Fan Fictions


Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

We Can Be The Best! (MG) # 1 (Page 38)

smj1977.shruti IF-Rockerz

Joined: 07 October 2010
Posts: 8090

Posted: 31 January 2011 at 1:48am | IP Logged

Part 11


NT was quite busy. She was tensed and at the same time was thankful she decided to tell Dev after the presentation. In all this fuss she completely forgot to tell DM about them.

Maan has slept being very tired and so had Geet, she woke up late may be at 9 when she was about to have her breakfast,

she heard GEEEEEEEETTTTT she was shocked and ran to Maan's room,
he was in pain, his eyes were red and was struggling to keep them open,
she realized that he might have slept with his lenses and now they might have stuck in his eye balls.
She approached him and asked him to calm down then took out an eye drop from the medicine kit laid him down and put the drops in his eyes then brought eye cleaning cups and cleaned his eyes,
 and then slowly helped him out of the lenses, once they were out he relaxed the pain seemed to have disappeared but still he had difficulty in opening his eyes,
he held her wrist tightly, she sat on his side stroking his hair and speaking some soothing words.


In the office


The presentation was good or say fantastic while the presentation was going on she was observing the reactions of all the involved employees, she short listed two who were looking disturbed; one was Yash Bakshi and other was Sameera Kapoor, both were trainees former being the management trainee and later intern architect.

Yash can't be the culprit as the Bakshi's delt with works not related to the KC, the project KC bid's for have none of their concerns and apart from this he was Meera's brother so Khurana's and Bakshi's are relatives .

Now remains Sameera, a daughter of Kapoor builders who in past had bad experiences with KC, Dev once held them publicly for using low grade materials in constructing a school. And also they have gone to bid against them in this project.

Sameera had kept the fact of being a Kapoor daughter from them but NT got to know this when she once went visited her college for some guest lecture and a teacher there told her.

When Sameera joined KC, she had a huge crush on Vikrant and was quite disappointed to learn that he was already committed to Yash's sister.

 On their way back to the mansion NT told Dev about the sabotage and how timely the work was completed, she kept Maan away from all this as Geet has personally requested that he may not like the sudden praise by his brother he did all this to help her and not to be admired by his brother, he will get many chances in future to prove himself.


NT also told Dev about Sameera; on listening this, Dev became very angry and decide that in coming future before hiring any trainee or intern they will do the background check and also they will not let the trainees deal with important projects.


One day,


Very less time was left for the marriage , the invitation cards have arrived,

everyone praised the design and on knowing it was designed by Maan, the praise raised hundred folds,
but Maan was not looking forward for this he only wanted to know how she felt about it, did she like it ? Or not?
But where was she? He quietly went upstairs and found her sitting in the balcony of her room;
she had the card in her hand. She was praising it, she hugged the card as if hugging a person,
he stood there watching her; she sensed him and blushed and kept the card on the window sill.

He went near her and cupped her face, her eyes were twinkling, he liked when her smile reached her eyes.

She put her hand on his chest and with her other hand she traced a line on his cheek, he was blown by her tender touch,
he lifted her and made her sit on the window sill and himself sat on the chair which was occupied by her,
he then rested his head on her lap, she stroked his hair, they sat like this for a long time lost in each other, time seemed to have stopped.
pls comment
silent readers pls hit the like button it takes just a second
I hope you all like it please hit  the LIKE BUTTON if so
and please leave COMMENTS
part 12

Edited by smj1977 - 03 February 2011 at 6:46am

The following 140 member(s) liked the above post:

ssssmarsnehag10nams4newmoviefansvahc123psruthidpurvainlwgeetchintushilpathuri123shanmannehavashicukishmishimCandy_jsgeetozramavishLoveforever18sweetmelonneetugarg123Hannan454gagsyzazoy12krishna.asmi123Deepi18dancydreamerannie03kirannaryanihemvb--love--holyangelmaaneetfan123avantika_singhbhakbhartifanpoojaaddisGemmTinkJiammishra1diyachillKawaljeet1samaira39piyushiPaloma_Dannie.shonasoniaz121preet.harmanKashish9687annbellmkd.70its_meDiva7NH1971nai1311_yspcutemishtisupernasahusessyapril12bina_aangelwords-eiya-mishtibstar_777sree.maneetamalu123trishapcharlie1950Nirjhor105doosheekamaaneetkimeetmyedward12nan_10Lakshmi86RukhluvMaanshivangi783Miss-RizSaJan-SaJanchiki143vidu87KinshukKiDewanicyum321-shamima-divya22puthdreamy4everheermeherluvabbybabyRocks.Dharashining_moonninavigangesegbMsMovieloversheetalvasaMaaneet4eveShimmerrthe_chosen_oned_sonianats0101_wallflower__Jyothi_umamaaneetpaponeconRamhari-Veritaserum-sweet cherryshruti_luvs_mskambbihaKrishnaluv94mrk-1sanu3108shah10--Ratna--rsroopalimaanseepreethiaVSai2008Shalvesun-naaaaaaaaa..hinal..naddiya26SahSahmitzi11pop77janu_2006swetha106n6s6k6i6r6a6n6kahkashansakinaTyrosanum23SheenGciantabby999.hayaat.felicitysmoak.kirti_fijimysteriousmilli-Mrinalini-Janakivallavspvdsingh24Donnaa

heermeher IF-Dazzler

Joined: 14 April 2009
Posts: 2891

Posted: 31 January 2011 at 1:55am | IP Logged
now thats turning out to be interesting they are really better half oops me first hurray!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Edited by heermeher - 31 January 2011 at 1:56am

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


rsroopali IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 18 June 2010
Posts: 15210

Posted: 31 January 2011 at 1:59am | IP Logged
wowwwwwwwwwwww awesomeeeeeeeeeee
maan n geet luv eachother
time for a partyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


storytellerm IF-Dazzler

Joined: 25 December 2008
Posts: 4735

Posted: 31 January 2011 at 2:02am | IP Logged
so good yaar
loved it

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


-shamima- IF-Dazzler

Joined: 20 August 2010
Posts: 2883

Posted: 31 January 2011 at 2:11am | IP Logged
Awe these two are just perfect and ooh two new entries hash and sameera hmm and like how geet knows everything about maan and advises NT on what to do so sweet and awe loved how he looked for her to know if she liked the card and I loved the end the little gestures they showed each other was really sweet awe I must say again they're a perfect couple Day Dreaming anyways greag updae and csn't wait to read more Smile

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


Miss-Riz Goldie

Joined: 25 July 2010
Posts: 1033

Posted: 31 January 2011 at 2:13am | IP Logged
The update was awesome...can't wait for ur next update :)

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


Janakivallav IF-Addictz

Joined: 04 March 2009
Posts: 59973

Posted: 31 January 2011 at 2:21am | IP Logged
awesome part. loved it.
 maaneet relationship is growing nowDay Dreaming.
I guess sameera is the culprit.
update soon.

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


mrk-1 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 30 July 2010
Posts: 8843

Posted: 31 January 2011 at 2:33am | IP Logged
awsome one story started

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 20 21

Author: Chulbuli_Annu   Replies: 164   Views: 19902

Chulbuli_Annu 164 19902 11 May 2011 at 2:47am by ginny09
Best Friend updated in page 70

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 67 68

Author: Janakivallav   Replies: 540   Views: 25977

Janakivallav 540 25977 14 December 2010 at 3:00am by dynamic_doll
MayUr ff- The Best Friend Lastpart Pg 141 (15/03)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 144 145

Author: myownarea   Replies: 1157   Views: 85303

myownarea 1157 85303 26 November 2010 at 12:35pm by .rumki.
best of the best(female)

Author: MagicalKash   Replies: 4   Views: 1878

MagicalKash 4 1878 25 November 2007 at 2:33pm by Patel 1993

Author: flute   Replies: 0   Views: 2763

flute 0 2763 16 May 2007 at 9:17pm by flute

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index