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With You...Forever... (MayUr OS Pg 87) (Page 14)

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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 7:10am | IP Logged
ghar ka kya description diya hey yaar..........it's beautiful..........i was just go there.............nice update............waiting for next part

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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 9:40am | IP Logged

very nice update...

update soon...
and plz write more in next update...
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Sho sweet part
Plz update next part soon
Thanks for pm
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Lovely update Jiya.
Can't wait for the next part.
Please update soon and thanks for the pm.
 
Alisha xx
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LOVELY UPDATE JIAH

 PLEASE UPDATE SOON
 WAITING FOR THE NEXT
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Part 6

Hi people!! Thank you so much for bearing with me till now and liking my work. I know that this story is going a little too long, but I really did not want to rush it. So, as you guessed correctly, this is not the last part of this OS. Anyways, hope you like this one too. Embarrassed

Mayank and Nupur have just returned from their sightseeing tour. They enter the hall. Nupur is looking very excited.

Nupur: Aaj kitna maza aaya naa? Kitni khubsurat jagah hai yeh!!

Mayank: Haan…wo to hai

Nupur: To tum maante ho naa, ki meri choice achchi hai!

Mayank: Isme naa maan ne waali kya baat hai, yeh to mujhe tabhi pata chal gaya tha jab tumne mujhe choose kiya tha.

Nupur: Mayank!!

He pulls her closer to him, wraps puts his arms on her shoulder, and says…

Mayank: "Sach Nupur. I am very lucky ki tumne mujhe choose kiya," (he suddenly gets emotional), "par main tumhare expectations pe khara nahi utar paya. I am sorry Nupur, main tumhe kuch nahi de paaya. Tum meri Simran toh ban gayi, par main tumhara Raj nahi ban paaya. Main…"

Before he could say any more, she places her finger on his lips in a gesture to stop. She says…

Nupur: "sshh…kisne kaha tumse, ke tum mere Raj nahi ho? Tum usse bhi bahut zyaada ho, kyunki tum mere Mayank ho, sirf aur sirf mere. Tumhe pata hai, main is duniya ki sabse lucky girl hoon, jisse tum jaisa saathi mila. Tumne mujhe jitna pyaar diya, utna pyaar shayad hi koi kisiko karta hai. Tumse zyaada pyaar, mujhe aur koi nahi kar sakta Mayank, koi bhi nahi." (She holds his face in her palms, and kisses his forehead.) "I love you Mayank, aur isse zyaada mujhe kuch nahi chahiye."

He engulfs her in a tight embrace, and says…

Mayank: "I love you Nupur, I love you"

She breaks the hug, and pulls back.

Nupur: "Achcha, bahut hua drama, ab tum jaao fresh ho jaao." She smiles at him, "main coffee lekar aati hoon…"

Mayank: "Nahi…tum thak gayi hogi…main coffee banata hoon…tum fresh ho jaao.."

Nupur (smiles): "Thik hai…"

Mayank: "Aur jaldi ajana. Kyunki…"

Nupur: "…kyunki tumhe bani hui coffee baar baar garm karke peena achcha nahi lagta…" she smiles again… "main abhi aati hoon…"

After a while

Mayank is in the kitchen, and the coffee is ready. It's chilling outside, but the mild fire blazing in the hearth has made the sitting hall quite warm. He is in his tracks with a white vest over it. He carries the two coffee mugs, and places himself comfortably on the carpet, resting his back on the couch kept in front of the fireplace, and calls out...

Mayank: "Nupur!! Jaldi aao, coffee thandi ho jaayegi!!"

Nupur emerges at the staircase, looking as beautiful as an angel, in a white silk night dress hanging till her knees. Her long wet hair draped till her waist, few strands lay carelessly on her shoulder. Mayank could not help staring at her, he felt as if a real angel from heaven has come down to the earth, just for him. She feels his eyes on her, and a cute smile appears on her lips. She comes closer, sits down beside him, and looks in his eyes. Mayank is still speechless.

Nupur: "Kya soch rahe ho Mayank?"

Mayank: "Soch raha hoon, ki maine apni zindagi mein kuch to zaroor achcha kiya hoga, jo mujhe tum mili…"

Nupur drops her gaze, blushing. She touches his hand, and takes the coffee mug that he was holding.

Nupur: "Ye mere liye hai naa?"

Mayank (snaps out of his state of daze): "haan…"

They sip on the coffee quietly, and she suddenly places her head on his shoulder. He's a little surprised, but then he puts his arm around her, and pulls her close. She snuggles up to him, and raises her head to look at his face. He places a loving kiss on her forehead. She closes her eyes. He kisses her beautiful eyes and rubs his nose against hers. He could hear her breath getting faster now. He takes a look at her face again. Her closed eyes; her trembling lips that looked like newly bloomed rose-petals; she was so beautiful. He gently places his lips over the rose petals, and she doesn't resist. She places her palms on his cheeks, and pulls him nearer. His hand tightens his grip on her petite waist. They get lost in the moment for a while, hoping it would never end; and then he moves back. She opens her eyes, her cheeks flushing red. She pulls back from his grip, and runs to the stairs, disappearing into the bedroom. Mayank sits there in a state of awe. He slowly gets up and steps forward, towards the staircase.

As Mayank enters the bedroom, he sees her. She is standing at the window, her palm placed carelessly on the glass pane. She's facing her back towards him, looking out of the window; she senses his presence in the room, but doesn't move. He tip toes to her from behind, and places his palm on hers. She shivers at his touch. He floats his fingers on her hand, up to her shoulder; guides her hair to fall on the other side. He slides down the shoulder strap gently; and kisses on her warm skin. She clutches her hands together near her chest, while he leaves a trail of kisses from her shoulder to her neck; his hands securely wrapped around her waist, holding her close against him. He turns her around to face him; her eyes closed, her heart thumping so loudly that she fears that he might hear it. He sees a strand of hair fluttering on her face, bothering his view. He gently tucks it behind her ears, and places a kiss on her forehead; and then on her eyes, her red cheeks; and then finally he finds her lips and seals them with immense love and passion. Her hands crawl up his back; her grip tightening, inviting him closer to her. He lifts her up in his arms and carries her to the bed. The light goes off…Blushing

Next morning

The morning sunrays enter the room, welcoming the lovebirds to a new day. Mayank opens his eyes; he doesn't see her beside him. He looks around, his eyes looking for her. He sees her standing in front of the window, wrapped in a white shawl. He remembers their last night, and a smile escapes his lips. He goes up to her, hugs her from behind, and says… 

Mayank: "Good morning jaan…Heart" He plants a kiss above her ears.

She doesn't respond. He sees her engulfed in thoughts as she is gazing out of the window. He tries to follow the path her eyes are looking at, but can't.

Mayank: "Kya dekh rahi ho Nupur?"

She touches the glass pane with her finger, and points towards something. He again tries to follow, and this time he succeeds. It has been snowing all night, so splashes of white snow are lying here and there on the road outside their window. Across the road, there is another wooden house, just like the one they are staying in. A little girl is playing in the snow that lay in the courtyard of that house. She was very small, and would fall down after every other step, and then she would let out a very cute chuckle. Nupur was watching her play, and she didn't realize that she had a strange yet beautiful smile on her face, that did not go unnoticed by Mayank. A young couple watched the kid from the verandah of the house, probably they were her parents. Suddenly, the man came running towards the child, and flung her high up in the air. Nupur clenched on Mayank's arm in fea. But the kid was laughing, as he caught her back.

Mayank: "Ghabraao mat Nupur, wo usse kabhi girne nahi dega"

Nupur looked at her husband with a question in her eyes. He said…

Mayank: "Koi papa apne bachche ko kabhi girne nahi deta. Wo hamesha hota hai usske saath, usska haath pakad kar use uthaane ke liye" and he realizes what he has just said. He was not supposed to say this. He has just reminded her of someone whom she loved dearly, but the mere mention of him pierced her heart; her father. He turns her around, and looks at her face, and he sees a drop of tear rolling down her cheeks. He wipes it off gently with his palm, and nods his head in silence. She looks in his eyes and then looks away.

Nupur: "Pata hai Mayank? Jab main chhoti thi, bauji mujhse kaha karte the ki mere liye door desh se ek Raja aayega, aur wo mujhe apni Rani banake rakhega. Mujhse bahut pyaar karega. Aur aaj jab unka wo sapna pura ho gaya hai, tab unhone mujhse hi mooh pher liya!! Mayank? Kya humne itni badi galti ki hai, ki itne saalon baad bhi wo humein maaf nahi kar paaye?"

Mayank: "par Nupur…unhone tumhaare liye ek sapna dekha tha, ki tumhari shaadi kisi aise insaan se hogi jo tumhe sach much ek rani banake rakhega, tumhe duniya ki har khushi dega.…aur main tumhe wo khushiyaan…." He is interrupted by Nupur's fingers touching his lips in gesture to stop.

Nupur: "Mayank, main humari iss chotisi duniya mein bahut khush hoon. Mujhe aur koi khushi nahi chahiye. Main kisi raja ki rani nahi ban paayi to kya hua, main tumhare dil ki rani to hoon, aur yeh mere liye iss saari duniya ki daulat se kayi zyaada hai. Humein kisi cheez ki kami nahi hai Mayank, kisi cheez ki bhi nahi." She touches her forehead with his.

Mayank: "Sirf ek cheez ki kami hai"

Nupur: "Kya?"

Mayank smiles at her, and points out to the window, She turns around to see the little girl playing and laughing in her parents' lap, and they were laughing with her. He hugs her again from behind, and whispers in her ear, "iss Raja aur Rani ki zindagi mein sirf ek chhotisi Rajkumari ki kami hai" Blushing         

End of Part 6

Sorry for the long part, I hope you didn't get bored. Please do comment/criticize 

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the update is osom the emotions and love they share is amazingEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedWink



Edited by mahakmev - 14 January 2011 at 1:46am
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Posted: 14 January 2011 at 1:40am | IP Logged
hey i am second not bad yaarWink......i just finished reading the previous parts.....and got your pm for this part........lucky me......LOL
that was superb.....too goodEmbarrassedClap
ab to mujhe bhi choti si rajkumari ka intezar hai......Blushing
but really cute partBig smile
cont ASAP......

love
tasfia



Edited by tasfia123 - 14 January 2011 at 1:49am

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