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With You...Forever... (MayUr OS Pg 87) (Page 70)

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 11:05am | IP Logged
hey guys... I hope you all liked the story above. Sorry, I know it too longOuch 

Okay!! Before I carry off with my blabber... 
wishing all my friends here a very Shubho NoboborshoBig smile and Iniya Puthandu VaazhthukkalBig smile (I hope I wrote it right IshiEmbarrassed), i.e. Happy Bengali New YearHug and Happy Tamil New Year Hug

Wish the new year bring you lots of happiness and joy and success.

Thank you so much for encouraging all my works till now, I hope I'll be able to live up to your expectations...

Okay... sorry I got a little emotionalEmbarrassed 

Happy Reading guys, and please do comment/criticizeEmbarrassed

~jiya~




Edited by jiya_angel - 15 April 2011 at 7:30am

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~ the Bozo and the Girl ~ :another wonderful Oneshot from u!!Clap

-Nice job with the description of the apartment – gives us an idea as to the characteristic of the person living in…definitely a bozo!! Lol. LOL

-Nupur's tomboy character is adorable and real!! Threatening to break his door!!LOLLOL

-Their friendship is cute! Big smile

-"Eww!! gross!!" LOL – the first part of the story with Nupur & Mayank's constant tom & jerry fight was so funny! LOL

-"your smile." – Aww…this was a really nice way to sum up how much she was missing him without going onto it too much. Yes, the absence of a dear friend…it can really get to a person, no matter how cheerful the person is in nature.

-Mayank's constant statement about how Nupur is not a girl was very amusing…LOL

-Mayank's parents part where they were talking through their eyes about how their son has feelings for this girl just too good…Our parents knows us more than we do!! Smile

-Jealousy!!: though a negative feeling, sometimes it really brings out your true feelings for a person. LOL

- "How did you know I was here??" he was surprised. She looked at him, I don't know, I just wanted to see you, and you were there!! " – Another line I loved….so simple yet kind of gives u that warm feeling.

-"I missed you, his eyes sparkled.

 I missed you too, her eyelids fluttered in happiness." –It's true, ur eyes give away what's in ur heart!

-Saree part was good too! I have to say …saree seems to do wonders when it comes to making a guy realize he is in love with the girl !! LOL. LOL

-"the heartbeats stopped for a while, the sensation was unexplainable." – Day Dreaming

 

-The ending was too good ! loved how u showed they were married without giving it away until the last line! And god, u made me blush!! Blushing



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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 9:36pm | IP Logged
Editttttttttttttttt
OMG OMG - Jiyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
its a wonderful shottttttttttttttttt dear- mindblowinggggggggg

shottiiiiiiiiii khub valoooooooooo........................
BY GOD tumi eto shundor , eto shundor kore likheho - its just amazing hun..
GOSH how beautifully portrayed mayurs character------i m just loving with mayur again n again
Jiyaaaaaaaaaaa u know what- i really wanna see them as in bengli avtaar- and today u have fulfill my wish- and for this i m really thankful to u..........
so ekta fari special HUG  tou howa chai - right.............



She entered the hall with his mother. The white saree with a red border looked perfect on her slight dusky complexion. Her long dark brown tresses draped till her waist, a thin silver bracelet adorned on her wrists with matching danglers; she lifted her hands to tuck a disturbing lock of hair behind her ears, and that was when he breathed again. She could feel his gaze on her; she was surprised by the warmth that crept up her cheeks. Aparna giggled in her mind, as Saikat mentally patted her back. She let go of Nupur and stood beside Saikat. Nupur walked up to Mayank silently, and waved her hand before him, "Mayank!!" breaking his trance. He blinked in an attempt to get back himself, and smiled. "You look..." he took in a deep breath, and so did she...

"You look like... a girl" Her downcast eyes shot up as he burst into laughter.

OH GOD i m just imagining how was nupus looking in white saari with red border.....hayeeeeeeeeeeee there is no doubt that she was looking just breath taking on this attire. eijonnoi tou mayank er eir obostha


and mayu with dhuti and kurta- lalalalalaala he looks dashing na............
Jiya tumi bangali ebong tader oitijjo o shanskrit ta ke er OS er maddhome khub shundar kore futie tulecho

hats off to u dear- it was one of the best OS i've ever read
hahahahahaha see- mayur kiss  made me blush like hell........


it was totally lovely-dovely, sweet, cute, fantastic, excellent OS

ami tou er moddho 3 3 bar pore felechi
i just loved it

Muahhhhhhhhhh jiyaaaaaa
thanx again for giving such a nice OS


plz plz do write ore n more on mayu- r jodi ete ektu bangalipona thake tahole tou kothai nei- amar jonno ta hobe shonai shohaga.


SHUVO NOBO BORSHO JIYA


Notun Surjo, Notun Pran
Notun Sur, Notun gan
Notun Usha, Notun alo
Notun bochor katuk valo
katuk bishad , ashuk horsho
Shuvo hok Noboborsho






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Originally posted by -Faria-

Ishiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

baas bahut hogaya- main aur nehi bardash karungi...........


I m not reserving -i m gussa on u and also on jiya


oye fari... maine kya kiyaConfused???Cry

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Posted: 12 April 2011 at 5:43am | IP Logged
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Jiyaaa
it was wonderful OS dear.
awesomeBig smile 
mindblowingBig smile
Fari is right, tumi eto sundar kore ki kore j lekhoDay Dreaming
love u so muchHug love ur writing skillHug hats off to ur writing skillClap
n thank u very much for portrayed Mayur as bengaliBig smile
i just love to see them as bengaliBig smile ...n u fulfilled my dreamsBig smile
love u loadsStar


She entered the hall with his mother. The white saree with a red border looked perfect on her slight dusky complexion. Her long dark brown tresses draped till her waist, a thin silver bracelet adorned on her wrists with matching danglers; she lifted her hands to tuck a disturbing lock of hair behind her ears, and that was when he breathed again. She could feel his gaze on her; she was surprised by the warmth that crept up her cheeks. 



it was sooo perfectBig smile
i can imagine Nupur in this attireBig smile...n i knw, she looks breathtakingly beautifulBig smile. bechara mayu ka kya halat ho gya hai By God!!!

my mayank is in dhoti kurta...wowww...he looks damn hottt in dhoti kurta, bygod!!!

LOLZ...look like a girlLOL...LOLz...it was the funniest dialogueLOL

wonderful OS.

mayur is the best best bbbeeesssttt

wowww...n their kissEmbarrassed ... OMG!!!! its like hellBlushing

do u want us to die in Naba barsho????

OMG!!!! i ve no words to describe this OS properly.

sorry Jiya, my dictionary is emptyEmbarrassed

want more form u.

thanks for the pm.

n


SUBHO NABA BARSHOBig smile







Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 26 April 2011 at 1:00pm

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pg 1- ss-
 
just caught up with your works
 
gr8 job with the first part of the ss
 

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pg 4- part 2 of ss
 
nupur's weak condition.... oh no....
 
honeymoon again,..... wow
 

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pg 5- ss part 3-
 
wow
 
dance part was awesome
 

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