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With You...Forever... (MayUr OS Pg 87) (Page 56)

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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 2:02am | IP Logged
thank you sooo much guys for your comments....Hug
and I'm really sorry to not replying to each of you individuallyErmm

@Fari - thoda sabr rakho yaar... abhi toh kahani shuru hui haiLOL... suspense spoil mat karoLOL

@Ishita - thank you for unreservingLOL.... i love to read your loong analysis... please keep doing thatEmbarrassed

@Rosheen - I hope you won't have problem nowErmm, I have also updated the first page with linksSmile

@Sujata-di, Umi and Supriya - thank you for your long comments, Luv yaHug

@Ridhi - I want to see your commentStar

@all others - Thank youHug
salma009, Duray, mayurg2010, mayur-ki-diwani, Favouriteofall, daniella05, Alisha-MJHT, princez_94, love.mayurarti, ridi_onasis, moona, maria, swati, sumonetolub, annie

ohkay... and now since everyone is ready to partake the torture... LOL
I'll continue this SS...

Caution: this is a relatively small and boring part, but this convo was essential for their relationship to take it forwardEmbarrassed

Luv ya all

-jiya-

P.S. if you don't like anything about this SS, please do tell meEmbarrassed


Edited by jiya_angel - 02 March 2011 at 2:45am

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HeartKismat se bandhi ye doriHeart

Chapter 3

She woke up in the middle of the night by the ferocious growl of her stomach. The room was pretty much dark and the small alarm clock on the side table indicated 2:30 a.m. She looked around, there was no Mayank on the other side of the pillow wall. She wondered where he was at this hour, but another growl from her empty stomach reminded her that she did not have dinner, and eating was her first priority currently.

She reached the kitchen downstairs, and froze at the sight. There was a shadow hovering around the fridge, perhaps looking for something. She grabbed the vase that was kept on the stool beside the door, and tip-toed up to behind him. She was about to hit him hard, when he suddenly sprang around and pinned her to the wall

"TUM??"

"AAP??"

The two pair of eyes looked at each other with ultimate shock and disbelief, and then suddenly burst into laughter, a whole hearted laughter, for the first time in the last two days.

"Tum itni raat ko yahan kya kar rahi ho?"

"Wohi' jo aap kar rahe hai"

"Achcha?? Hmm' aur ye kya hai?" he pointed at the iron vase in her hand, and she was hell embarrassed. After all, which wife in this world mistakes her husband for a thief? She lowered her gaze "jee' wo' main'"

"hmm'." He nodded mockingly "thank god' mera sixth sense kaam kar gaya, warna tum toh shaadi ke doosre din hi vid..."

"NAHI!!" she shrieked suddenly, not letting him complete.   

He looked at her face; even in the dark he could see how pale it has become suddenly "arey' main toh mazak kar raha tha..." he tried to calm her "tum yeh sab maanti ho?"

She looked at him with blank eyes "ab maanti hoon..." and he knew why. He didn't want to take the discussion further, so he diverted the topic.

"Come on... let's eat..."

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Shilpa woke up with sounds of laughter coming in to her room. She opened her eyes, and saw light coming in her room from the kitchen.

"itni raat ko kitchen mein kaun hai?"

She got up and went to the kitchen, and what met her eyes was extremely pacifying for her soul. She saw them giggling, talking, playing with the food like little kids. She returned to her bed smiling with the thought that they were trying to move on.    

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"Mera ek dost lawyer hai' aur maine zindagi mein use bada duffer lawyer aaj tak nahi dekha"

"Kyun??"

"Kyun?? Ok... toh suno... once I had some work in the court, and he also had a trial that day... so humne socha ki lunch saath mein karte hai... toh mera kaam toh khatam ho gaya, but usko time tha... so I thought I'll wait in the courtroom... pata nahi kaun sa case tha... par, arguments?? Hilarious... ek sample suno... your honour, mere kaabil dost ne yeh toh prove kar diya ki yeh stairs 1st floor se upar 2nd floor tak jaati hai, lekin unhone yeh prove nahi kiya ki yehi stairs 2nd floor se 1st floor tak neeche bhi aati hai'."

"Kyaaa???"

And they continued laughing'.

"aur ek baar pata hai kya hua tha?"

"kya?"

"wo humein ek restaurant pe mila tha... main aur Payal..." and again, silence took over the atmosphere. He averted his gaze from her, and she looked down on her plate. But, she was not liking this sudden change in the atmosphere, and it was her turn to break the ice.

"aap di se bahut pyaar karte the naa?"

He simply nodded, still not meeting her eyes.

"main aapse ek baat kahoon?"

He looked up at her, not uttering single word.

"yaad hai' aapne kal raat mujhse kaha tha ki hum is rishtey ki shuruat dosti se karte hain?"

"................."

"toh aap apne dost se apna dard share nahi karoge?"

"................."

"dekhiye, aap jo apne chehre pe ye khushi mask pehen ke ghoom rahe hai, uska mujh pe koi asar nahi ho raha... kyunki main jaanti hoon... ke aapke dil pe kya beet rahi hai... aapne apne sapne di ke saath dekhe the... mere saath nahi... main aapke dil mein di ki jagah kabhi nahi le sakti... aur main uski jagah lena chahti bhi nahi... par aap mujhe ek dost ki jagah toh de sakte hai naa?"

He faintly smiled at her "kya tum mujhe kabhi maaf kar paaogi?"

"Maaf?? Kis baat ke liye?" she did not understand why he was asking forgiveness.

"maine hamari shaadi ka decision tumse bina puche le liya... aur..."

"us baat ke liye mujhe aapko thank you kehna chahiye... kyunki agar aap mujhse baat karte, toh main shayad mana kar deti... aur uske baad jo hota, uske liye main apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar paati"

"par... tumne bhi toh kuch sapne dekhe honge'"

"har sapna poora ho yeh zaroori toh nahi'"

"par jab sapne toot the hai, toh bahut dard hota hai'"

"aur wo dard baatne se kam ho jaata hai'" she smiled at him, and forwarded her hand. He took it in his palms, and smiled back.

"thik hai... par tumhe mujhse ek promise karna hoga'"

"wo kya?"

"yehi... ke tumhaare dil mein kabhi bhi koi bhi baat ho, toh tum mujhe bataogi, kabhi hesitate nahi karogi... mujhe apne husband se pehle, apna friend samjhogi'"

"pehle aap promise kijiye, phir main'"

"main kya promise karoon?"

"yehi... jo aapne abhi kaha... ki aapke dil mein koi bhi baat ho, aap mujhe batane se kabhi hesitate nahi karenge... main aapki wife baadme, pehle aapki friend hoon'"

"achcha baba... promise'"

"pakka..."

"aur ek aur baat'"

"ab kya?"

"tum mujhe Mayank kehke bulaogi.... yeh "suniye" and "jee" nahi chalega'"

"Kyaa?? Par main kaise?"

"Main kuch nahi sunna chahta'"

"Ok fine" she nodded disappointedly.

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So guys... that was it for today... do leave your precious comments/criticism

Luv Ya All

-jiya-

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Edited by jiya_angel - 02 March 2011 at 3:10am

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it is osom i loveddddddddddddddd it

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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 2:55am | IP Logged
@jiah
 
wow...beautiful update
 
loved Mayur a lot
 
i loved it
 
plz continue soon

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short update...Unhappy
But too good......
friendship is best start of any relationship...
Very Very Nice Update Jiya..
Loved it..
and cont soon

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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 3:14am | IP Logged
lovely update!!!
plzzz continue soon
thanks 4 the pm

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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 3:41am | IP Logged
awsomeeeeeeeee part

mayur were damn soooooooo cute

loved it

continue soon

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it's amazing how they r understanding each othre and moving smoothly

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