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Life partner Michi ff - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update Jasmine..
plz cont soon..
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww d HM was soo cute 😳 Hope dey take d 2nd step of der relationship soon 😉😳
Mohini....i guess she is jst acting to b xtra sweet wid Prachi wid sum evil thoughts in mind 😕

Anyways luved d ending plzz cont. soon 😳😳😳
Thnx hun 4 dis beautiful part n d PM 🤗

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Great update jasmine
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nice part . Part 9 was good , but Part 10 was very short.

Mohini's character is quite  suspicious, not able to understand what's cooking in her brain, is she really that much nice or u have planed something. Continue soon.
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Pt 11

 
Mohini knocks the door:Milind!
Milind removes his arm from Prachi.
MILIND:This mom....
He is irritated.Prachi smiles. Milind opens the door.
M:Tomorrow there is Holi's puja.Get ready early.So sleep soon.
MILIND:Yes mom.
Mohini goes away.Milind closes the door and looks at Prachi.
MILIND:This mom is sometimes...
P:We need to sleep early.Because we have to make arrangements for the puja.I will change and come.
MILIND:Ok.

The next day...
Puja is going on in the house.Prachi puts a gopi on Milind's forehead with saffron and gives prasad to Milind.

All are celebrating holi.They all throw colour on each other.
Milind goes near Prachi and puts colour on her face slowly.They both look deeply into each other eyes.
Prachi thinks:I like Milind.May be i love him.But when he touched me now i felt very different.I felt secure.
Milind smiles at her.She also smiles.They both hold hands together and smile.
Mohini:Milind and Prachi...come..pose for a photograph.
They both stand together before the camera.
M:Milind...stand close to Prachi.
He is shy:What are you telling mom?
M:Stand close to her.
Milind stands close to her.They both are shy.Ronit takes their photograph.

Night....
It's raining...Prachi is standing out with a smile.Milind goes out looking for her.
MILIND:What are you doing here at night?All are sleeping.
P:Rain is so lovely.I love it.So cool.
She is dancing in the rain.Milind feels nice seeing her wet in the rain.He goes near her and pulls her close to her.
Prachi can't move.They both can't utter a word.Their eyes speak to each other.
MILIND:I love you Prachi.It's time to break the distance between us.
She is shy:I love you too.
Milind sings the song 'Zindagi Do Pal Ki...' while becoming intimate with Prachi.

The next morning...
Prachi is drying her hair.She sees a rose flower on the bed.
P:Who kept this here?Milind?
She hears somebody entering the room.She looks at him.That is Milind. She is shy to face him.So she tries to go out of the room.But he holds her hand.
She is shy:Leave my hand Milind.
She removes her hand from him and runs away.Milind smiles.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update jasmine.
plz cont soon.
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wow nice part loved it , really Mohini has got a great timing. 👍🏼
good work very nice 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Thanx 4 dis Beautiful part Jass 🤗
So at last MiChi r husband n wife in true sense 😉😳😳
Luved d cute MiChi moments hope dey remain lyk dis 😛

Plzz do cont. soon luv d way d story is progressing 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice update jasmine
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nice update
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