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Promise and Pyar FF#2 (Thanks buddies - Pg 128) (Page 93)

Audiwalia IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 6:45am | IP Logged
Stop it tonya...... Otherwise my folks whould definetly send me to mental asylum......hahaha..

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BluntlySpeaking Goldie

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 6:46am | IP Logged
hey tonya....started reading ur thread just yesterday and since then havent stopped laughing.....outstanding fiction!! perky, crisp and oh so humorous! i am a great fan of fiction written in 1st person.....pls add me to ur PM

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 6:46am | IP Logged
Part 449
M:(shocked,lowers his gaze&looks @ himself 2 check whether he is wearing shirt&takes a long breath)(buddies,ye geetne sach mein maanko pagal kardiya)
M:geet whose shirt u r talking abt?
G:(still eyes closed&points 2 TV again)his shirt
maan&dadi both turn 2wards TV¬ices tht Lord Ram is being shirtless
maan&dadi:(blast in2 laughter)
G:(opens her eyes&stares @ them)y u both r laughing?
M:(could't control laughing)geet wht did u say? Lord Ram aur Shirt(again blasts in2 laughter)
G:(she is very happy2see maan laughing like this.she is silently staring@him)

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namita25 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 6:51am | IP Logged she wants lord Rama to wear shirt...

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 7:10am | IP Logged
Part 450
dadi(stops laughing&staring@her grandson with her eyes wideopen)
M:(holding his stomach&still laughing)
geet&dadima r staring @ him unbelievably
after few minutes
M:(stops laughing&stares@dadi&geet)aap log yesa kyun dekh rahe hai?
geet&dadi:(don't want 2 make him feel embarassed or both ignore his question)
G:so is he Lord Ram?
M:geet,haven't u ever watched Ramayan?
dadi:par geet beta,just nw u said tht u like Ramayan very much?
G:i lied 2 u.sorry dadima
dadi:(smiles)koi bath nai beta
G:is he Lord Ram?
M:geet he's nt Lord Ram.He is Gurmeet Choudhry,famous actor

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rsroopali IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 7:14am | IP Logged
i think maan is reallllyyyyyyyy smithen by GC just like manisha by maan

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 7:39am | IP Logged
Part 451
G:kya?Gurmeet Choudhry doesn't wear shirt?
dadi:geet beta he thn&thre he strips his shirt in GHSP serial(buddies,no offence)
G:par ye tho Ramayan hai.has Gurmeet stripped his shirt in Ramayan too?
M:dadima,i'll deal with geet
M:no geet,he hasn't stripped it
G:thn whre is his shirt?
M:geet,in Ramayan,Gurmeet is acting as Lord Ram
G:hmm(listening2him carefully as if maan is telling her d entire Ramayan story)
M:so he can't wear shirt in Ramayan
M:Lord Ram din use 2 wear shirt
M:Ramayan happened in itihas period

Edited by tonyahk - 11 January 2011 at 6:35pm

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leen10leen Groupbie

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 7:54am | IP Logged
hahahhaaa.....srsly this is one of my favs....
cnt get enough of it...
u r a great writer...
plz continue soon..
n do add me to ur pm list if u have one...Smile

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