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Promise and Pyar FF#2 (Thanks buddies - Pg 128) (Page 97)

sanu3108 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 8:09pm | IP Logged
aww.. Maan is really loosing it now... Geet puttar sudhar ja 

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basicquestion1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 8:21pm | IP Logged
wait i think maan is losing it ...and i'm about to loose it too. does she not get any butterflies in her heart. even if she is very naive and don't know anything about marriage and all's a girl's natural reaction to the guy u like. it doesn't even matter what age, innocence, education or anything. it's mother nature. 
feel sorry for maan to be married to geet. i'm sure if someone had to say everything about sr in words, it would be very awkward.

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 8:27pm | IP Logged
Part 458
M:geet i accept tht i love ur nw ur innocence is injurious 2 our love
G:kya?innocence is injurious 2 love?
G:(laughs)it sounds like 'smoking is injurious 2 health'
M:bus.enough(oye MSK both mean d same)
M:i tried 2 handle u u have crossed all ur limits.nw i've lost all my patience(pushes her on bed)
M:(starts 2 unbutton his shirt)
G:(heart stopped beating&shoughts)ye aap kya kar rahe hain?
M:(strips his shirt)
G:(closes her eyes)
M:(leans 2 wards her)
G:hey babaji madad karna
M:geet ab aankhein kholo

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 8:50pm | IP Logged
Part 459
M:geet,ab ankhein kholo varna...
G:nai kholungi.u fisrt wear ur shirt
M:nw if u don't open ur eyes i'm going 2 give u an ACTION kiss
G:teek hai.i'm ready 4 it.ACTION kiss is even better thn seeing u without shirt
M:(lost his selfcontrol&starts his ACTION kiss suddenly)
G:(because of his sudden kiss,a current passes thru her body,enjoys it&she reciprocate his kiss with so much of love)
M:(surprised @ her reaction,closes his eyes&enjoying d moment)
after few min Maan first breaks d kiss
G:(opens her eyes,gets up&sits&breaths fastly)
M:(feels bad)geet,i'm sorry
G:(turns2him)i'm sorry

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 9:05pm | IP Logged
great part..
love it.

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 9:21pm | IP Logged
Part 460
G:i'm sorry
M:nai geet,it's all my fault.i shouldn't have done like this
G:(doesn't want him 2 feel guilt)nai nai it's all my fault.i'm d one who forced u 2 do it
M:(hugs her gently)
G:(hugs him back,closes her eyes&feels his bare chest)
M:(caressing her head)
G:u know na d slow processing brain of ur premature baby needs more time
M:(teases her)bt geet i've already given u enough time.still if u can't understand anything thn it means tht ur brain has stopped working completely
G:i've frustrated u.hena?
M:haan geet,bohat
G:i'm ready 2 take d punishment
M:haan,u should be punished

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 9:23pm | IP Logged
loved it......
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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 9:35pm | IP Logged
wow cant wait for the punishment...

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