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Promise and Pyar FF#2 (Thanks buddies - Pg 128) (Page 86)

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
dadi u have a terror mind 

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ramahesh IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 11:57pm | IP Logged
so cute romance yaar
really our geet is innocent 
loved it....

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 12:07am | IP Logged
Part 436
@Maneet room
Chandu:(knocking d door)
M:(opens d door angrily)
Chandu:(din realise tht maan has already opened d door,he continues knocking&end up in knocking on Maan's forehead)
M:(super duper annoyed)
Chandu:(realises tht he just nw knocked on Maan's forehead&frieghtened 2 death)
G:(as she is very tired,she has fallen asleep in few secs.&doesn't know wht is going @ door)
Chandu:shaab wo wo...
M:Chandu can't u see tht i'm standing here?whre r ur eyes? (OMG...CID's eyes have been stolen.nw MSK wants d CID 2 detect them)
Chandu:on my face sir

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 12:19am | IP Logged
M:Chandu can't u see tht i'm standing here?whre r ur eyes? (OMG...CID's eyes have been stolen.nw MSK wants d CID 2 detect them)
Chandu:on my face sir

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 12:35am | IP Logged
Part 437
Chandu:(thinks tht MSK couldn't he starts 2 explain with a demo)haan sir. my eyes r on my face only.they r below my forehead,above my cheeks&on either side of nose.dekhiye sir(shows his nose 2 maan)
M:(feels like punching Chandu's nose)Chandu nw stop telling me d location ur eyes with satellite precision.tum kabse GPS(Global Positioning System) bangaya?
Chandu:Ji PS?(Chandu's formula:GPS=Ji PS)
M:(stern look)
Chandu:ji ye PS matlab kya hai?
Chandu:haan sir.just nw u said abt some PS
M:haan GPS
Chandu:Ji PS
M:Chandu wo G PS nai GPS
Chandu:Ji PS

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 12:54am | IP Logged
Part 438
M:chandu nw stop it. GPS means Global Positioning System
Chandu:nai sir.Ji PS means Ji Police Station
M:(lost it&shoughts)chup
M:(turns2bed¬ices tht geet is laying on bed)has she slept?
Chandu:nai sir,madam is watching TV?
M:(confused,turns 2wards TV&Selftalk)d TV is switched off.thn hw can geet watch TV?
Chandu:(notices d confused face of maan&says)haan sir,ryt nw madam is watching Ramayan
M:(hell confused)chandu r u taking abt geet?
Chandu:nai sir,i'm talking abt dadima
M:(feels like killing chandu)y did u knock @ my door?
chandu:dadima told me 2 bring u 2 her room

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 1:09am | IP Logged
Part 439
M:teek hai.tum jao.mein aaunga
Chandu:nai sir madam told me 2 bring u immediately
M:chandu tume suna nai maine kya kaha.ab jao

M:(close d door&comes 2 geet&calls her)geet
G:...(in sound sleep)
M:(smiles&selftalk)i'm disturbing u too much.ab sojao(kisses her forehead&leaves 4 dadi's room)

@dadi's room
dadi:(still watching Ramayan&selftalk)y hasn't maan come yet?(thinks something&smiles 2 herself)
M:(enters dadi's room)dadima
dadi:ayiye maan
M:y did u call me?is anything important?
dadi:(pulls his legs)acha.should i need any reason 2 see my grandson?
M:nai dadima

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 1:26am | IP Logged
Part 440
dadi:maan beta baitiyena
M:dadima wo...
dadi:maan do u have any important work nw?
dadi:(hides her smile)phir kya?ab baitiyena
M:(sits with a sad face)
dadi:(interestingly watching Ramayan)
M:([email protected])
dadi:(turns2maan)arre maan beta y r u staring @ me?
M:kuch nai
dadi:(laughing loudly inside seeing maan's condition)
M:(dying 2 go 2 his room&after few minutes)dadima y did u call me?
dadi:maan i'm so bored 2 watch Ramayan i called u 4 a company
dadi:kya hum aapke sath thoda time spend nai kar sakthe?
M:(smiles)yesa kuch nai hai dadima

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