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With You...Forever... (MayUr OS Pg 87) (Page 12)

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Part 5

Hi guys! I am back with part 5, Mayan and Nupur reach ManaliEmbarrassed

Its night time; Mayank and Nupur have just reached Manali. They have had a long tiring journey, first in the flight from Mumbai to Delhi and then in a bus from Delhi to Manali. Mayank has booked a cottage for their stay. The caretaker greets them politely as they reach. He takes their bags and starts showing them the cottage. It's a beautiful little wooden house that enters to a beautiful sitting area, adorned with nice paintings and stone sculptures. There is a fireplace in a corner with a nice and cozy couch placed in front. The dining area is just ahead with an open kitchen just beside the dining table. Wooden stairs at the end of the room lead to the bedroom upstairs. It has got a terrace adjacent to it. The big windows are covered with clear glass panes and snow white curtains. There is a king size bed in the middle with a dressing unit just beside.

Nupur is overwhelmed seeing the place. She just says…

Nupur: It's so beautiful…

Mayank (murmurs):…tumse zyaada nahi

Nupur: huh??

Mayank just smiles. The caretaker interrupts…

Caretaker: Saab, aapko kisi bhi cheez ki zaroorat ho, toh wo phone hai (he points to a black phone kept beside the bed), aap 143 dial karenge toh main aa jaaonga….abhi aaplog fresh hoke neeche aa jaayie, main khana laga deta hoon

Mayank: Thik hai

After two hours.

They have just finished their dinner. Mayank is talking to the caretaker, discussing the locality, and other stuff. Nupur is looking very tired, so she says…

Nupur: Mayank, I'm very tired. Main upar jaa rahi hoon, tum aa jaana, thik hai?

Mayank: Ok.

She glides upstairs, while Mayank is busy chalking out a plan for their vacation. After a while, he enters the bedroom, only to find her in deep sleep. He could not help staring at her innocent face. He walks to the other side of the bed, pushes himself inside the warm comforter, and stoops over his wife. "I am so lucky to have you Nupur", he thinks, and places a gentle kiss on her cheek, caring not to wake her up. Just then, she turns in her sleep, and her head falls on his arm. For a second, a glimpse of their Ahmedabad trip flashes in front of his eyes. He smiles to himself, and then wraps his hand, that was beneath her, around her shoulder, and gently pulls her close. She cuddles up to him in her sleep, moving her head closer to his neck. She puts her hand around his chest, just as if she's hugging a teddy bear. He closes his eyes with a smile on his face, and pulls the warm quilt over themselves, slowly wandering away in the world of dreams.

Next Morning

The soft rays of the morning sun entered the room, and Nupur opened her eyes. She found herself in the secure arms of her husband. She realized that she had slept all night with her head on his shoulder, and blushed at the thought. She looked at his sleeping face; a smile of content adorned his lips. She kissed his forehead, and gently freed herself. She was about to go, when a hand pulled her from behind. She was not prepared for the sudden jerk, and she fell right on Mayank.

Nupur: Kya kar rahe ho! Chhodo…

Mayank: Kuch aisa kaho, jo main kar paaoon…(he holds her tightly)

Nupur: Mayank please…chchodo naa

Mayank: Pehle mujhe ek good morning kiss do…

Nupur Blushing: Mayank…yeh kya bachpana hai?

Mayank: thik hai…mujhe koi jaldi nahi…(he holds her more tightly)

Nupur: Achcha baba…thik hai….(and she kisses on his cheek)…khush? Ab mujhe jaane do…

Mayank leaves her with a naughty smile playing on his face. He sees Nupur run away blushing, and says to himself "abhi tum itni sharma rahi ho Mrs. Sharma, to aage kya karogi?"

End of Part 5 please don't kill me for the short update. I will update the next part soonEmbarrassed, and I promise it won't disappoint you like this one. Till then, stay tunedBig smile 

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lovely update jiah.....cant wait to read the next part........
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hayeee!!!Day Dreaming
part 5... shoo romantic!!!!Day DreamingEmbarrassed
superduper cute jiya!
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awesome n amazing part!!!
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