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With You...Forever... (MayUr OS Pg 87) (Page 20)

-SAISakura16- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 11:07am | IP Logged


Wow! That was such an awesome ending!! I loved how u showed the awkwardness at the beginning and then Nupur waiting for him and Mayank feeling bad and coming.
The dance seq was nicely written...I can just imagine Nupur dancing..
Mayank being worried was touching !
Hospital scene was so sweet and touching!!
So Rajkumari is coming soon...That's a happy ending!!
Like I said, u r an awesome writer. Please keep writing on Mayur!!

Edited by Ishita16 - 19 January 2011 at 1:26am

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Ridhi. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 11:32am | IP Logged
lovely endingBig smile
plz start another os if possible

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DhanakZ IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
Wao dear This great happy ending also make me happy
Great update dear I am so happy that all the misunderstandings are solved and they are together again
Thank U so much for this lovely Os dear
Thanks for Pm
Waiting for your more Mayur creations
With Love Heart

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cutiepie12 Goldie

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
ClapClap awesum jiya mindblowing ye to khatam hogaya ab kia hogaCry
awwww m gonna miss it shooo much
u truely r a brillaint  writer dnt ever stop writng n keep writing more n more mayur ff.....
luv u loadz jaaniHeart

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Payal-15 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 1:29pm | IP Logged
Nice series of OS'es JiyaBig smileClap

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MyInspirationz IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
It was beautiful... very beautiful..

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.SilentPrincess IF-Rockerz

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AmyArTiMayUr IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 2:24pm | IP Logged
Very cute JiyaBig smile

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