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Promise and Pyar FF#2 (Thanks buddies - Pg 128) (Page 92)

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 7:45pm | IP Logged
Part 456
M:dadima,we r comfortable with our new couch.so don want d old one
G:par...
M:geet lets go(holds her hand,takes her outta dadi's room forcibly)
dadi:(happy&selftalk)acha hua.atleat maan is in d right frame of mind(smiles)

@maneet room
M:(releases geet's hand)
both sit on d couch
M:(frustrated)
G:(starts her bak bak)y did u refuse 2 take our old couch back?
M:kya?
G:i miss tht couch very much
M:acha,u r missing ur couch?
G:haan.don't u remember on d othr day hw much we struggled 2 get back d couch from dadima?
M:...
G:bt 2day dadima offered 2 give back our couch voluntarily
M:...

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 7:47pm | IP Logged
geet is so innocent..
still they're best..

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Part 457
G:don't u remember hw much we fought 4 d bed on d couchwala night?
M:...
G:just nw we got a golden oppourtunity 2 get our couch back
M:...
G:bt u've spoiled everything
M:(annoyed)geet tumari problem kya hai?
G:i want my couch back
M:geet wht r u going2do with it?
G:i will sleep on d couch.so tht u can have d whole bed 4 urself
M:(heart attack)kya?do u want 2 sleep on d couch?
G:ji(innocently)
M:(lost it)geet,nw tell me onething
G:onething
M:kya?
G:u asked me na 2 tell u 'onething'
M:chup bilkul chup
G:...
M:geet r u really tht innocent or u r purposely doing all these 2 annoy me?

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 8:09pm | IP Logged
aww.. Maan is really loosing it now... Geet puttar sudhar ja 

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 8:21pm | IP Logged
wait i think maan is losing it ...and i'm about to loose it too. does she not get any butterflies in her heart. even if she is very naive and don't know anything about marriage and all ...it's a girl's natural reaction to the guy u like. it doesn't even matter what age, innocence, education or anything. it's mother nature. 
feel sorry for maan to be married to geet. i'm sure if someone had to say everything about sr in words, it would be very awkward.

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 8:27pm | IP Logged
Part 458
M:geet i accept tht i love ur innocence.bt nw ur innocence is injurious 2 our love
G:kya?innocence is injurious 2 love?
M:haan
G:(laughs)it sounds like 'smoking is injurious 2 health'
M:geeeeetttthh
G:...
M:bus.enough(oye MSK both mean d same)
G:...
M:i tried 2 handle u gently.bt u have crossed all ur limits.nw i've lost all my patience(pushes her on bed)
G:(shocked)
M:(starts 2 unbutton his shirt)
G:(heart stopped beating&shoughts)ye aap kya kar rahe hain?
M:(strips his shirt)
G:(closes her eyes)
M:(leans 2 wards her)
G:hey babaji madad karna
M:geet ab aankhein kholo
G:nai

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 8:50pm | IP Logged
Part 459
M:geet,ab ankhein kholo varna...
G:nai kholungi.u fisrt wear ur shirt
M:nw if u don't open ur eyes i'm going 2 give u an ACTION kiss
G:teek hai.i'm ready 4 it.ACTION kiss is even better thn seeing u without shirt
M:(lost his selfcontrol&starts his ACTION kiss suddenly)
G:(because of his sudden kiss,a current passes thru her body,enjoys it&she reciprocate his kiss with so much of love)
M:(surprised @ her reaction,closes his eyes&enjoying d moment)
after few min Maan first breaks d kiss
G:(opens her eyes,gets up&sits&breaths fastly)
M:(feels bad)geet,i'm sorry
G:(turns2him)i'm sorry

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great part..
love it.

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