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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 10:10pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 6:15am | IP Logged
Okay guys... since a few people have been giving me dhamkisLOL... here I am with a new SS... 
but it comes with a caution... that is I will take time to update further chapters, because I am only done with the concept till now, and not all the parts... so you might have to wait a little longer for the next parts...Tongue
but don't worry, I won't drag it longLOL
So... here it goesEmbarrassed


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CHAPTER 1

There was a lot of hustle bustle going on in the house, and why not? After all, the elder daughter of the household was going to get married today. Squeaky children ran about in their sherwani's and lehenga's, often running into fat bellied uncles, who pretended to be very busy, but actually were saving their skins from responsibilities. Perky teenage boys perched themselves at convenient corners, trying to get maximum attention from the girls, who were busy giggling around amongst themselves.

Inside the house, the scenario was no different. The bride's mother, Mrs. Shobha Bhushan was busy attending the Kanpur waale Chachaji and Sholapur waali Mausiji, while the father, Mr. Shashi Bhushan was running around checking all the last minute arrangements. Lot's of people, lot's of work. So, we won't disturb the poor parents, let's go check on the bride.

A young girl in her twenties carefully placed the red veil on the bride's head, and it flowed down like water over her shoulders. She was looking gorgeous.

"Haaye' Payal Di, aaj toh jeeju ke hosh hi udd jaayenge'" Payal, the bride, sighed at the remark made by her younger sister. She managed a faint smile on her face, and was about to say something, when'

"Nupur didiiii'" a group of 4 feet kareena-s entered the room, squealing "baaraat aa gayiiii'."

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The groom was at the gate, striding on a white horse, clad in a gorgeous white sherwani and a complementing red chunar, his face covered with the sehra' he looked like the Prince Charming of all Cinderella's. Shobha was performing the rituals, while Nupur watched patiently, well, she only appeared patient. "Ek din mera raajkumaar bhi aise hi safed ghode pe aayega" the thought made her eyes sparkle.

"Aao Mayank beta, aapka swagat hai" the elders of the family escorted the groom inside

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"Kya baat hai jeeju!! Bade light maar rahe ho!!!" she winked at him while she placed herself on the chair beside his throne.

"Yeh sab aap hi ke liye to hai saali saheba'" he replied flashing his naughty smile "Waise aap ko dekhke lagta hai aaj apne mera qatal karne ka plan banaya hai'"

"Haaye' kyun?" She placed her palm on her cheeks pretending to be shocked.

He leaned a bit towards her, and whispered "Aaj toh aapse nazarein hi nahi hat rahi' aise toh aapki behen mera murder kar degi' iraada kya hai aapka? Ab bhi waqt hai' kaho toh dulhaniya replace kara doon?"

"Hawww'." She hit his shoulder playfully and both of them burst into laughter. She was about to say something more, but was intervened by a kid "Nupur didi' aapko taya ji bula rahe hain"

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"Bui' ye aap kya keh rahi hai???" Nupur was shocked. She was standing in the room where she had left Payal in her bridal attire an hour back, and now instead of the bride, only a note was left. Her distraught father was sitting on the bed that once belonged to her elder sister, while her mother was shedding silent tears. The woman she called bui, handed her over the note.

Papa, Mumma, mujhe pata hai iswaqt aap ke dil pe kya beet rahi hogi' par mere paas aur koi raasta nahi tha' main ye shaadi karke apne sapno ki kurbaani nahi de sakti' mujhe ek bahut badi film offer hui hai' aur main uske liye Rajeev ke saath Mumbai jaa rahi hoon' ho sake toh mujhe maaf kar dena'

Aapki beti

Payal

Nupur read it over and over again, trying to believe that Payal has actually left. She has deserted her parents to face humiliation and embarrassment in front of the whole society, she has deserted her sister to be mocked at for the rest of her life, and more than that, she has deserted a man who had weaved his dreams around her, whom she claimed to be in love with even a few hours back, her groom, Mayank.

"Ab toh ek hi raasta bacha hai'" bui's words brought her back to reality, only to swipe away the ground beneath her feet "Nupur ki shaadi Mayank se'"

"NAHIII" she screamed, not letting her bui complete "AAP JAANTE HO AAP KYA KEH RAHE HO BUI???"

"Main jaanti hoon main kya keh rahi hoon'" she uttered coldly to her, and then turned to her brother who was still sitting on the bed like a statue "Bhaiya' yehi ek raasta hai' warna aaj agar yeh baarat laut gayi' to hum kisiko mooh dikhaane layak nahi rahenge'"

He was too broken to say anything, so his wife spoke instead amidst her sobs "beta' humare paas aur koi chaara nahi hai'" she clutched Nupur's hands in her palms "ab sab kuch tere haath mein hain Nupur'"

She felt her heart being pierced with a sharp weapon, her dreams being torn and strewn on the floor. Her desire of a perfect life, her goals of a perfect career, her dream of a perfect wedding, everything was turning into ashes in front of her eyes. All she could see now was a man in despair, standing at the edge of loosing his dignity because of his daughter. He, who had taught her the meaning of self-respect, was now about to loose his own. How could she refuse him, even if it cost her entire life?

"Par'. Mayank??" she asked, because at a far corner of her mind lay a tiny ray of hope.

"Mujhe koi aetraaz nahi'." the baritone entered the room, leaving all the four souls inside numb to react. He was there, standing at the door, and he had heard the entire conversation. "Main Nupur se shaadi karne ke liye tayyar hoon'." he repeated, and for the first time in the past half an hour, Shashi Bhushan stood up from his position, and went up to him. He joined his palms, and was about to speak, but Mayank held his hands "aap chinta naa karein Papa' main Payal ke kiye ki sazaa aap logo ko nahi de sakta'" his tone was of assurance, but only he knew what was going on inside his heart. He took a glance inside towards Nupur, whose gaze was fixed on the ground. He could see a tear drop fall, and he silently went away. "Chal Nupur, mahurat ka samay ho raha hai' jaldi se tayyar ho jaa" a hyper excited Bui concluded.

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She descended the stairs looking like the most beautiful bride in the world, escorted by her mother and bui' the anklets on her feet stirred up a perfect melody, just like her name, and Mayank looked up. She looked as calm as a lake, but he could see the storm that was tearing her inside, he could see through her, because there was a storm going on inside himself too. Only he knew what he was going through. The day that was supposed to be the happiest day in his life, has now turned into a compromise that he did with life. "Ab bhi waqt hai' kaho toh dulhaniya replace kara doon?" he smiled at the irony of life. She looked at him in astonishment, because she could see the pain that was there in his smile.

They placed her beside him and the priest started his chants'

"Kanyadaan ke liye vadhu ke maata-pitaa aage aayein'"

Shashi Bhushan stepped forward with Shobha and knelt down. He put the hand of Nupur in Mayank's hands. The priest continued'.

"Mangalam Bhagwaan Vishnu' Mangalam Garudadhwaja' Mangalam Pundarikakshya' Mangalaya Tanohari' 

Ab aap dono pheron ke liye khare ho jaaye'"

A cousin came up to tie the knot, and they completed their circles around the sacred fire. He tied the mangalsutra around her neck and put the vermillon on her forehead.

"Yeh vivaah sampanna hua' ab ap dono pati patni hue'"

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So... that's it for the first part... I hope you guys will like it as you liked my previous works... 

Do comment/criticize

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Jiya


Part 2 on Pg 53



Edited by jiya_angel - 01 March 2011 at 8:19am

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 6:29am | IP Logged
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Tan tanaaaaaaaaaaa

Jiyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa u started a new FF
yeeeeeeeeeeee thank u so much dear
i was waiting for ur FF.
finally u started a new one- i m veryyyyyyy happy 2day

By GOD- very beautiful start. it reminded me the story of choti bahu.
though there is lil bit change but i really loved r story line.

i also loved ur title-------------u r right destiny is a part of our life but not a small part ,i thnk its a big part of our life.....
Jiya fantastic start dear
keep it up
and do update next part soon
take care.....................



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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 7:03am | IP Logged
hey buddyHug
thank you so much for staring a SSEmbarrassed
its just amazing...Smile
really nice concept
just loved it
continue soon
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love
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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 7:14am | IP Logged
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Jiyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
finally u updated ur os!!
by god!! after so many dayzzzzzzzzzzz!!!
bt thank god, u ve updated.
bdw, this is beautiful update.
mindblowing start.
awesome.
love mayur scene as jiju-sali........it was so sweet.
bt destiny!!! destiny is bigger than fiction!!!
mayank married nupur!!!
i could feel d storms in their heart!
poor them.........payal k liye dono ko sacrifice karna para!!
waiting for next update.
thanks for the pm.



Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 27 February 2011 at 8:23am

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 7:35am | IP Logged
Congrats for your new SS Jiya
I loved the first part - it was brilliant!
Looking forward to the next part
Please continue soon and thanks for the pm

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 7:41am | IP Logged
congratz for ur new ss jiya..........it was superb.......bt i felt sorry for nupur........i hope she'll accept that.......thnx for the pm

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