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Promise and Pyar FF#2 (Thanks buddies - Pg 128) (Page 48)

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 2:10am | IP Logged
Part 371
M:geet,u did prove ur selfless love by saying tht u r ready 2 leave me whenever i ask u
G:...
M:patha hai geet,whenever u told me abt ur readiness 2 leave me,u indirectly threatned my life.u made me 2 realise my feelings 4 u
G:...
M:geet tht is y i'm saying tht u r my first &last love.samji tum?(tears in his eyes)
G:(leans on his chest&cries)
M:(hugs her as is an angel is protecting her baby&caresses her head)
G:(couldn't talk)
M:(kisses her eyes&forehead)geet,nw i want 2 tell d entire world tht i'm d luckiest dust danav who is d husband of this prematurely born baby
G:(smiles)

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 2:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tonyahk

Part 367
maneet break their hug
M:(cups geet's face)geet ab bolo,y did u cry?
G:patha nai kyun?bt as soon as i sensed tht u r going 2 say ILU,i couldn't control my tears
M:(teasing)acha,was it a such a tragic moment 2 u?
G:(teases)i'm nt sure
M:(removes his hands from her face&teases)teek hai.lets keep dis confession under suspension.when u become clear abt ur feelings on dis confession,we can activate it
G:(shocked&disappointed)nai nai yesa kuch nai hai.i'm happy abt it
M:geet,no need 2 hurry.think twice before taking any decision
G:pl. listen.no need 2 rethink.it's my final decision

aww... thats wat makes these two amazingly adorable ... confession mein comedy nikaal li in donon nay.... ye donon baaz nahin aanay walay .... aur waisay baaz na hi aayen to acha hai .. we just love them the way they are...  

btw tonya ji...congo shongo for the hall of fame... and thanks alot for the updates ... 

love ya

Sana

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 3:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tonyahk

Part 371
M:geet,u did prove ur selfless love by saying tht u r ready 2 leave me whenever i ask u (so true)
G:...
M:patha hai geet,whenever u told me abt ur readiness 2 leave me,u indirectly threatned my life.u made me 2 realise my feelings 4 u (after all dusht danav nay aisay aasani say thori na confess kerna thaa.... inflated ego jo thaa...)
G:... (masoom ki bolti band.. wondering he mera hi dusht danav hai naa)
M:geet tht is y i'm saying tht u r my first &last love.samji tum?(tears in his eyes) (aww .. jaanu bacha)
G:(leans on his chest&cries) (my baby ...)
M:(hugs her as is an angel is protecting her baby&caresses her head) (speechless... )
G:(couldn't talk) (jor ka jhatka zor se laga)
M:(kisses her eyes&forehead)geet,nw i want 2 tell d entire world tht i'm d luckiest dust danav who is d husband of this prematurely born baby (hell yes .. THE LUCKIEST DUSHT DANAV AND THE LUCKIEST PREMATURE BABYROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL)
G:(smiles) (phew...  finally muskurai)


u know wat babes... u surprise me with evry single update  ..  thanks a ton..  HugHugHugHugHugHugHug

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Part 372
G:(still hugging him)
M:(tries 2 cheer her up)geet galti hogayi
G:kya hua?
M:ye tho office hai
G:haan
M:geet y r u hugging ur boss in office?
G:kyunki i couldn't hug my husband in home
M:acha.bt geet if ur husband comes 2 know tht u hug ur boss like this,thn wht would happen?
G:do u have life insurance cover 4 u?
M:tum yesa kyun puch rahi ho?
G:kyunki,my husband is going 2 beat u 2 death
M:acha
G:u better maintain some distance from me
M:bt geet,my wife isn't like ur husband.she is very nice
G:kaise?
M:she cares more 4 her scooty.no one can touch her scooty.bt anyone can touch me

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 3:11am | IP Logged
M:acha.bt geet if ur husband comes 2 know tht u hug ur boss like this,thn wht would happen?
G:do u have life insurance cover 4 u?

ROFL
ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL

M:she cares more 4 her scooty.no one can touch her scooty.bt anyone can touch me  

maan beta ur in for some serious trouble ... wapas juliet say phoolan devi bananay per kiyon tula tu usay.. apni jaan piyari nahin hai kiya tumhein .... tum scooty ka zikar na hi kero to hi tumharay liye acha hai 


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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 3:21am | IP Logged
Hi Sana,
thank u so much 4 converting my senti scenes in2 comedy.

ur comments r very nice yaar.bt sometime i need english traslation.

one four three yaar

Mmmmm(Tonya)

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 3:28am | IP Logged
no problem hun ... from now on u'll get my comments translated...

keep up the good work

love

Sana

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 3:44am | IP Logged
haiiii......loved their convo...they are made for each other

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