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Promise and Pyar FF#2 (Thanks buddies - Pg 128) (Page 84)

shah10 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 7:47pm | IP Logged
awsome...geet is fablous..

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 7:56pm | IP Logged
Part 432
M:teek hai geet.nw show me how would u close my mouth with ur mouth
G:teek hai maan.nw show me how would u close my mouth with ur mouth
M:(smirks&selftalk)ab dekho
G:(smirks&selftalk)whn it comes 2 arguement,no one can beat me
M:(leans close 2 her)
G:(leans close 2 him)
M:(controls his laughter&selftalk)geet,nw u r going 2 gimme an ACTION kiss
G:(selftalk)i won't leave u tht easily.i'm going 2 reciprocrate whtever u do.because of my torture u urself going 2 run out of this room.thn i can sleep peacefully
M:(moves close 2 her further)
G:(moves close 2 him further)

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 8:14pm | IP Logged
Part 433
M:(caresses her cheek)
G:(caresses his cheek)
M:(he lost his self control.he is no more comic.he has gone naughty.doesn't realise wht he is doing)
G:(still determined 2 achieve her mission 2 kick maan outta she doesn't realise wht she is doing)
M:(seductively calls her)geet
G:(seductively calls him)maan
M:(holds her shoulders&pulls her 2wards him)
G:(holds his shoulder&pulls him 2wards her)
M:(stares@her lips)
G:(stares@his lips)
M:(touches her lips with his index finger)
G:(touches his lips with her index finger)
M:(seductively)geet I luv u
G:(seductively)maan I luv u

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vrsharma IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 8:28pm | IP Logged
not able to control my laugh, poor geet don't know what she is doing

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 8:32pm | IP Logged
Part 434
M:(kisses her lips gently)
G:(selftalk)hw 2 reciprocate this
M:(after few seconds,he breaks d kiss&moves away lil bit&staring@her romantically)
G:(still in revenge mode&selftalk)nw i can reciprocate it.hena?
G:(moves close 2 him&kisses his lips gently)
M:(surprised&closes his eyes&enjoying d kiss)
G:(selftalk)tht is it.he can't tolerate my torture anymore.nw he is going 2 run outta d room
M:(lost in her kiss)
G:(she breaks d kiss&moves lil bit away&staring@him romantically as he did few min. ago)
M:(couldn't get enough of her kiss.again moves close 2 her 2 kiss her)

knock @ door

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 8:38pm | IP Logged
She kissed...... Nd didn't feel anything is she dat idiot...... Nd y dat knock (CID.....chandu)

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 8:41pm | IP Logged
Hi buddies,
before posting d next part, i want 2 know whether d scenes r going 'x' rated. part 431-434 r just 4 please don't mistake me.

waiting 4 ur reply.

143 buddies,


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sanu3108 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 8:42pm | IP Logged

dash is maan sir minus sir  ..........another KILLER   ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
haan u've 2 subtract sir from maan sir 2 get dash.... chalo now they'll talk in maths language LOL

M:geet call me 'maan' atleast 4 once
M:pl. geet  (awww......  poor thing)



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