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Promise and Pyar FF#2 (Thanks buddies - Pg 128) (Page 122)

tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by heermeher

hey sweety welcome back hope things went fine with you

Hi heer,
evrything is going fine buddy. take care



tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 11:19pm | IP Logged
Part 508
G:(chasing maan)maan pl.stop.meri bath suniye
M:(smiles&keeps walking 2wards outhouse)
dadi&nakul r in d garden & notices geet who is running behind maan
dadi:ye kya horah hai?
nakul:geet madam is chasing maan sir
dadi:nakul chup

G:maan 143
M:(stops 4 a moment,smirks&walks)

dadi:(happy&smiles)acha,geet is saying 143 2 maan.very good progress
nakul:madam,ye 143 kya hai?
dadi:nakul chup

M:(abt2enter outhouse)
G:maan rukhiye
M:(din stop)
G:(annoyed&shoughts)hey maan,r u stupid or wht?can't u hear me?nw stop there.otherwise i donno wht would i do nw.i mean it.samji aap?

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 11:44pm | IP Logged
Part 509

G:(walking 2wards him)

dadi&nakul watching from distance
dadi:(shocked)ye meri kan kya sun rahe hai?
nakul:geet madam is shouting @ maan sir
dadi:i can't believe geet able 2 shout @ maan like this?
nakul:madam,i donno abt geet generally all wives shout @ their husbands like this only
dadi:bt here d husband is Maan Singh Khurana
nakul:nai madam,it's vice d Maan Singh Khurana is husband
nakul:haan sir is nw husband,he has 2 bear whtever geet madam does 2 him
dadi:chup.ab aap andar jayiye
nakul:ji madam

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 12:01am | IP Logged
Part 510
nakul left
dadi is silently watching maneet from some distance
G:(approaches maan)y r u doing like this?
M:wht did i do?u r d one who shouted @ me
G:sorry maan.actually i'm running behind u 2 apologise 2 u r nt stoping.tht is y i shouted
M:(holds her shoulder&pulls her 2wards him)
M:(smiles)acha.nw my wife wants 2 apologise 2 she sounds very hard
G:(softens)maan i'm sorry
M:i'm nt impressed by ur apology
G:143 maan
M:very good...
G:(happy)thank u
M:wait.lemme complete
M:nw close ur eyes
M:don't u want me 2 pardon u?
M:aankhein ban karo

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 12:16am | IP Logged
Part 511
G:(closes her eyes)
M:u shouldn't open ur eyes untill i ask u.teek hai?
G:maan,wht r u going 2 do?
M:(smiles)nw say 143 for 200 times
G:par ye 143 kya hai?
M:i'll tell u later.nw start saying 143
G:teek hai.u count it
G:143 maan,143 maan...
dadi is still carefully watching maneet from some distance.
M:(staring@geet lovingly)
G:143 maan,143 maan....
M:(goes 2 kiss her forehead,thinks something,stops&smile)
G:maan r u counting or nt?
M:haan geet.i'm don't stop in d middle.otherwise u have 2 start from d beginning
G:kya?(abt 2 open her eyes)

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 12:29am | IP Logged
Part 512
M:geet i told u na nt 2 open ur eyes ?
G:(makes baby face)teek hai.143 maan,143 maan...
M:(controls his laughter&leaves d place silently)
G:(still chanting)143 maan...
dadi:(selftalk)ye kya horah hai?maan has left.thn whom geet is talking with?

in d drawing room
nakukl:chandu,ye 143 matlab kya hai?
chandu:oho,u too know abt 143
nakul:just nw geet madam said it 2 maan sir
chandu:is she still saying?
nakul:ye chodo.nw tell me wht 143 means?
chandu:it means 'l am sorry'
chandu:haan geet madam told me
nakul:teek hai(runs)
M:(enters drawing room&bumps in2 nakul)

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 1:05am | IP Logged
Part 513
M:(shouts)tumara dhyan kahan hai?
nakul:(scared)sir wo...
M:ab jao
N:143 sir(buddies,he says 'sorry'.courtesy-chandu)
M:(lost it&shouts)ab jao
nakul:(runs 4 his life)
M:(selftalk)ye chandu aur nakul in dono muje pagal kardenge(leaves 4 his room)

@ d portico of outhouse
G:(still her eyes closed)143 maan,143 maan....
dadi:(comes close 2 geet,notices geet's closed eyes,silently watching her&selftalk)wht maan is doing with this poor girl?she is saying 143 here&he has left silently
G:maan,is 200 times over?
dadi:(selftalk)acha,he wants her 2 say 143 for 200 times.hw romantic.

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kuhu18 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 1:15am | IP Logged
 HI    good to see u back was missing your updates very much   your  FF  is one of my fev  keep it up and best of luck for your studies . may sucess come to u always .

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