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We Can Be The Best! (MG) # 1 (Page 11)

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Part 3

They both went through many books, finding their tastes quite similar;
they both have read almost every Sherlock Homes,
no Robin Cook left without notice,
Aghata Christie took them both to amazing adventure,
to their surprise even they liked Russian folk tales,
Sidney Sheldon was another milestone,
even Shakespeare found his way in their discussion,
they talked about Keats in English to Dinkar in Hindi,
The collection of design books took her attention,
she asked you like art and sketching, are you doing some course in it?
No, they are just in the collection I never read them (he lied)
But they seemed to be well read, all the McKay and Fletcher even space and form seem to be getting good attention
Are you an Architect?
No, but hoped to be,
Why? Something wrong, your family is quite forward they definitely would have allowed you
Its personal, why are you not in designing, wait you are Maan, Didi's classmate and friend, a MBA student, but why are you not in it I mean its your family business
I don't want to talk about it, mine's also personal
They stopped talking and concentrated on books, giving side glances to each other
NT came in after 2-3 hrs to find them both engrossed in some books,
she smiled, both have similar tastes,
God can't these two be ment for each other,
Maan deserves some one nice this girl seems nice and she's beautiful also.
She just stands their for sometime and notices that both of them look at each other now and then,
she starts getting ideas and thanks the stars,
then announces her presence.
Geet gets up and at the same time Maan also jerks to stand,
NT asks both of them to get ready as the function will start in an hour and tells Maan not to make any excuse as it's his bro's engagement with his friend so he should be there. 
Maan simply nods. Then the three leave the library.
Maan's room was opposite to the one where Geet was staying.
Every one gets ready and she was still there in her usual clothes,
her mother gave her 2 suits and asked her to choose one, she stood there not wanting to get ready,
party means crowd and crowd means insult, she closed her eyes, and prayed.
When she opened them found Maan looking at her.
He asked what happened,
she simply took the 2 suits and crossing the foyer came to his room, and said you are still not ready
You too are not
Oh I am only a guest but you are family, you should be there, before guests arrive to greet them
No one needs my greetings
Who said?
I know, forget it what are you doing with these dresses not going to get ready
I don't feel like but I know I have to
Confused, why don't you wear this white one
I will first tell me when are you getting ready? Having same problem selecting the clothes, let me help you and she enters his room

It was very neat and comfortable, she chose a white embroidered Kurt a with a chudidar, wear this

He just looked at her
She was about to move out when she noticed a lens packet on the dressing table, these are yours
Then why are you wearing specs?
I never wear them 
Ok then what are they doing here?
No, just NT kept them here assuming some day I will try them
Why not today?
Today is a big day, your friend getting engaged to your bro
Come on, are you afraid to wear them? Are they painful?
Don't know, I never tried
Ok I'll help you
You know how they are worn
You also wear
My aunt Brij uncle's wife she wears them and at times I help her, come on go wash your face I am waiting, and don't take long
I too have to get ready
She goes to her room keeps her dresses, washes her hands properly and comes back
Maan comes out of the wash room and
she instructs him to sit on the stool he sits and
she asks him to remove his glasses,
she smiles and gently places lens in his eyes. 
Then looks at him, he had most amazing eyes she ever witnessed.
He blinks his eyes feeling air gush in them, she comforts him and
says, tell me anytime you feel uncomfortable, and don't blink your eyes so much, else they may fall down, now change I too will go and get ready.
He was not sure why he did as she said; he ignored both NT and Dadi on this issue but today when she asked he readily agreed, why?
He just shrugged and went to change
Both came out of their respective rooms at the same time, smiled at each other and
asked with their eyes am I looking fine?
Yes answered the same way.

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part 4

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loved it
ur ff s amazing
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wow !! awsome yaar... am waiting to see both families reaction ...pls pls update soon!!

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awesome updates
loved them
waiting 2 see both family reaction
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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