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With You...Forever... (MayUr OS Pg 87) (Page 61)

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 4:12am | IP Logged
OMG buddy..!!!Hug
what an OS...just loved it so much...!!!
too good buddy.........

love
tasfia

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 4:26am | IP Logged

beautiful....thats all i can say...i m choked...

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 4:33am | IP Logged
Amazing os.

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 5:10am | IP Logged
res...Jiya, u made me cry hun....so will have to edit this later...
 
It's beautiful though!
 
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-She looks just like you  - I think this line itself set the atmosphere for this whole story!!!

-"I don't wanna go Pa!!" She whined hiding her face into his chest, just like she did on the first day of school. "I don't wanna go, Pa!!" the same words sounded so different today." - This was a really beautiful moment. Almost all daughters & fathers go through this moment at the daughter's bidaai.CrySmile

-"and with you gone... I can finally have the entire sweets ka dabba that comes on Diwali every year from Morena..." -LOL loved how he was cheering her up.

-"Mr. Sharma!! You have been blessed with a girl" The doctor handed him his little angel. She was wrapped in a white cloth, her eyes were shut, her tiny hands closed into a fist near her chest. "She's beautiful..." was all he could say before he gave her to Gunjan.  - Another beautiful moment in this OS!!! The first time he held his child. most cherished memory of all fathers. Smile

- Nupur gave up her life for her baby...the exact decision any mother would take. 

-"Didn't you ever think of me? How will I live without you?" - CryCryCryI really couldn't control my tears when he asked her this...It was so sad and yet, so beautiful.

-"You know I hate you Nupur... I hate you... you broke your promise... I HATE YOU" -CryCryCryCryCryCryCryCrySeriously, even reading it for the 3rd time now, I can't seem to control my emotions.

-"Please don't go Nupur..." he broke down again, and hugged her, holding her close to himself, wanting to believe that he could stop her from leaving - another heart touching moment!!! CryCry  

-I loved how you showed that even death couldn't separate these two eternal lovers....the way her hands slipped into his

-She wiped his tears with the pallu of her white saree, and tipped on her toes to kiss his forehead.-Despite the tragic situation, this scene was just so satisfying and made me content. Smile

"She placed herself on the bed, and he lied down with his head on her lap." -I totally love when Mayu does this...so much like a child...

Big smileBig smileLOL
-Aww...Ahana is so much like Nupur...so sweet!!Big smile The part about how much he missed her was really touching!! Cry

"he's gone to get back his happiness, he's gone to be with Nupur..." -so true!! CryCryCryCry

-"I love you" they said in unison, as their souls entwined with each other to be one forever...-Another beautiful moment!! Their souls reuniting ...Perfect!!
 
 
LOVED it !!!! Great job and keep it up!  Clap


Edited by Ishita16 - 23 March 2011 at 2:50pm

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 5:26am | IP Logged
gosh.. jiya..
u made cry..........Cry
dis ws such an wonderful OS....Clap
soo serene.... sooo beautiful...Day Dreaming
finally MN wr 2gether again....Day Dreaming
i'm really feelin short of words...
i sooo luvd it...
& chil... koi tumhe nahi maarega... lolLOL
luv ya!Hug

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 5:37am | IP Logged
u made me cry jiya
not fair
but this was utherly beautifulll
amazingly expresed emotions balcony part was the waoest
lovely
 

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 6:18am | IP Logged
beautiful OS Jiya!
u made me cry Cry
it was so touching
thnx for the pm Smile

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 6:40am | IP Logged
jiya...........................Ermm

u made me cry.......CryCryCryCryCry esp da part....SHES JUS LIKE U.....OuchOuchOuchOuch

it ws soo simple yet beautiful.......StarStarStarStarStar

i still hav tears round da corners of my eyes......CryCryCryCryCryCry think ill b needing another bucket to fill.........

ok coming back to da topic......yr da beginning where ruhi ws gettiong married ws soo beautifully portrayed.......she really had tantrums jus like nupur......awww loved her ALOT.....Heart

n AHANA ....well she ws like nupur in many ways too.....esp BY GOD ws beautifully used here.....WinkWink
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n sajan were soo adorable......Big smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smile
bt still mayank......i soo soo sooo loved mayur talk before nupur's death n da balcony scene it ws da best....it simply shows how much mayu had missed nupur all his life......Disapprove

atlast dey were together n now no1 cn separate dem as dey were immortal......da 2 souls were now together forever.......Approve loved it alot.........

i think its more den enough....LOLLOLLOLLOL
tczzz sisi.....
loads of loveWink

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