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Promise and Pyar FF#2 (Thanks buddies - Pg 128) (Page 55)

tonyahk Goldie

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Posts: 1671

Posted: 08 January 2011 at 9:49pm | IP Logged
Part 379
adi:(laughing)he he he
M:(comes outta shock by adi's laugh)adi
adi:sorry sir
G:(still in shock)
G:(comes outta shock)
adi:(as a true friend,he is dying 2 save geet from maan)
G:(playing with her dupatta in tension)
adi:(interferes)sir,pl.don't get angry on geet 4 calling u 'suniye'
M:(confused&selftallk)here i'm dying 2 hear geet calling me this adi is spoiling everything
G:(selftalk)whts is adi sir going 2 say nw?
adi:(continues)sir,geet is in some tension.tht is y she is calling us 'suniye'.few min. back she even called d peon 'suniye'.

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Audiwalia IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 5870

Posted: 08 January 2011 at 9:58pm | IP Logged
Oh no stupid adi spoiling every thing *kick* 4r him...... stupid, idiot, fool, ghada.

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mrk-1 IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 8843

Posted: 08 January 2011 at 10:18pm | IP Logged
adi , you r making the situation even more worse..

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posts: 1671

Posted: 08 January 2011 at 10:20pm | IP Logged
Part 380
G:(turns 2 adi&grinds her teath&selftalk)y adi sir is telling lie?
M:(wants confirmation)adi,did she call d peon 'suniye'?r u telling d truth?
adi:haan bilkul sach hai sir
G:(scared,turns2maan&shakes her head in negative)
M:(ignores her)adi,ab tum jao
adi:par sir,geet is innoce...
M:adi,tume suna nai maine kya kaha?ab jao
adi:(feeling bad 4 geet,so he tries 2 divert maan's attention)sir,wo agra project...
M:adi,i'll call u later.ab jao
adi:(looks@geet with sympathy&leaves)
G:(selftalk)hey babaji,kal pinky,aaj adi sir.ab mein kya karu?
M:(silently observing her)

Edited by tonyahk - 08 January 2011 at 10:26pm

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shah10 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 10:24pm | IP Logged
adi is so funny..

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 10:45pm | IP Logged
Part 381
G:(selftalk)geet,nw he is going 2 kill u.nw run 4 ur life(turns&starts 2 leave maan's cabin silently)
M:geet ruko
M:tum kahan jarahi ho?
G:mera cabin
G:mereliye kuch kam hai
M:kaunse kam?
G:secretary ka kam(starts2leave again)
M:(comes close2 her&makes her sit on d chair forecibly&locks her in d chair with his arms&leans 2wards her)
G:(frightened&heart beats fastly&shoughts)sir,ye aap kya kar rahe hai?
M:(leans further closer)
G:sir,pl lemme go
M:(he lost wht is he doing&caresses her cheek)
G:(stares@him horror)sir,mujhe dar lagta hai

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heermeher IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 10:46pm | IP Logged
I want the day to end maan and geet alone in the night where maan wants to spend time with her and geet trying to avoid it.  And fiaaly daadi ask geet to sleep with her as she wants to talk to geet.  Maan getting frustated and then the next morning maan avoiding geet

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 11:03pm | IP Logged
Part 382
M:(realises wht he is doing&moves away from her)
G:(takes long breath)
G:ji sir.kya mein ab ja sakthi hu?
G:kyun sir?(innocently)
M:geet tumari problem kya hai?
M:mein tumariliye kaun hu?
M:acha.atleast u remember this
G:y r u saying like this.maine kya kardiya?
M:tumne kya kardiya?(sarcastically)
M:(starts d list)u said 143 2 chandu,u called d peon 'suniye'&just nw in front of my eyes u r calling adi 'suniye'
G:it happened accidently
M:wait i'm nt yet done.on d next day of our shadi,u called me bhaiya&on d couchwala night u called me bhabi

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