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Promise and Pyar FF#2 (Thanks buddies - Pg 128) (Page 40)

sanu3108 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 2:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by tonyahk

Part 362
manisha:(is abt 2 snatch geet's bag) (aik to ye manisha meray haathon zaya ho jaye gi kisi din .. saala halka phulka  ROFL)
pinky:(shoughts)rukhiye  (tubelight jalnay wali hai logon.. yes pinky u can do it thora aur zor daal dimaagh per.. thora use ker apnay non existent grey cells ko)
all shocked including geet
pinky:i know who have stolen geet's mobile (chalo tubelight jal gayee finally)
G:stolen? (o teri --- a bright idea is on its way)
pinky:haan geet ur mobile has been stolen by DD (pinky kiyon apni maut ko dawat de rahe hai - beta marnay kay aur bhi aasaan tareekay hain ... torturous death kyion chahiye tujhay Geet aur MSK kay haathon)
other PPs:(in chorus)kya?DD? (shock of the century... MSK chindi chorrrROFLROFLROFLROFL)
G:(selkftalk)hey babaji,in order 2 save myself,i've left maan sir in trouble (oye jhalli ye pehlay sochna thaa naa.. ab kya karay gi... jaldi kuch soch)
adi:pinky tum pagal hogaya kya?y shoud maan sir do like tht? (aacjacly pinky have u gone nuts)
pinky:i think his mobile would have been out of balance he would have stolen geet's mobile (MSK out of mobile credit ...  ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL)
G:(feels like killing pinki&selftalk)pinky r u calling my husband,a thief? (pinky ur soo dead)
adi:bt maan sir has postpaid connection (good logic adi)


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rsroopali IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 2:25pm | IP Logged
maans phone is out of balance so he stole geets phone thts d best line
i hv heard till 2day
want 2 see maans reaction whn enters
n oh no hope she doesnt say 143 bcoz he said her 2 say tht 2 him instead of gud mrng

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 2:26pm | IP Logged
Part 363
M:(enters inside¬ices geet&PPs conference)wht is going on here?jakar apne kam kejiye
all leave silently
M:geet come 2 my cabin(leaves)
G:(confused&follows him)
pinky:adi sir i told u na DD had stolen geet's u din see he is calling her 2 his cabin 2 give her mobile back
adi:pinky ab tumari imagination ban karo(leaves)
pinky:(selftalk)y no one is trusting me?

@maan's cabin
M:geet y did u cry?
G:(shocked)i told u na because of stomach pain
M:i don't believe it geet
G:i'm telling d truth
M:acha nw come 2 hospital
G:nai nai
M:(pulls her close 2 him)geet......

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 2:28pm | IP Logged
awesome updates
loved it
continue soon

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-Mrinalini- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 2:41pm | IP Logged
Fabulous...... Maan pulled Geet to him!!!

Now please... Tonya.. My sweetheart, darling, jaanu, suger sweet honey bun....

Pls ab confession!!!!!

I'm waiting!!!

Its 3 am!!!

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 2:44pm | IP Logged
Part 364
M:(pulls her close 2 him)geet nw tell me d truth.y did u cry?
G:(heartbeats fastly)wo wo...
M:bolo geet
G:kuch nai
M:geet i've told u na i hate ur tears.thn y did u cry?
M:geet don't test my patience?
G:...(lowers gaze)
M:geet mere aankhon mein dekar jawab do?
G:...(still looking@d floor)
M:(lifts her chin 2 make her look in2 his eyes)
G:(tears in her eyes)
M:pl. geet don't cry.i can't stand ur tears
G:(looking in2 his eyes)
M:geet do u have any clue of wht ur tears r doing2me?
G:(stares@him questioningly)
M:geet ur each drop of tears makes me die 4 lakhs of times.samji tum?

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 2:46pm | IP Logged
nyc n hallirious do continue soon

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sanu3108 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 2:49pm | IP Logged
M:geet ur each drop of tears makes me die 4 lakhs of times.samji tum?  (ufff.. itna markay bhi zinda ... ye khudaya ye MSK kis mitti ka banaya)

awesome update hun....

love ya


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