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Miley Jab Hum Tum

With You...Forever... (MayUr OS Pg 87) (Page 9)

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 7:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by .Divya.

beautifully written dear...

thank youSmile

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Part 4

Thank you so much for your motivation and appreciation. Read on for more Mr. and Mrs. Sharma magic.

Mayank and Nupur are at home. It's night-time, and Nupur is in the kitchen, she's chopping vegetables for dinner. She has an angry expression on her face. Mayank is standing behind her, trying to explain something.

Mayank: Par Nupur, Goa jaane mein kya problem hai? Abhi to wahan New Year season chal raha hai. Bahut mazaa aayega.

Nupur (angrily): Mujhe Goa nahi jaana Mayank.

Mayank: Par kyun? Last time jab hum gaye the, tab toh tumne kitna enjoy kiya tha..…toh isbaar kya ho gaya?

Nupur: Offo mayank…last time hamare saath Benji, Diya, Samrat, Gunjan aur Uday Bhaiya bhi the….(pauses)…and waise bhi, mujhe pata hai ki tum Goa kyun jaana chahte ho…

 Mayank: Achcha? Kyun jaana chahta hoon main Goa??

Nupur (very angry): Kyunki……………(then lowers her voice)...kyunki, tumhe wahan un adhnangi firangi-o ko jo dekhna hai..

Mayank: Kya??

Nupur: Aur nahi toh kya….pichli baar dekha tha maine, kaise tum chaaro ghoor rahe the unko….aur wo bhi…..chhee, kitni besharam ladkiyan thi…(makes a disgusting face)

Realizing the jealousy in his wife, a smile passes through Mayank's lips. He moves towards her, and pulls her into a hug from behind suddenly. Nupur is taken aback. He wraps his arms firmly around her, and says…

Mayank (still smiling, he whispers): Wo isliye Mrs. Sharma, kyunki tab hamari shaadi nahi hui thi, aur tab mujhe pata nahi tha ki meri desi girl un firangi-o se kayee zyaada……(he blows at her earring, she shivers at his warm breath touching her neck)…hot hai

Nupur (trying to compose herself): Mayank!!.....chhodo mujhe….

Mayank(nods): mm..hmm…...nahi

Nupur (trying hard to frown): Mayank please!! Ouch!!

Mayank (startled…he leaves her, and turns her around): Kya hua??

A drop of blood appears on Nupur's index finger…

Mayank (frantically): I am so sorry jaan…..I am really really sorry…

He puts her finger in his mouth, and realizes that she is staring at him. He removes her finger from his mouth, and leans forward towards her lips. She turns her head, blushing. He smiles, takes a band-aid out of the kitchen drawer, gently wraps it around her finger, and gives a light peck on it. He says, "Bade bade deshon mein, aisi chhoti chhoti baatein, hoti rehti hai". She is smiling now, he takes the chance. He gives a quick peck on her lips before she could realize. She is startled, and turns red again. She finally speaks.

Nupur: Par phirbhi main Goa nahi jaaoongi…

Mayank: "He bhagwaan!!" He drops his head on her shoulder, she laughs. He leaves her and sighs…

Mayank: Achcha thik hai…tum batao, tumhe kahan jaana hai?

Nupur: Mujhe? Mmm……Manali…

Mayank: Kya??? Nupur!!! Tum pagal to nahi ho gayi?? Manali?? Abhi?? Do you realize wahan abhi kitni thand par rahi hai??

Nupur (excited, her eyes beaming happiness): Haan Mayank…socho, kitna maza aayega…

Mayank: Maza?? What maza?? Wahan hum thand mein kulfi ban jaayenge……

Nupur: offo Mayank!! Tum kitne unromantic ho!! Socho….thandi thandi hawayein, snowfall, fireplace, cozy cozy blankets, hum dono, aur.…

She suddenly blushes, he realizes her gesture. He comes close to her again, and whispers…

Mayank: Aur……(she keeps quiet, looking down)…thik hai, hum Manali jaayenge

End of Part 4

Coming up next: Mr. and Mrs. Sharma  in Manali Embarrassed

Sorry guys, I know you wanted something more romantic in this part, but I thought this chotisi ladai would be nice here. And I also made up a Goa trip during college, that actually never happened in the show. So, Sorry again if I disappointed you. Please do comment. And your criticism and suggestions are always welcome. Smile

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 8:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arjun_dez

Jiya m totally in love wit this part which u updated....

i loved the bold mayank n shy nupur....
do write more n update soon.... n hey, next part, plz make nupur's dream abt manali come true... u knw wat i mean rite...Embarrassed
anyway m waitin for the next part... til then, mwah to ur story n to you....

ya...i do Embarrassed
thnx for liking itSmile
will update the next part soon....nd i think u'll like itEmbarrassed
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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 8:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dhano_arti


add me to u r PM list plzzzzzzzzzzz

thnx for liking itSmile plzz accept my buddy request, as it will be easier for me to pm you
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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 8:19am | IP Logged
heyy jiya very lovely and sweet part...
ammmm mr and mrs sharma in manali,,,,waiting...Embarrassed
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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 8:20am | IP Logged
hey jiya!
part 4.. utterly cute!!!Embarrassed
luvd my jealous nups - teasin mayu's convos!LOL
totally luvd it!Big smile
MayUr @ Manali... Blushing.. cant wait 4 d next part!LOL
do update soon & thnx 4 d pm!Big smile

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