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We Can Be The Best! (MG) # 1 (Page 104)

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 3:52am | IP Logged
wow great part
plz continue soon

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 3:54am | IP Logged
Shruti  Hug.......awwwesome update......loved everything about it.Heart.....Maan's love and concern.....he holding her in his arms .....not wanting to let go Day Dreaming......Geet's anger and hurt.....Maan's confession was beautiful......why did u end it there my dear......plz continue.....need to know Geet's  reaction.......thank u for the PM.....TC Smile

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 4:32am | IP Logged
wow  loved it so much yaar .....pls do update soon 

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 4:33am | IP Logged
lovely update....Clap

awww...maan nursing her back to health n holding her close....so sweeet....Day Dreaming

he is wondering when will he get to hold her like this again....arre just tell her...nt n daadi r already ready...u have to just talk to her abt it...

n he still hasnt told her that they will be moving in the outhouse...uske baad kya reaction hoga??

geet ko kitns accha laga hoga that the first thing she saw after opening her eyes is her maan...but bechari...kal ki baat yaad aa gayi....

he actually kissed her....Shocked...ye maan itna fast....or was it coz he wanted to feel that she is alright n wanted to show her that she is only his n he loves her....

loved the way he put her palm on his heart n said this is ur position... in my life.....

ye bell ko bhi jab hi bajna tha...Angry...abhi to mahaaul bana tha,....kisne bajayi bell...ye rajji bhi naa....wo hi hogi...usi ka wait jo kar rahe the ye dono....

update the next part soon...will be waiting....

P.S. ab to koi shikayat nahi...i think ye toh lamba comment tha...Big smile

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 4:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jyoti_l

lovely update....Clap

awww...maan nursing her back to health n holding her close....so sweeet....Day Dreaming

he is wondering when will he get to hold her like this again....arre just tell her...nt n daadi r already ready...u have to just talk to her abt it...

n he still hasnt told her that they will be moving in the outhouse...uske baad kya reaction hoga??

geet ko kitns accha laga hoga that the first thing she saw after opening her eyes is her maan...but bechari...kal ki baat yaad aa gayi....

he actually kissed her....Shocked...ye maan itna fast....or was it coz he wanted to feel that she is alright n wanted to show her that she is only his n he loves her....

loved the way he put her palm on his heart n said this is ur position... in my life.....

ye bell ko bhi jab hi bajna tha...Angry...abhi to mahaaul bana tha,....kisne bajayi bell...ye rajji bhi naa....wo hi hogi...usi ka wait jo kar rahe the ye dono....

update the next part soon...will be waiting....

P.S. ab to koi shikayat nahi...i think ye toh lamba comment tha...Big smile
thank you for the comment
and that was not a kiss he just pressed hers with his, to get her attention, she was so much into last nights conversation and so angry with him that he needed to do something different to deviate her mind he did not linger and did anything I clearly mentioned he just pressed them
 
and as per doorbell, GHSP se kuch inspiration banta hain,

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 4:54am | IP Logged
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thank you for the comment
and that was not a kiss he just pressed hers with his, to get her attention, she was so much into last nights conversation and so angry with him that he needed to do something different to deviate her mind he did not linger and did anything I clearly mentioned he just pressed them
 
and as per doorbell, GHSP se kuch inspiration banta hain,
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thnx for replying....
i know it was not a proper kiss.......he just wanted to get her attention...what i wanted to say was that he actually thought of doing this.....
ye inpiration ki wajah se har baar cliffhanger milta hai....

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 5:03am | IP Logged
awesome!!!! luved it.. continue soon

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