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With You...Forever... (MayUr OS Pg 87) (Page 60)

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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 5:26pm | IP Logged
wow dear very well written
plz cont sooooon  :)

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--jiya-- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 1:28am | IP Logged
ok dearies... since you don't have a problem with it...
I'll be continuing Kismat Se Bandhi Ye Dori in the new thread

thanks a lot for the positive response

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-SupriyaluvsMN- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 3:24am | IP Logged
aww... Jiya..
v'll crave .. such sweet moments in lyf.. only....Embarrassed
pls dont omit dem...
Convert it into ff now.....
luv ya!Hug

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--jiya-- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 2:29am | IP Logged
Hello my wonderful and patient readers!!!

I know, you were not expecting me here this timeWink, because you want me to update Kismat...Big smile

par wo toh maine abhi abhi update kiya naa... to thoda patience rakho...LOL

I am here today to share with you something... and of course it's a story, yahan pe main aur kya share karoongi?Big smile

but before that....


Edited by jiya_angel - 11 March 2011 at 2:51am

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--jiya-- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 2:31am | IP Logged
Please suggest a title for it... 
U know naa, I don't come up with good titles...


She was coming down the stairs, escorted by a lady and followed by a bunch of girls of her age. Her beautiful dove shaped eyes looked at the ground, her anklets stirred up a perfect melody as she took each step forward. She looks just like you he whispered at the sky. She stopped at the last step, and looked at him. Her eyes spoke a million words, but her lips kept quiet. He opened up his arms, and she ran into his embrace.

"I don't wanna go Pa!!" She whined hiding her face into his chest, just like she did on the first day of school. "I don't wanna go, Pa!!" the same words sounded so different today. He smiled and parted his angel from himself, "Ruhi..." but she didn't let him speak "Who'll take care of you Paa? Who'll give you medicines? You'll be so alone Pa!! I don't wanna go."

"Ruhi..." the lady came forward and placed her palm on her head "we all are there naa beta!! Mayank will be fine..." she said in an assuring voice

"but maasi..." she was not convinced

"yes Ruhi..." He smiled at his daughter "your Gunjan maasi is right... I'll be fine..." he paused, "and with you gone... I can finally have the entire sweets ka dabba that comes on Diwali every year from Morena..." he winked at her as she hit him "Paa!!!"

"Don't worry di" a girl slightly younger than her came forward "I won't let him have even a single sweet. I know he's not supposed to have them" she said authoritatively while Mayank made a face to her before turning back to Ruhi "and you were worried about me?? With Hitler Ahana around, I don't see any such necessities." Ahana whined and hit him on his shoulder just like the way her sister did a few seconds back, and the three started laughing. Gunjan saw the trio and wiped a tear off her cheeks I wish you were here di. She felt an arm around her "Samrat!!" "She's here chashmish..." Samrat said in a hushed tone "She's here in our hearts..."

The stunning white Mercedes and its handsome owner waited for his bride as she walked up to him, still clinging to her father.

"Take care of my princess, Armaan!"

"I promise I will... Pa!!"

and they drove away to the new beginning of their lives.  "I don wanna ever get married Dad!!" Mayank looked at Ahana as she uttered the words and hugged Samrat. His eyes met his best friend and they smiled at each other. "Ahana!! I'm getting jealous of Samrat..." Mayank pouted like a kid to his niece. "Join in!!" She opened her one arm towards him, and he joined them with pleasure.

He entered his room after bidding goodbye to his friends and relatives. After seven days of hustle-bustle, the mansion lay empty and void of voices. Samrat and Gunjan were staying the night with Ahana, but they'll also leave tomorrow morning. The house will be totally empty, with Mayank's single soul to stay. It felt as if it was yesterday, when Ruhi came into his life, and life took a turn for him.


"Mr. Sharma!! You have been blessed with a girl" The doctor handed him his little angel. She was wrapped in a white cloth, her eyes were shut, her tiny hands closed into a fist near her chest. "She's beautiful..." was all he could say before he gave her to Gunjan. "Doctor!! How is Nupur? She is fine naa?" he asked with anxiety, and little did he know, that the next moment will swipe away the ground beneath him.

"I am sorry Mr. Sharma, she's got very little time left"

"WHAT ARE YOU SAYING??" he grabbed his collar and shook him hard

"Mr. Sharma, I can understand what you are feeling, but we had told her about this much before... but she didn't agree... she knew how much you wanted this child, and so..."


"Mr. Sharma, please calm down... you should go to her now, if you want to see her for one last time"

"SHUT UP!!! SHE'S NOT GOING ANYWHERE!!" He screamed at the doctor, and ran towards her cabin.

She was there on the cot, wired to machines that showed her decreasing heartbeat. His eyes welled up as he saw her pale face, which still managed to glow with serenity. He held her fragile hands in his palms, and she opened her eyes. She smiled looking at him, and he felt a million stabs in his heart.

 "Why didn't you tell me Nupur?"

 "Did you see her?"

 "Why did you hide it from me?"

 "She's beautiful, isn't she?"

 "Didn't you ever think of me? How will I live without you?"

 "You know, she's got your dimples"

 "Answer me goddamit!!!!" He was hurt, he could see his life going away from him, and he could do nothing to let her stay. "You know I hate you Nupur... I hate you... you broke your promise... I HATE YOU" he was completely broken as he sobbed clutching her hand. She could see the tears trickling down her arm. She didn't want to go, but she had to.


He looked at her with his painful eyes'

"Will you promise me something?"


"Promise me you'll never let her miss her mom..."

"Please don't go Nupur..." he broke down again, and hugged her, holding her close to himself, wanting to believe that he could stop her from leaving, but all he could hear was a whisper "I am sorry Mayank..." followed by a long beep from the Cardiogram.


He changed into a white kurta, and stood in his balcony, looking at the brightest star that shone in the sky. "She was looking beautiful" he whispered at it. "I know..." the voice ringed in his ears as he felt a soft hand slip into his palm, entwining his fingers onto hers. She was standing beside him, her face shone in the soft moonlight as she smiled at him, and he enveloped her in his arms.

"Did you see her?" he murmured into her hair'

"Hmm..." She answered ruffling his hair, and then she parted from him. She wiped his tears with the pallu of her white saree, and tipped on her toes to kiss his forehead.

"I'm fine..." he assured her, "but I missed you at the ceremony today..."

She lowered her eyes, but they again lit up with happiness "but I saw everything Mayank... everything was so perfect, and Armaan is such a nice boy... he is the perfect choice for her..."

"Yes, he is. How can I not choose the perfect groom for my angel?" He smiled.

"Come... lets go in... warna you'll catch cold'" she ordered.

"Oh come on... at least you don't behave like hitler Ahana..." he pouted like a kid, at which she glared at him, "don't call her hitler okay? She's my darling... She can handle you even better than Ruhi..." She jerked her finger in front of him. They laughed together, and went inside.

She placed herself on the bed, and he lied down with his head on her lap.

"You know Nupur, Ruhi has got your looks, but Ahana? She's got all your tantrums..." he chuckled remembering his niece, "she even says BY GOD like you..."

She smiled upon him as he looked up to see her face, but suddenly his expressions changed "ouch!!"

"What? What happened?"

"Ooh!! My neck hurts" he rubbed his hand on his neck, "getting a daughter married is so hectic"

"Offo Mayank!! Ek to you don't take care of yourself, and you call my darling a hitler..." She scowled "why don't you understand? You have become old!!!" She said nodding her head.

"Excuse me!!" He got up from her lap quickly forgetting the pain in his neck "I am not old!!"

"Achcha? Then who gets cramps in his neck every other day?" She raised her brows'  

"Wo toh... wo main..." he was trying to find a suitable answer, but she suddenly shifted her gaze towards the balcony "Arrey look!!" He turned his head in the direction, and the inevitable happened "OUCH!!!"

"See Mayank!!" she giggled "you've become old"

He sighed looking at her smiling face, only he knew how much he missed her at every moment of his life. How much he yearned to see this smile for real. He sighed and laid back on her lap, and put her hands in his hair. She smiled at him, moving her soft fingers through his hair as he slowly drifted away to sleep.


"I am sorry Mr. Shergill..." the doctor got up from beside the sleeping figure of Mayank "he has passed away..."

Gunjan felt weak in her knees, but Samrat caught her, "But... But he was fine till yesterday... How? Why?" She looked at Samrat with pain in her eyes "What will I say to Ruhi?"

"He's fine Mamma" Ahana looked at her mother once, and then placed herself beside Mayank's corpse. She lifted his hands in her palms "he's gone to a place where he'll be the happiest..."

"Yes chashmish..." Samrat looked at his wife with assurance in his eyes "he's gone to get back his happiness, he's gone to be with Nupur..."


She was standing near the cliff, looking at the world beneath. The wind blew through her hair making it fly high, and then he called "Nupur!!" Oh how much she had yearned to hear this voice, how much she had missed that dimpled smile. She turned around to see him; he was right there, waiting for her with his open embrace. She ran towards him, and lost herself in his arms, feeling the bliss they had lost years before. He held her tightly, because this time he was sure, that she won't go. 

"I love you" they said in unison, as their souls entwined with each other to be one forever...


Plzz maarna mat... I know it was sad... Ouch

But, still... plzz do commentEmbarrassed

Edited by jiya_angel - 11 March 2011 at 3:28am

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.SA. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 3:40am | IP Logged
OMG , that was so awesome, finally they were together again. beautiful creationThumbs Up.
thanx for the pm Jiya.

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Maria. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 3:42am | IP Logged
OMG...beautiful Os
very well written
do continue soon

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..-IronyDied-.. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 4:12am | IP Logged
OMG buddy..!!!Hug
what an OS...just loved it so much...!!!
too good buddy.........


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