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Promise and Pyar FF#2 (Thanks buddies - Pg 128) (Page 17)

tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 7:34am | IP Logged
Part 331
M:ajao,i'll make u sleep
G:(nervous)nai nai,there's no need 4 it.i'll sleep myself
M:nw only u told tht u r nt sleepy?
G:(fumbles)yesa kuch nai hai
M:(hides his smile)teek hai
G:(smiles uncomfortably)good night sir(abt 2 lean on bed)
M:geet,ek minute
G:ab kya hai sir?
M:if u want me 2 let u sleep,u should agree 4 a condition
G:condition 4 sleeping?
M:haan geet
G:(selftalk)hey babaji,wht is he going 2 ask nw?
M:hereafter instead of 'good morning' & 'good night' u have 2 say 'one four three' 2 me everyday
G:lekin kyun?
M:(rolls his eyes)geet don't u want me 2 let u sleep nw?

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 7:44am | IP Logged
im a silent reader of ur ff.......
i cant hold my lough while reading ur ff........i just liked it......

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 7:51am | IP Logged
wow....... loved it..... plzz cont

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 7:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sindu555

perfect song....imagine them performing in this song in the circus


Hi Sana
u r all set 2 kill me with ur deadly hilarious comments. i can't stop laughing imagining maaneet performing for this song in the CIRCUS.

OMG... u know what,now a days i'm planning 2 handover this FF 2 u.

thank u so much for d lovely comments.

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namita25 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 7:57am | IP Logged
owwww..what a conditionROFLgood going Maan....lage rahoROFL

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-Mrinalini- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 8:05am | IP Logged
Hey bhagwaan.... Maan is killing me here... hahahahaha...ROFL

I cant hold my laughter... Geet should start saying... aye aye hitler.... he is literally dictating her/...

Maan the circus Master and Geet is the tamed lioness.... ahahahaha....

Continue soon!!!!

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 8:08am | IP Logged
maan so romantic ..wat if this news gets to press?LOL

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 8:11am | IP Logged
Part 332
M:bolo geet,kya tume mansur hai?
M:(very happy)teek hai.ab sojao
G:(relieved)ji(abt 2 lean on bed)
M:geet ek minute
G:ab kya?
M:u have forgotten 2 say goog night 2 me
G:i said it few minutes back only
M:dubara bolo
G:aap phirse shru kardiye
M:geet ab bolo varna...(stops in d middle)
G:(scared)teek hai.good night
M:geet tume suna nai maine kya kaha?
M:i told u 2 say good night
G:tht is wht i said
M:oh my prematurely born baby,nw listen 2 me carefully
G:([email protected] with her mouth wide open)
M:(closes her mouth with his hand)ab muv bankaro.i'm nt going 2 feed u any rosagula

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