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Promise and Pyar FF#2 (Thanks buddies - Pg 128) (Page 123)

tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 1:19am | IP Logged
Part 514
G:(still eyes closed)maan,atleast nw tell me wht is d meaning of 143
dadi:(selftalk)geet doesn't know d meaning also.maan u r great
G:maan,y r u silent?
dadi:(controls her laughter)
G:ji boliyena
dadi:(selftalk)whre has he gone?
G:if u don't say d meaning,thn i'll go&ask dadima
dadi:(selftalk)hey bagwan,mein kya karu is pagal ladki ko? poor maan
G:maan,pl.tell me.i'm ready 2 give u whtever u ask
dadi:(selftalk)interesting.if maan was here,wht would have he asked her?
G:maan,i know wht do u want nw
dadi:(selftalk) stupid potha is missing d romantic moment.whre is he nw?

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 1:33am | IP Logged
muahHug continue soon

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 1:38am | IP Logged
Part 515
G:(still eyes closed)y aren't u talking 2 me?
dadi:(selftalk)how would he talk?he has run somewhere
G:may i open my eyes nw?
dadi:(selftalk)geet yesa math karo beta
G:r u still angry with me?
dadi:(selftalk)maan is angry with u?impossible
G:teek hai.lemme give u an AK(she shortly says ACTION KISS as AK)
G:(moves forward 2wards dadi)
dadi:(scared&selftalk)pata nai.wht is meant by AK in maan's love encyclopedia?
G:ji aap kahan hai?(still eyes closed&stretches her arms 2 catch dadi)
dadi:(selftalk)ab mein kya karu?(moves backwards silently)
G:(abt 2 catch dadi)

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 1:52am | IP Logged
Part 516
dadi:(notices tht maan is coming,she runs&hides behind a pillar)
G:(hears d footsteps of dadi&misunderstand tht maan is running)maan,nw stop playing hide&seek with me
dadi:(selftalk)acha hua.geer din catch me
M:(approaches geet)
G:nw i'm going 2 open my eyes
M:(shouts)geet don open
G:thn y r u nt replying 2 me?i only was talking all these time
M:(selftalk)geet has been talking alone
G:jawab deejiye
M:geet,have u finished saying 143 for 200 times
G:r u asking me?u r d one who was counting it.hena?
M:(fumbles)haan geet.i've forgotten
G:so nw do u want me 2 repeat 143 4 200 times?

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 2:07am | IP Logged
Park 517
M:(smiles@her innocence)nai geet
dadi:(silently watching from behind d pillar)
G:teek hai.nw come closer
G:have u forgotten everything wht i just said?
M:(selftalk)wht would have she said?
M:haan geet.i remember everything
G:teek hai.nw come closer
M:(confused,moves close 2 her&selftalk)wht is she going 2 do nw?
dadi:(selftalk)i think she is going 2 give him AK.ab pata chalega ki ye AK kya hai
G:(caressing his cheeks)
M:(scared)geet ye tum kya kar rahi ho?
G:chup.i'm going2give u AK
M:(shocked)kya?AK?geet,we r standing outside d outhouse.don't u remember?

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heermeher IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 2:23am | IP Logged
i felt bad with Maan's act bechari 143 bolrahi hai and this guy is just leaving that place thats bad

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 2:29am | IP Logged
Part 518
G:(she has gone in2 full romantic mood&doesn't realise wht she is doing)i know we r standing outside d outhouse?tho kya?yahan bi AK chalega.ab ayiyena
M:(looking @ her in horror)nai geet,mera bath suno
dadi:(selftalk)y maan is so scared of AK.i think AK is a bad thing
G:nai,i won't listen 2 u(abt 2 kiss him)
dadi:(closes her eyes&selftalk)hey bagwan,is it d same geet who was y'day too shy 2 see shirtless Lord Ram?i can't believe this
M:(moves backward)geet tum pagal hogayi kya?
G:(still eyes closed)chup.come closer
M:geet,wht if dadima comes?
G:don't worry.she won't come

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