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Promise and Pyar FF#2 (Thanks buddies - Pg 128) (Page 24)

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 11:46am | IP Logged
Part 338
M:(surprised&happy by her unexpected 'one four three' & he smiles)
G:(lays back on d bed)
M:(abt 2 lay back on bed)
G:sir ek minute
M:(shocked)ab kya hua?
G:if somebody says good night 2 u, u have 2 reciprocate it. don't u know tht?
M:(smiles)teek hai good night
G:sir now go & bring our dictionary
M:(confused)dictionary?
G:haan,u only said tht hereafter in our dictionary 'good morning'&'good night' mean 'one four three'. bt nw u r saying good night?
M:...(selftalk)acha nw u want me 2 say one four three 2 u
G:ji aap yesa kya soch rahe hain?ab boliyena
M:(smiles)leans 2wards her....

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 11:48am | IP Logged
Oye Geet .. mera jaanu bacha cha gaya ....  Maan puttar phans gaya naa .. chal jaldi se bol de usay 143  ...   


tonya thanks alot hun.... lagee reh ... 

love ya

Sana

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 11:49am | IP Logged
maan's totally crazy... LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL whts he goin do now???

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
Part 339
M:(smiles,leans 2wards her&kisses her forehead&says lovingly) one four three. ab sojao
G:(surprised by d kiss,happy&closes her eyes)
M:(stares@her closed her eyes 4 few more seconds. he lays on his side of bed&closes his eyes)
after few minutes
G:sir,can i ask u something?
M:(opens his eyes with a shock&selftalk)i think she won't leave me 2 sleep 2day
G:sir,i promise u,it's my final question
M:teek hai. poocho?
G:would u expect me 2 kiss ur forehead whenever i say 143 2 u?
M:(couldn't control his laughter@her innocence&teases her)geet nw do u want 2 kiss my forehead?
G:dust danav

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
Hi buddies,
let me continue later.

hope finally maaneet have slept.

one four three to all of u guys

Mmmmm(Tonya)

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by tonyahk

Hi buddies,
let me continue later.

hope finally maaneet have slept.

one four three to all of u guys

Mmmmm(Tonya)


okie...143 to u tooo..........!!!

loving the updates...m reading first time but i ms say u rock babes..!!

the way u create humour by ur innocent writing is js superb..!!!

loving mannet extemly..geet is so sweet and DUMBO as well...hehehehe LOL

will be waiting for ur next updates!!!

pls pls pls pls include me in PM list!!!

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by tonyahk

Hi buddies,
let me continue later.

hope finally maaneet have slept.

one four three to all of u guys

Mmmmm(Tonya)


hey not fair...u have stopped at a crucial point :(...anyway nice update and gn

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
Part 339
M:(smiles,leans 2wards her&kisses her forehead&says lovingly) one four three. ab sojao  (haye..  so romantic)
G:(surprised by d kiss,happy&closes her eyes)  (aww- finally)
M:(stares@her closed her eyes 4 few more seconds. he lays on his side of bed&closes his eyes)
after few minutes
G:sir,can i ask u something?  (chalo .. here we go again)
M:(opens his eyes with a shock&selftalk)i think she won't leave me 2 sleep 2day (u bet dude ..  aaj to raat jagnay ki tayyari ker lo.. ye premature baby tujhay nahin sonay de gi)
G:sir,i promise u,it's my final question (dekhtay hain kitna final hai)
M:teek hai. poocho?
G:would u expect me 2 kiss ur forehead whenever i say 143 2 u? (speechless ... kya karun mein is deewani ka)
M:(couldn't control his laughter@her innocence&teases her)geet nw do u want 2 kiss my forehead? (Maan puttar tu phir se shuro ho gaya usay tang kerna)
G:dust danav  (hell yes he is  ... such an apt name for him .. i tell you) 


i know Maan's next dialogue

Maan: Geeeeeeettthh   LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL

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