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Promise and Pyar FF#2 (Thanks buddies - Pg 128) (Page 5)

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 4:02am | IP Logged
Part 313
M:(guesses wht would have happened&selftalk)geet do u want 2 play with Maan Singh Khurana?teek hai as u wish(smiles)ab dekho(calls her)geeth
G:...(pretends as if she is in deep sleep)
M:geet(releases her hands from his grip)
G:(still leaning on his chest with her eyes closed)
M:geet(pats on her shoulder)
G:...(self talk)geet,don't respond
M:(blows from his mouth in2 her face)
G:...(selftalk)dust danav,he is copying me
M:(caresses her cheek)
G:...(selftalk)acha nw he's doing something new
M:(whispers in her ears seductively)geeth
G:...(stopped breathing)hey babaji!wht is he doing?

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 4:05am | IP Logged
yaar what should i do with u the most romantic moment of Maaneet is becoming  comedy oneClap ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
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i have name ur FF as Maneet's romantic comics by Tonyahk even kids above 10 yrs can read

what say

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 4:18am | IP Logged
maan is  already in a naughty mood hope geet doesnt get up or opens her eyes

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 4:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by heermeher

yaar what should i do with u the most romantic moment of Maaneet is becoming comedy one

i have name ur FF as Maneet's romantic comics by Tonyahk even kids above 10 yrs can read

what say


OMG u r killing me with ur hilarious comments. loved d new name u have given 2 this FF. can't stop laughing ROFL. thank u so much yaar.

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 4:30am | IP Logged
Congrats for the new thread Tonya....

Sorry for the late comments!!!!

Maaneet have started to become so romantic!!! oye hoye!!!

Continue super soon!!!

Love

Mina

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 4:36am | IP Logged
oye hoye .. romance on the way ...  cool ...
 
waisay Tonya i liked heermeher's idea .... yaar i think u shud seriously think about having a romcom comic strip of Maneet ... like humtum types ... seriously it'll be soooooo awesome...
 
btw these two have the ability to turn an extremely romantic moment into comedy...    hatsoff to them and to you ...
 
keep the updates coming ... am lovin it ... tarrra ta ta ta ...
 
love
 
Sana

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 4:37am | IP Logged
hi Mina,
 
how are u hun... long time...
 
tum kab update ker rahee ho...  i miss ur regular updates ....
 
love
 
Sana

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 4:43am | IP Logged
Hey Sana...

I was planning to stop writing so planning to end all FFs!!!!

Was down with fever yesterday!!!!

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