Fan Fictions

India-Forums

   
Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

Promise and Pyar FF#2 (Thanks buddies - Pg 128) (Page 124)

ramahesh IF-Rockerz
ramahesh
ramahesh

Joined: 05 October 2010
Posts: 6047

Posted: 18 January 2011 at 2:42am | IP Logged
super....improvement ...in our geet yaar....
ROFL

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

tonyahk

tonyahk Goldie
tonyahk
tonyahk

Joined: 07 June 2010
Posts: 1671

Posted: 18 January 2011 at 2:50am | IP Logged
Part 519
G:ryt nw dadima must be watching Ramayan.so she won't come(moves close 2 him)
dadi:(selftalk)geet,i thought u r innocent
M:(checks d surrounding&shouts)geet rukho
G:kya hua?r u feeling shy?
dadi:(laughing silently)poor maan
M:nai geet.i want 2 give u something
G:u too want 2 give an AK?come on lets give simultaneously
dadi:(still eyes closed&selftalk)simultaneously?interesting
M:wo nai hai.lemme show u wht is it
G:nai(lost her patience&abt2kiss him)
M:(silently runs &hides behind d pillar whre dadi is already hiding&din notice her)
G:maan...whre r u?
dadi:(selftalk)whre is he?


The following 42 member(s) liked the above post:

devi_stpyarisaheliinlwgeetvini187nehavashikruti96gagsyasmi123bhakbhartifannaamteegkinnikaKashish9687april12s-o-m-m-i-eixrayEscapistbobbydoll-shamima-puthmaanujaanudreamy4everRocks.Dharamayapari-Veritaserum-ramaheshAudiwaliapaponeconwajiha-1kuhu18anjucoolambbiharsroopaliswetha10namita25sweet scorpiohinal_maaneetShalveammu5kahkashansakina-Mrinalini-singh24Madhuri53

tonyahk Goldie
tonyahk
tonyahk

Joined: 07 June 2010
Posts: 1671

Posted: 18 January 2011 at 3:31am | IP Logged
Part 520
G:maan,if u don't come,nw i'm going 2 open my eyes
M:...
dadi:(opens her eyes&selftalk)is she really going 2 open her eyes?
G:(opens her eyes&selftalk)where is he?maan....maan
M:...
G:has he gone inside d mansion?(walks 2wards mansion)
dadi&maan both r relieved&say simultaneousy
M&dadi:acha hua geet chali gayi
both shocked&turn 2wards each other simultaneously
M:dadima aap
dadi:maan aap
both r super,duper embarassed
M:(compose himself)dadima,wht r u doing here?
dadi:i just come 2 check d outhouse
M:nw u r supposed 2 watch Ramayan.hena?
dadi:maan u r supposed 2 be in office.hena?

The following 42 member(s) liked the above post:

devi_stpyarisaheli-Intellect-kruti96inlwgeetnehavashigagsyasmi123bhakbhartifannaamteegKashish9687kinnikas-o-m-m-i-eapril12Escapistixraydreamy4ever-maankimishti-puthheermeher-shamima-maanujaanumayapari-Veritaserum-ramaheshAudiwaliawajiha-1ambbihakuhu18anjucoolnamita25swetha10sweet scorpiohinal_maaneet--aarthi--Shalversroopaliammu5kahkashansakina-Mrinalini-Madhuri53singh24

tonyahk Goldie
tonyahk
tonyahk

Joined: 07 June 2010
Posts: 1671

Posted: 18 January 2011 at 3:50am | IP Logged
Part 521
G:(searching 4 maan inside d mansion)
M:dadima,i just came here 2 take a file
dadi:(selftalk)acha maan.u came 4 a file
M:dadima,when did u come?
dadi:just nw
M:Wht r u doing behind d pillars?
dadi:i'm planning 2 white wash d outhouse.so i'm cheking d pillars
M:(rolls his eyes)teek hai.ab aap yahan se chali jayiye
dadi:i'm yet 2 check d pillars.aap jayiye
M:teek hai(leaves)
dadi:(selftalk)they need some privacy.it's time4their honeymoon.kuch karna hi padega
G:(tired of searching4maan,comes 2 her room&lays down on d bed)has he left 4 office?
M:(comes 2 d room¬ices geet on d bed)

The following 39 member(s) liked the above post:

-Intellect-kruti96inlwgeetnehavashipyarisahelidevi_stasmi123gagsykinnikanaamteegbhakbhartifanEscapistixrayapril12s-o-m-m-i-emaanujaanumayaparidreamy4ever-maankimishti--shamima-puthanjucoolAudiwalia-Veritaserum-paponeconambbihawajiha-1ramaheshkuhu18Shalveammu5swetha10namita25hinal_maaneetrsroopali--aarthi--singh24Madhuri53-Mrinalini-

tonyahk Goldie
tonyahk
tonyahk

Joined: 07 June 2010
Posts: 1671

Posted: 18 January 2011 at 4:05am | IP Logged
Part 522
M:(calls softly)geet
G:(gets up&sits on d bed)
M:(feels bad)geet,i'm sorry
G:...
M:(senses her tension&tries 2 cheer her up)geet,where have u gone?i was searching 4 u
G:(annoyed)kya kaha aapne?u were searching 4 me?dust danav.u have run away from my AK.u know how i was searching 4 u
M:geet
G:chup.u have spoiled my romantic mood
M:geet,nw i'm ready 4 AK
G:no need 4 tht
M:(feels very bad 4 his action,hugs her gently)sorry geet.i've cheated u
G:(hugs him back)aap yesa kyun bolrahe hai?
M:geet,when u were saying 143 for 200 times,i wasn't there
G:kya?
M:haan geet
G:bt where did u go?

The following 36 member(s) liked the above post:

pyarisahelidevi_stinlwgeetnehavashikruti96gagsyasmi123bhakbhartifannaamteegKashish9687kinnikas-o-m-m-i-eapril12Escapistixraydreamy4everputhmayapari-shamima-ambbihawajiha-1kuhu18-Veritaserum-paponeconAudiwaliaanjucoolnamita25sweet scorpiohinal_maaneetswetha10Shalve--aarthi--rsroopali-Mrinalini-singh24Madhuri53

wajiha-1 IF-Rockerz
wajiha-1
wajiha-1

Joined: 28 August 2010
Posts: 6638

Posted: 18 January 2011 at 4:07am | IP Logged
hey hi dear iam happy that you are back
iz missing you and your updates
all the audates are awesome loved them continue soon

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

tonyahk

Audiwalia IF-Rockerz
Audiwalia
Audiwalia

Joined: 08 October 2010
Posts: 5888

Posted: 18 January 2011 at 4:11am | IP Logged
OMG.................GEET IS GETTING BOLDER DAY BY DAY...........Wink

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

tonyahk

tonyahk Goldie
tonyahk
tonyahk

Joined: 07 June 2010
Posts: 1671

Posted: 18 January 2011 at 4:20am | IP Logged
Part 523
M:i wanted 2 give u a surprise
G:surprise?
M:haan
G:wht was tht?
M:(releases her from his hug)nw close ur eyes.i'll give it2u
G:wo..
M:geet,trust me.dis time i won't run
G:yesa nai hai
M:ab aankhein ban karo
G:(closes her eyes&excited&selftalk)wht could it be?
M:(takes geet's mangalsutar&sindoor from his pocket&selftalk)geet i came 2 our room 2 take this when u were saying 143.sorry geet
G:maan r u here?
M:don worry geet.i won't go anywhere
G:(smiles)
M:(silently puts d mangalsutar on her neck)
G:(feels d mangasutar&understands wht he is doing&very happy)maan
M:don open ur eyes

The following 38 member(s) liked the above post:

pyarisahelidevi_stkruti96nehavashiinlwgeetgagsyasmi123bhakbhartifannaamteegKashish9687kinnikas-o-m-m-i-eapril12ixrayEscapistdreamy4everputh-shamima-maanujaanumayaparipaponecon-Veritaserum-ramaheshAudiwaliawajiha-1ambbihakuhu18anjucoolnamita25swetha10sweet scorpiohinal_maaneet--aarthi--rsroopaliShalve-Mrinalini-singh24Madhuri53

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
My Promise (VertikArjun) (one shot)

2 3 4

Author: ~~~~   Replies: 24   Views: 2656

~~~~ 24 2656 29 September 2009 at 4:23am by Mahak Sinha
Pyar Hi Pyar AR FF

Author: HeAvEnS   Replies: 6   Views: 5963

HeAvEnS 6 5963 20 July 2009 at 5:56am by vruls
Promise To Love You Forever(AR) Part1 pg3 7/12/09

2 3 4

Author: reemz.malik   Replies: 27   Views: 3448

reemz.malik 27 3448 12 July 2009 at 6:50pm by vruls
meher and preet/pyar he pyar/PART1 pg1

Author: bulbul123   Replies: 8   Views: 3323

bulbul123 8 3323 22 September 2008 at 1:06am by lil_desi_goddes
Fan-Fic: Vaada - The Promise

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 35 36

Author: charmedangel   Replies: 286   Views: 34331

charmedangel 286 34331 18 March 2006 at 9:14pm by Mehandikhan

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index