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Promise and Pyar FF#2 (Thanks buddies - Pg 128) (Page 80)

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 10:54am | IP Logged
Sitting online in the TRAIN!!! Beat my heights of addiction!!!

Loved the updates Tonya... Too cute!!!!

Continue soon!!!!

Love u...

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Part 422
dadi:y u people r back so early from office?
(maneet say simultaneously)
G:dadima he is tired
M:dadima she is tired
G:(turns2maan&asks)am i tired?
M:phir kya?am i tired?
maneet forgot tht dadi is watching thm
G:dust danav.u lied?
M:tho kya?
dadi:(enjoying maneet's fight,remembers geet's questions abt sameera,her crying 2 maan on phone&understands tht something good must have happened between maneet&she keeps quiet)teek hai aap log andhar ayiye(turns 2 leave)
G:(2 maan)lier
M:(twists)geet y r u calling dadima a lier?don't u know hw 2 respect elders?
dadi:(stops&stares@maneet)
G:???

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Originally posted by -Mrinalini-

Sitting online in the TRAIN!!! Beat my heights of addiction!!!

Loved the updates Tonya... Too cute!!!!

Continue soon!!!!

Love u...

Mina


Hi Mina,

missing u since afternoon.

have a nice journey dear.

143

Tonya

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 11:19am | IP Logged
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Part 423
G:dadima,i din call u like this
M:geet,don't be scared of dadima 4 having called her a lier.i'm with u
G:(selftalk)dust danav
M:dadima,nw a days geet doesn't respect anyone
dadi:(understands tht her grandson is playing with his wife)haan maan,aap teek keh rahe hain
G:(shocked)
M:(confused)
dadi:geet has gone very bad.she isn't respecting anyone.i can't believe tht geet can behave like this.i thought she is good girl.bt she is...
M:(becomes angry)rukhiye dadima
G:(stares@maan)
dadi:(smirks)
M:i can't tolerate anyone talking ill of my wife
dadi:(happy)
G:(feels bad 4 dadi)suniye
M:?

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Part 424
G:pl.don't talk 2 dadima like this
M:(calms down&feels bad)dadima,i'm sorry
dadi:maan beta,i'm nt worried abt wht u said.i'm happy tht u r caring so much 4 geet
M:...
G:dadima wo...
dadi:geet beta,don't worry.i know abt maan
maneet silent
dadi:ab andher ayiye
all come inside
M:dadima,jim&rose kahan hai?
dadi:they have gone 4 sight seeing.they will be back 4 dinner
M:teek hai

after lunch maneet in their room...
M:(sitting on bed&checking emails)
G:(since she din get proper sleep last night,she feels sleepy&lays on bed)
M:geet ye tum kya karahi hu?
G:i'm sleepy
M:i want 2 talk 2 u

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Part 425
G:i know wht u r going 2 talk abt
M:(surprised)kya?
G:abt 143.hena?
M:nai geet
G:phir kya?
M:teek hai.nw u say 143 2 me&i'll tell wht d matter is
G:143
M:143 geet
G:sir,wht is meant by 143?
M:geet,nw we've some other urgent issue discuss abt
G:(remembers d car kiss&nervous&selftalk)urgent issue?hey babaji wht is he talking abt?
M:(reads her face&teases)geet tum jaise soch rahi ho waise nahi hai
G:(fumbles)wht am i thinking?
M:u r thinking abt some ACTION scenes
G:(frightened&selftalk)how did he find out?
M:geet
G:nai,i'm nt thinking abt any ACTION scenes
M:(smiles)teek hai
G:....

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