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We Can Be The Best! (MG) # 1 (Page 125)

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Posted: 25 April 2011 at 11:52pm | IP Logged
Hie Shruthi...
 
Just started reading your FF...nice conceptClap
 
24 episodes already...need to read it one by one carefully and patiently...shall I buy some time?Wink
 
 

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Posted: 27 April 2011 at 8:23am | IP Logged

PART 25

         

M: yes,

 
NT: that's enough of wishes for today; you people don't talk for 3 months and then start as if you never parted
 
M: NT
 
NT: lower your voice and give her the phone
 
M: lo
 
G: ji
 
NT: sweet heart he was rough na, it happens these men are just too much they first will pretend to be unreachable and then uncontrollable (she blushed, he raised his brows) in your right drawer there is an ointment; very effective the marks will go in a matter of just an hour
 
G: but
 
NT: Nakul kept it there, no more questions and apply it better ask him to as he has done the damage, give him the phone
 
M: um
 
NT: let her sleep she has 3 papers to go for she needs some sleep, bye TC
 
M: bye
 
M to G: why were you going all crimson?
 
She went and took out the ointment and gave him and pointed to her swelling face
 
M: she is fast and knows a lot but how it came here
 
G: Nakul
 
M: it seems it's only we who don't know
 
After applying the ointment the left telling her that he will drop her for the paper

 

(So this happens girls when you control your feelings for so long and this is what a much awaited ripened kiss is EmbarrassedSmileEmbarrassedSmileOuchWink )

 

He did not go to sleep and so was Geet counting her thoughts

 

Geet was hoping that he will come to her but she did not want him to come.

 
When she was sitting with her head resting against his she was not expecting that the things will go out of her hands; she could have refused when he asked her, but some where inside she wanted it to happen;
 
so for once she raised her guards and opened to him; but she will remember not to let it happen again; she will not give him any hopes for the future;
 
he deserved some one far better and far intelligent and she was just an ordinary girl not even good looking, people had always teased her for being like she was, yes she was ok her family just consoles her by saying she is beautiful;
 
but she knew well people don't make fun of beautiful girls;
 
no she will maintain a distance with him in coming future

 

 

Maan was all the while thinking should he go or should he not, but tomorrow is her day she needs at least his wishes;

 
so he just went he assured he will just wish her and come back, but when he saw her engrossed in that book how much he wanted to take that place;
 
he just went in and placed himself where the book was and leaned on her touching her forehead;
 
and when NT asked him to wish him he just remembered why he was there, and when he was about to he did not understand why he was asking her permission those large hazel eyes just swiped him from reality and when she said um he just went for the moment and did what he longed to do;
 
but Maan he told himself this should not happen again how embarrassing that even Nakul knew what he would do, was his attraction towards her that obvious;
 
he has to check himself in coming future;
 
she needs some one far better then him, some one who can protect her not some one who looks for her every time something goes wrong;
 
how can she have a future with a person who was till now even been hated by his own father;
 
 no, no this will not happen again; no he will maintain a distance with her in coming future.

 

 
what will happen exam and meeting  togather?
sorry but this will have to wait till nextOuch
 
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part 26 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1581943&TPN=135&#44405762

Edited by smj1977 - 06 July 2011 at 8:47am

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Posted: 27 April 2011 at 8:36am | IP Logged
shruthi sach mein tumhe maar doongi...
pehle maine socha ki geet satiya gayi hain aisey sochke aur ab tune maan ko bhi aise sochne per majboor kar diya ki woh geet ke liye teek nahin hain...
unn dono ke alawa sab ko patha hain they r made for each other and these 2 thinking otherwise...
babaji maan geet aur specially shruthi ko sudharo

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Posted: 27 April 2011 at 8:38am | IP Logged
U know wat they r idiots!!!

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Posted: 27 April 2011 at 8:41am | IP Logged
wow loved it yaar ...awsome one !!!! 
i hope they realise their strong feeling towards each other soon 

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Posted: 27 April 2011 at 8:42am | IP Logged

Y this distance between them????

wonderful update

loved it


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Posted: 27 April 2011 at 8:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by preethia

shruthi sach mein tumhe maar doongi...
pehle maine socha ki geet satiya gayi hain aisey sochke aur ab tune maan ko bhi aise sochne per majboor kar diya ki woh geet ke liye teek nahin hain...
unn dono ke alawa sab ko patha hain they r made for each other and these 2 thinking otherwise...
babaji maan geet aur specially shruthi ko sudharo
sweet a big kiss for you
just loved your comment
loved it
am laughing
dear you just forgot these twp are perfect DHAKKANS
they will not realise any thing
they are big idiots and stupids
that was the main aim of the FF
remem ber stupid MAANEET with a lot of prejuidces
 

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Posted: 27 April 2011 at 8:45am | IP Logged
Great!now both are thinking on same lines...then who will take their relation to next level? hope destiny is gonna play a big part now ofcourse with the help of NT and NakulSmile

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