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Promise and Pyar FF#2 (Thanks buddies - Pg 128) (Page 47)

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 12:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tonyahk


Hi mina,
143.....good morning.
sorry 4 spoiling ur sleep lastnight.

right now i'm fighting with my brain.it's nt booting up.i'll update soon.

one four three buddy
have a nice day

Tonya

Come on hun.. u can write... Forget bout my sleep! I'm used to it coz i myself was updating my FF...LOL

About u writing romantic scenes... Don't worry! You'll do gr8!!! And the confession was damn cute!!!!Embarrassed

I'm going out right now... Will come back in the evening.... Hopefully by then u'll update!Big smile

All the best sweetheart... Don't take tension! You'll do gr8 with the romantic Scenes...Wink

Love u...

Mina

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 12:31am | IP Logged
Part 367
maneet break their hug
M:(cups geet's face)geet ab bolo,y did u cry?
G:patha nai kyun?bt as soon as i sensed tht u r going 2 say ILU,i couldn't control my tears
M:(teasing)acha,was it a such a tragic moment 2 u?
G:(teases)i'm nt sure
M:(removes his hands from her face&teases)teek hai.lets keep dis confession under suspension.when u become clear abt ur feelings on dis confession,we can activate it
G:(shocked&disappointed)nai nai yesa kuch nai hai.i'm happy abt it
M:geet,no need 2 hurry.think twice before taking any decision
G:pl. listen.no need 2 rethink.it's my final decision

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 12:31am | IP Logged
awesome yaar u r a wonderful writer
 
wonderful confession
 
plzzzzzzz continue

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 12:51am | IP Logged
tonya...you are awesome buddy..
loved Maaneet's confession ...continue soon...


Edited by namita25 - 08 January 2011 at 12:51am

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 12:55am | IP Logged
Part 368
M:dekho geet ur slow processing brain needs some more time 2 think.so u take ur own time
G:...
M:y r u still here?ab jakar kam karo
G:kam?
M:haan secretary ka kam
G:dust danav
M:(smiles)
G:(turns 2 leave)
M:(stops her by holding her hand)
G:(stares@him)
M:geet,u want 2 hide something from me.hena?
G:(fumbles)yesa kuch nai hai
M:thn y did u cry on d phone?
G:..(selftalk)kya bolun?if i say, he would be hurt
M:bolo geet
G:meri haath chodiye
M:nai chodunga
G:ye office hai.koi ajayaga
M:i don't care
G:(tries 2 release her hand from his grip)
M:(tightens his grip&pulls her close 2 him)

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 1:12am | IP Logged
Part 369
M:geet bolo
G:wo wo...
M:haan bolo
G:wo kya hena?i was asking dadima abt sameera di
M:(shocked&releases geet's hand immediately)
G:(shocked)i could understand how much u would have been hurt when u came 2 know abt her
M:(turns2otherside)
G:u loved her sincerely.hena?
M:...(hurt)
G:i know it's difficult 2 forget d first love.kyunki,always first love is best love.hena?
M:(in pain)haan geet.u r right.first love is always d best love
G:(disappointed,cries&standing silently)
M:(didn't turn 2 geet&silent)
G:(turns 2 leave)
M:geet rukhjao
G:(stops)
M:(turns 2 her&cups her face again)geet

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 1:38am | IP Logged
Part 370
M:geet,as u said d first love is d best love.but my first love is u geet
G:(looks in2 his eyes)
M:haan geet,u r my first love
G:(happy)
M:geet,u r my one&only love
G:(stares@him confusion)
M:haan geet,u only taught me d meaning of true love
G:?
M:geet u were ready2do anythinng4my happiness.hena?
G:...
M:geet do u remember wht u said on d other day?
G:?
M:u told me tht u won't leave me unless i ask u.kya tume yaad hai?
G:haan
M:u confessed ur love on tht day itself
G:.
M:geet u never cared 4 urself.u always had been worrying abt me.tht is y u were ready 2 leave me 4 my sake.hena?

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 1:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tonyahk

Part 370
M:geet,as u said d first love is d best love.but my first love is u geet
G:(looks in2 his eyes)
M:haan geet,u r my first love
G:(happy)
M:geet,u r my one&only love
G:(stares@him confusion)
M:haan geet,u only taught me d meaning of true love
G:?
M:geet u were ready2do anythinng4my happiness.hena?
G:...
M:geet do u remember wht u said on d other day?
G:?
M:u told me tht u won't leave me unless i ask u.kya tume yaad hai?
G:haan
M:u confessed ur love on tht day itself
G:.
M:geet u never cared 4 urself.u always had been worrying abt me.tht is y u were ready 2 leave me 4 my sake.hena?
great part

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