Miley Jab Hum Tum


Miley Jab Hum Tum
Miley Jab Hum Tum

With You...Forever... (MayUr OS Pg 87) (Page 51)

.SilentOcean IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 8:59am | IP Logged
hey.,jiya.....nice concept.,.beautifully written.......u know it is perfact......
Pls cont soon...
Thnx 4 pm...

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Wings-of-Fire IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 9:00am | IP Logged
its wonderful. pls pm me when you update.

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daniella05 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 9:07am | IP Logged
awesome first part!!!
do continue soon
thanks 4 the pm

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dynamic_doll IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 9:51am | IP Logged

congratz on ur new ss Jiya!

loved the first part
eagerly waiting for the next update
continue soon
nd thnx for the pm Smile

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-SAISakura16- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 10:04am | IP Logged


Chapter 1

-loved the description of the wedding…it felt so real.

"Ek din mera raajkumaar bhi aise hi safed ghode pe aayega" –aww…the dream of every girl.Day Dreaming

-loved the little initial convo b/w Mayur: so innocent and flirtyLOL

-the way u described Nupur's situation when asked to replace her sister's place was so heart touching…I can totally understand how she must be feeling caught b/w her dreams and her father's dignity…CryCry

-Bui was again a villain but I guess that was needed to set the story on the right path LOL

-Mayank was sweet for not making a big deal out of the injustice that happened to him but he should've atleast asked Nupur

-"Ab bhi waqt hai' kaho toh dulhaniya replace kara doon?" he smiled at the irony of life.  – sometimes it happens, doesn't it ? Something u say for a joke turns out to be the biggest truth in ur life…OuchConfused


Wonderful Job as always!!! Nice concept ! ClapClap

Edited by Ishita16 - 01 March 2011 at 12:07pm

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drfizaahmed IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 10:30am | IP Logged
 nice one

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cutiepie12 Goldie

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 11:15am | IP Logged
oh jiya..............hats off to such a unique concept yr........mayank k mou se nikla hua ek sentence utterly changed his life......oh god yr too gud concept itna interesting hai to socho uodates kitne innovative hun ge bt dnt keep me wait for long otherwise u knw na.......mai kuch b kr sakti hun.....LOLLOLLOLLOLLOL

oh GOD bechari nupur......feeling soo bad for her....uska kia kusoor the......n mayank well qusoor to uska b nhi tha bt still......dey were made for each other so destiny brought dem up together......not in a way dey wanted bt stillOuchOuchOuch

oh literally jiya....m sooper dooper excited for dis ss of urs......Big smileBig smileBig smileBig smile

bui as always.....villian ka role hi play krne geLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL

mayank is such a sweetheartWinkWinkWinkWinkWink
luv u loadzzz n tczzzzHeart

Edited by cutiepie12 - 27 February 2011 at 11:21am

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-NightDreamer- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 10:57pm | IP Logged
Amazinh one...

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