fun.Please...don't say no.It is my come back.Right?So please don't say no.
M:Ok.

They all go to Paris and travel all over the place.They stay in an Indian hotel.
Milind takes out the yellow saree which Prachi when he went to see her.He remembers that she had worn the same saree for their first date.
MILIND:What if this saree helps to remind Prachi of the past?
Prachi enters the room.
MILIND:Will you wear this saree to the dining hall?
P:Ok.
MILIND:I will wait in the dining hall.

Milind is waiting in the dining hall for Prachi.Milind sees Prachi coming.She looks beautiful in the yellow saree.
He gives a flower bouquet to Prachi.She takes it with a sweet smile.
P:You love me this much?
MILIND:Yes,i love you from the bottom of my heart.
P:I love you too Milind.
Milind can't control his emotions.He takes her in his arms.
They both dance to the song 'Chupke se..'{Saathiya}.
Suddenly he realizes that it was only a dream.
Prachi comes.
Milind gives her the bouquet.She takes it.
P:Thanks.
MILIND:Shall we have food?
P:Ok.
They both eat food with silence.

Virani house...
Parvati does puja.She gives prasad to everyone.She is shocked to see an uninvited guest at the back.He extends his arm for prasad.
She walks towards him with the prasad and gives it to him.Bhoomi is shocked.Om and Manthan are wondered who he is.
Par:After puja i saw you.That shows something good.Who are you?
Om:Parvati...you don't know him?I thought you invited him for puja.
P:No.
O:Who are you?How did you come here?
He:I'm Joydeep.I'm an unvited guest.But i hope for the coming pujas i will be invited.I hope i will be blessed to be the son in law of this family.
Om,Parvati and Manthan are shocked.

 

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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update jasmine
pls continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update jasmine.
plz update soon.
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wow great going, honeymoon turned into family tour, oh god i think Prachi might be scared of going all alone with Milind. Bechara Milind still dreaming.

Virani family has an uninvited son-in law? And their daughter in law is all ready to enter in there house, and SIN, good continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Life Partner Part 29




Om:What are you saying?
Joydeep:Please don't misunderstand me.I'm Bhoomi's lecturer.I would like to marry her.
Everyone stares at Bhoomi.
Manthan:You hid such a big thing from us sis?
Bhoomi is nervous.
O:I just don't believe this.
J:Please don't blame Bhoomi.We are not seeing each other.But we both know that we have feelings for each other.But we won't take a step forward without your permission.
Om becomes calm.
J:I'm an orphan.So i consider you both as my parents.When Parvati aunty gave us prasad i felt that my mother is giving me prasad.
Parvati and Om smile.
Om goes near Joydeep and pats him.
O:I liked your nature.I'm happy to accept you as my son in law.
Joydeep and Bhoomi are surprised.Parvati and Manthan smile.
Joydeep and Bhoomi touch the feet of Om and Parvati and get their blessings.
Joydeep and Bhoomi move to another room.
They both are shy to face each other.
Bhoomi breaks the ice.
B:I never thought that you would come here.
J:How can i not come when i love you sincerely?
He holds her hand.She is shy.Slowly she looks at his face.He smiles.She blushes.

Bhoomi rings up Milind.
B:Ji jeeju!How is the second honeymoon?
MILIND:Going nice.
B:I'm not able to contact Prachi.Her cell is switched off.
MILIND:We are so busy that she could not charge her mobile.My battery is also low.
B:There is a happy news.I want to tell Prachi soon.I have no patience.
MILIND:But Prachi is in the room.I'm in the hotel garden.You tell me what's the news.I will convey the message to her.
Bhoomi tells him everything.
MILIND:Wow!Congrats Bhoomi.I will tell this to Prachi now.
He cuts the phone and goes to the room.He sees Ganga with Prachi in the room.
G:Good thing that you came Milind bhaiyya.There is something exciting for us.The hotel people have arranged a dance hall for us.Tonight lots of couples are coming.We shall go.Ok?
MILIND:Ok.
G:Prachi bhabhi...please don't wear saree for the dance.
Prachi smiles.
G:You wear a gown.
P:But i don't have any gown.
G:No problem.I will give you a gown.Black is the theme.We will wear a black gown.
P:Ok.
G:Come to my room.I will dress you.
P:Ok.
Prachi goes with Ganga.
MILIND:I will tell her after the party.

Ganga ties Prachi's hair in a stylish manner.She places a necklace on her neck.
G:Now you look so stylish.
P:I have felt like wearing a gown.But i never thought that it will be possible. Thanks a lot Ganga.If you were not here,i would not have been able to dress well.You made me beautiful.
Ganga smiles:Nothing like that bhabhi.You are already beautiful.I just helped you to dress up.
Prachi smiles.

Anirudh,Ronit and Milind are dressed in black.They are waiting in the dance hall.
A:In this age also Mohini takes a lot of time to dress up.
Ronit and Milind laugh.
R:Our wives are not bad.They are crazy about dressing up.
They laugh again.
Mohini,Ganga,Prachi and Mayank enter the hall together.
A:Finally they have come.
Mohini has worn a shining black saree and diamond ornaments while Ganga and Prachi are in their black gown.Mayank looks cute in his black outfit.
Milind can't take his eyes off Prachi.
His eyes sing:
Dil Kyun Yeh Mera Shor Kare
Idhar Nahin Udhar Nahin
Teri Or Chale..{Kites}

Mayank walks towards a one year old white girl who looks sweet and bubbly in her black frock.They both play.They all laugh seeing it.

Mohini:Come Anirudhji..we will dance.
A:My God!In this age?I can't.
M:What nonsense!We used to dance a lot at parties when we were young.That time also you were struggling hard to dance.
Anirudh laughs.
A:Anyways we will dance again.
M:Really?Surprise!
They both go to the dance floor and start dancing.Beautiful instrumental music is going on.
Ronit takes Ganga to the dance floor and get engrossed in dancing.
Milind does'nt know how to take Prachi to the dance floor.They both are confused.
Ronit and Ganga see it.
G:They both are so narrow minded.They are shy to dance before others.
R:We have to do something.
They both go near them.
R:What are you guys doing in the dance hall?We are here to dance.Not to stand simply.
MILIND:I can't dance..you know that.
R:No escape.
Ronit and Ganga push Milind and Prachi to the dance floor.Ronit and Ganga start dancing again.
Slowly Milind puts his arms on Prachi's shoulder and hip.She is uncomfortable.
So she runs away.
MILIND:Prachi!
Milind follows her.
Prachi runs downstrairs.Her leg slips and she falls down.
MILIND:Prachi!
Her head is covered with blood.Milind goes to her and places her head on his lap.She is unconscious.
He sheds tears.

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Posted: 13 years ago
me first. yo prachi hit her head badly hopefuly she will get her memory back.. nice part dear continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Jass 🤗
Srry was out on a mini holiday so cud not comment 😳😳
Well I luv d way d story has progressed....
Mohini atlast knw d value of a DIL lyk Prachi (courtesy Ganga 😆)
Bhoomi n Manthan found der lyf partner 😳 n Chi is atlast wid Milind n hopefully aft dis fall she will get her memory back 😛

Thanx a lot hun n plzz do cont. 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanks a lot friends 4 reading my ff.If u can plz write ur fav charac & fav scene & y u liked it

 

Life Partner Part 30


Prachi is admitted to the hospital.All are weeping in the hospital.
Milind:Why always this is happening to us?
Ronit:Control yourself bhaiyya.

Parvati sheds tears.Bhoomi goes near her.
B:Why are you upset mom?
P:I'm thinking of Prachi.I hope she is fine.
B:I also hope so.I'm scared of Mohini aunty.You remember..once you pampered Mayank.She became angry and even said that you have no right over him as you have no blood relationship with him.She said she is the only grandmother Mayank has and you are not her grand mother.
P:Yes.I hope Mohini has changed and she understands our feelings now.
B:Anyways Milind jeeju will take care of Prachi.He is more careful now.

After Prachi's surgery...
The doctor comes out:God has heard your prayers.The operation is successful.
They are very excited.

Prachi opens her eyes slowly.She sees Milind.She smiles.
P:Milind!
She holds his arm.
Milind is surprised.
MILIND:Prachi!
P:I'm saved?When the light fell on my head i thought i'm finished.
Milind is surprised.
He thinks:Prachi remembers everything now.God..thank you.You heard my prayer.
P:God does'nt want to separate you from me.That's why he saved me.
Milind smiles:Yes.
He caresses her hand.
MILIND:A lot more happened.
P:What?
Milind tells her everything which happened after her light accident.
She is shocked.

They return home.
Mohini:Milind and Prachi...please stop at the door.I will bring aarthi.
She brings arthi and receives them.
M:This is the real beginning.
Milind and Prachi enter the house with a smile.
Anirudh:I will give this happy news to Om now.
He rings up Om:There is a happy news.Prachi remembers her past now.
Om is surprised:Really?How?
A:That's a story.To celebrate this happiness we are keeping a party in the evening.Come ok.
O:Sure.
Om puts the phone down.
O:Parvati...Bhoomi...Manthan...come soon.
They all come.
P:What's the matter?So excited.
O:Prachi got her memory back.
All are surprised.
P:What?Really?
O:Yes.
P:God heard my prayer.

Party...
Om,Parvati,Bhoomi,Manthan and KT come.Prachi runs to them.
P:Mom..i remember everything now.
Parvati hugs her.
Prachi sees KT.She can't recognise her.
Par:Prachi..this is the new member of our family.Manthan loves her.
P:KT?
KT is surprised.
KT:How did you know my name?
P:I have not seen you.So i could'nt recognise you.But when i realized that you are Manthan's beloved i could make out your name.Because the name which always comes out of Manthan's mouth is KT.He calls you KT though your name is Milindtulsi.
KT looks at Manthan.They both smile at each other.

Milind and Prachi talk to the guests.They are shocked to see Ayesha and Rakesh entering the house.
MILIND:Why did she come again?What does she want?
Ayesha goes near them:Don't worry..i don't have any intention to trouble you both.I just came to wish you both a happy married life.
They are relieved.
A:I'm sorry Prachi.I hurt you a lot.I even forgot that we both are same blood.
P:It's ok.You are my sister.
A:You are so sweet.
They both hug.
Milind,Om,Parvati,Bhoomi,Rakesh and Manthan smile seeing this.
R:I'm happy that both my daughters are together now.
A:We both will be always together dad.
Everyone becomes happy.

The atmosphere becomes romantic with a romantic song:
Surili akhiyon wale, suna hai teri akhiyon se
Behti hai neendein aurr neendon mein sapne
Kabhi to kinaro pe, utar mere sapno se
Aaja zameen pe aurr mil ja kahin pe
Mil ja kahin .. aa ..
Mil ja kahin, samey se pareh, samey se pareh
Mil ja kahin, tu bhi akhiyon se kabhi meri akhiyon ki sunn...{Veer}.
Milind and Prachi forget themselves and dance looking deeply into each other's eyes.Manthan-KT and Ronit-Ganga look very cute and sweet while dancing together.Om-Parvati and Anirudh-Mohini are also dancing.
Bhoomi is waiting for someone.A cute guy arrives.Bhoomi goes to him and holds his arms with a sweet smile.She takes him to the dance floor and dances along with him.Prachi sees it.
P:Who is that?
MILIND:Look at them carefully.Don't you think that they love each other?He is Joydeep.Bhoomi's lover.
Prachi is surprised.She smiles.
P:But she did'nt tell me anything about him.
MILIND:When we were in Paris she had tried to contact you.But she did'nt get you.So she phoned and told me about Joydeep.
P:Really?I'm so happy that my sister got someone who loves her.
Suddenly she sees Ayesha standing alone and watching them dance.
P:I wish Ayesha also got someone who loves her sincerely.
Shiv goes near Ayesha:Shall i give you a company?
Ayesha looks at him.
He extends his arm.She holds his arm slowly.They go to the dance floor and dance.
Prachi and Milind smile seeing Shiv and Ayesha together.


The end

Edited by jasminerahul - 13 years ago