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We Can Be The Best! (MG) # 1 (Page 88)

_BlackPearl_ IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 6:42am | IP Logged

its nearly 20 days since u have updated thisCry

di.........u forgot abt dis????

..........waitingDay Dreaming 

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 6:59am | IP Logged

Edited by dia_ditz - 16 March 2011 at 7:09am

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 9:06am | IP Logged

Part 19

this one is for dia ditz
NT and dev left with Sunaina on Sunday; DM accompanied them as with a small child it would be difficult to manage initially.

Mumbai welcomed them with a shower, the day they arrived it was drizzling and the view was poetic, they had renovated a bungalow which Pratham had purchased years back,

it was a simple two story structure facing sea (I don't know much about Mumbai), it was well furnished the decorators have done a good job at such a short notice;  
on the first day the couple went to explore the market as to see where they can get what; DM insisted on staying back with the small cuddle of joy.

The first week went by settling down, renovating the office space which once Dev had purchased as investment point of view; he had placed Ads in the papers and interviewed many; soon he selected a few and started his first project that was of renovating a existing local train station at Navi Mumbai.


Mean while Vikrant returned from his honey moon and started working on the details and project reports for the London office;
Dev has asked him to contact few people regarding the upcoming projects; while at the same time he helped Maan settle down in the Delhi office.

Meera was too exited about all this, she was not able to come in terms with the fact that Maan changed so much;

she along with Rajji left no chance to tease him; he in turn just smiled as usual. As Meera was going to leave the country soon, Rajji was quite worried she pleaded to her to help her

Meera: what help you need

R: Meera, you know what I want?
M: what?
R: now that you will also go and that stupid bro of yours
M: hey don't call my bro stupid
R: why not? I helped you with Vikrant and you are so mean
M: oh! Say like this na, so you want to become my Bhabhi
R: umm (blushed)
M: you know how to blush also
R: Meera
M: ok dear I'll talk to my parents today.
Meera talked to her parents and they readily agreed. Soon they called Handa family.
Handa family came the next day and it was fixed that after 6 months Yash and Rajji will get married.
They also came to know that NT and DM had both left for Mumbai and soon Meera will also go,
so it was decided that Geet will not live in the KM but in a apartment with Rajji.
Rajji joined in some office as a finance manager cum associate. Her office was near the KC building. Mohinder purchased a apartment near the office so that it was convenient for the girls.

Maan was out of town when Geet shifted in the apartment and when he came back to find that she went away without telling him he was annoyed.

To every one he was sweet but with her he was very possessive. He did not like the idea of not living under the same roof; she had become a part of her life that he never thought that some day she will have to go. He has no right on her.

Geet was very worried as to how Maan will take her shifting to the apartment that to when he was not around;

tomorrow was her first day as his secretary and everything started on a wrong note. He was so excited about the whole idea of her working with him, he will have her with him 24X7 but what will he do now? How will he react?

Rajji had told her that he was back and Meera told that he was in a black mood.


Geet retired in her room calling it a night; she locked the room and called him. He did not pick up her call; she sends him SMS but no reply she tried again and again.

Maan angrily looked at the mobile, it was 100th missed call, and he was annoyed that she left without informing him and now she is calling him non stop;

with every call his anger increased.

There Geet was hell worried; her eyes were swelling with continuous crying and her thumb ached due to redialing but she did not stop and tried.


On the 150th call he picked up
M: bolo
G: Maan, are you angry?
M: no, I am happy
G: then why were you not taking my calls
M: I had slept
G: did I disturb you?
M: yes
G: I am sorry
M: for what?
G: for disturbing you
M: why are you calling at this hour?
G; just like that
M: Miss Geet Handa, from now on I am your boss and behave like a
employee and stop giving missed calls to your boss (he was very angry, so angry that he did not even realize that she was crying)
G: sorry sir, in near future I'll remember my limits
M: you better remember your position (he puts his hand on his heart)
G: good night sir
M: good night (and cuts the call) Geet your position is here in my heart.
Why did you go away? Why?
Geet cried hard and tried to sleep


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Edited by smj1977 - 02 April 2011 at 7:58am

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Krishna_Sourav IF-Addictz

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 9:14am | IP Logged
Brilliant part. loved it.
maan is so possessive abt geet.
geet is crying and try to manaofy maan but maan is not being THE MSK.
uff kya gussa hainEmbarrassed.
but poor maaneet both r sad and hurt.
hmm boss and secretary.
update soonLOL.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 17 March 2011 at 9:29am

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 9:15am | IP Logged
nice update.. pls continue soon..

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Krishna_Sourav IF-Addictz

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 9:30am | IP Logged
updated my comments on page 88

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ninavi IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 9:33am | IP Logged
Confused yahaaa pe bhi Sad update .....huh......Dead
bt looking frwd to der office scene Day Dreaming 
150 calls OMG Shocked
ufff yeh Maan kitnaa bhaav khataa hai .......Wink
cont soooooon
thnx for d PM Hug
an yeah enjoyyyy ur holidays ..mannet express se pata chalaa Big smile

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