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Promise and Pyar FF#2 (Thanks buddies - Pg 128) (Page 47)

s-o-m-m-i-e Goldie

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 5:11am | IP Logged
finally confession........
awesome yar..Thumbs Up

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maansee IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 5:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tonyahk

Part 372
G:(still hugging him)
M:(tries 2 cheer her up)geet galti hogayi
G:kya hua?
M:ye tho office hai
M:geet y r u hugging ur boss in office?
G:kyunki i couldn't hug my husband in home geet if ur husband comes 2 know tht u hug ur boss like this,thn wht would happen?
G:do u have life insurance cover 4 u?
M:tum yesa kyun puch rahi ho?
G:kyunki,my husband is going 2 beat u 2 death
G:u better maintain some distance from me
M:bt geet,my wife isn't like ur husband.she is very nice
M:she cares more 4 her one can touch her anyone can touch me
lovely romance with fun    loved it

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-Mrinalini- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 5:34am | IP Logged
Fantabulous Tonya...

Amazing updates!!!!

Loved them all...

Continue soon!!!!!

Love u loads...


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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 6:05am | IP Logged
Part 373
G:kya,ur wife is tht careless?
G:wo kaise patni hai
M:geet don't speak ill of my wife

(Some one knocks maan's cabin door)
M:(releases geet from her hug&sits on his seat)
G:(standing opp. 2 maan)
adi enters inside
M:(starts 2 pretend as if he is scolding geet)geet wht r u thinking of urself?
G:(shocked&looks@him in confusion)sir wo..
M:(maan winks@her)
G:(selftalk)hey babaji,wht is he doing?
Adi:(selftalk)is maan sir scolding geet 4 having missed her mobile?
M:geet,y'day y did u leave office without informing me?
adi:(feeling bad 4 geet&tries 2 save her from maan)sir,geet..

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 6:09am | IP Logged
wow awsome yaar..finally confession over... waiting to see her frnds reaction wen they come to know of the marriage 

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 6:29am | IP Logged
Part 374
adi:sir,y'day geet wasn't feeling well...
M:adi,i din ask u
adi:he he he he
adi:sorry sir
M:bolo geet
G:haan sir i wasn't feeling well&u were in i left
M:i tried ur mobile twice.y din u pick my call?
G:(selftalk)hey babaji,y is he overacting?
adi:sir geet's mobile has been mis..
adi:sorry sir
M:teek hai sab chodo.y did u call me in d morning?
G:(doesn't know hw 2 stop maan)
Adi:(so desparate 2 save geet)sir,tht call wasn't made by gee..
M:adi tumara problem kya hai?
adi:sorry sir
M:geet i told u na i'll call u back,thn y switched off ur mobile

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 6:45am | IP Logged
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww awesomeeeeeeeee
bechari geet phashi abb maan chup nahi rah satha

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 6:48am | IP Logged
Part 375
adi:geet din switch off d mobile
M:adi from whn did u become spokes person 4 geet?
adi:sorry sir
M:geet,y did u switch off ur mobile?bolo
G:(with her fingers signals maan 2 keep quiet)
M:(couldn't understand anything)
adi:(whispers in geet's ear)geet, i think pinky is right
G:kya hai adi sir
adi:maan sir must have stolen ur mobile
M:(confused by whispering between geet&adi)
G:adi sir y r u saying like this?
adi:see geet,maan sir keeps on insisting tht d mobile was with u
adi:geet,sir is playing smart 2 hide his guilt
G:(selftalk)hey babaji
M:ye ho kya raha hai?

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