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Promise and Pyar FF#2 (Thanks buddies - Pg 128) - Page 24

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Posted: 13 years ago
Pary 351
dadi:geet,nw u r his happiness,life&everything
G:dadima,i promise u i'll never let him down
dadi:(smiles)i know u beta
G:(smiles)
dadi:beta,i thought tht u already knew abt Sameera's character.tht is y i din discuss abt this earlier.have all ur doubts cleared nw?
G:(shakes her head in agreement&hugs dadi again)
geet's phone rings&it's maan on d line
G:hello
M:geet
G:ji
M:(senses d dullness in her voice)geet kya hua?
G:(can't control herself&cries loudly)
M:(heart stops beating)geet y r u crying?
G:(crying)
M:bolo geet,tum teek tho hena?
G:(crying)
M:pl geet don't do this 2 me.bolo

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Posted: 13 years ago
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From
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Sana
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Madam,
i don't want discount bt i want complete free admission.i'm sure if u see my serious condition,u won't ask me 4 any registration bt u wd admit me directly.🤣

urs truly,
Tonya





aray tonya sweetheart.. u wont be charged a single penny ... infact u have a celebrity status  in there  ...
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Chandu:(2 geet)good morning madam
G:143 bhaiya
M:(shocked & chokes his food)
Chandu:(confused)143?
G:haan 143 



that was a killer...  Maan darling ab kya karay gaa ye Geet puri duniya ko 143 bolay gi ab  ..  ðŸ¤£

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G:y should i listen 2 u? 
M:i'm ur husband geet  (oye hoye ..  MSK's authority ..)



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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 352
dadi:geet beta,stop crying.who is on d line?
G:...
M:geet i can't take this anymore.ab bolo geet kya hua?has anything happened 2 dadima?
G:(can't speak)
dadi takes d phone frm geet
dadi:maan
M:dadima aap teek tho hena?
dadi:haan beta
M:wht happened 2 geet?y is she crying like this?
dadi:(doesn't know wht 2 say)maan kuch nai
M:dadima r u hiding something from me?
dadi:nai maan
M:thn y is she crying?
dadi:(lies)maan she is having mild stomach pain due 2 tht food poisoning.tht is it.nothing 2 worry
M:(worried)dadima aap ek kam kejiye.immediately take her 2 hospital.i'll come there
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Part 344
G:(becomes silent)
M:(softly)geet
G:...
M:geet
G:...
M:geet mera ankhen mein dekho
G:(looks)
M:geet,in husband-wife relationship there r some things tht can't be shared wid third persons
G:...(lost in him by d words husband-wife relationship)
M:samji tum?
G:...
M:geet,don't u think tht we share a bond like tht of an husband-wife?
G:...
M:doesn't our relationship deserve 2 have any secrets?
G:...
M:don't i have d rights 2 tell u nt 2 do something?
G:...
M:bolo geet
G:...
M:(hurt by her silence&abt 2 leave d dining table)
G:(stops him by holding his hand)
M:(looks in2 her eyes&lost)



lo shuru ab chahatoon ka silsila ho raha hai   .....   dreammmmmmmmyyyyyyy

awesome updates as usual gurl..

love ya 

Sana
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Part 349
G:(feel like crying)
dadi:geet beta,sameera never wanted 2 leave maan.u know y?
G:?
dadi:because she never loved him
G:(more confused)
dadi:geet am i confusing u?
G:bohat dadima
dadi:(smiles)lemme clear all ur confusions 2day.sameera ws only after maan's money.bt maan din know tht,he trusted her&loved her sincerely
G:(silently listening)
dadi:bt whn maan came 2 know abt her true colors he himself threw her outta his life.after tht also Sameers tried 2 act innocent.bt he din fall in her trap again
G:(relieved)
dadi:so sameera din leave instead she was thrown out by maan.samji aap?


uff thank God is bandi ki aik confusion to dur hui  ðŸ˜Š
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Part 350
dadi:maan used 2 be very happy before this problem.bt after tht he had lost d interest in life.he was so shattered by her betrayal.he was in so much pain  (aww ... ye Sameera ki to  ... per Sameera ye na kerti to saddi Geet ka chance kaisay lagta  ...    ðŸ˜‰ ..  i am such a meano  ðŸ˜‰)
G:(feels bad 4 maan&starts 2 cry 4 him)  (aww mera bacha crying ... dont cry jaan u'r there na for him)
dadi:(wipes geet's tears)geet don't cry
G:(hugs dadi&cries more)it shouldn't have happened 2 him dadima.he is a very nice person.he doesn't deserve all these pains (offcourse he derserves all the happiness in the world)
dadi:(carresses geet's head)geet beta don't worry.God knows tht maan doesn't deserve this pain.tht is y God has gifted 'Geet' 2 Maan 2 heal all his wounds  (MAan ki Geet and Geet ka Maan .. irreversible and irrevocable  ðŸ˜Š)
G:(stares@dadi) (oye kurriye abhee ankhain phaar phaar ker dadi ko kiyon ghoor rahee hai  ðŸ˜›)
dadi:haan beta,as i already said now u r his happiness (hell yes she is .. ).



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Pary 351
dadi:geet,nw u r his happiness,life&everything
G:dadima,i promise u i'll never let him down
dadi:(smiles)i know u beta
G:(smiles)
dadi:beta,i thought tht u already knew abt Sameera's character.tht is y i din discuss abt this earlier.have all ur doubts cleared nw?
G:(shakes her head in agreement&hugs dadi again)
geet's phone rings&it's maan on d line
G:hello
M:geet
G:ji
M:(senses d dullness in her voice)geet kya hua?
G:(can't control herself&cries loudly)
M:(heart stops beating)geet y r u crying?
G:(crying)
M:bolo geet,tum teek tho hena?
G:(crying)
M:pl geet don't do this 2 me.bolo


loved Maan's concern ... oye Geet ... bacha plz rona band kero .... why are you hell bent on giving him heart attacks all the time
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 353
dadi:maan nothing serious
M:no dadima.y'day d doctor told me 2 bring her 2 hospital if she has stomach pain.so nw pl.take her 2 hospital
dadi:maan she is alright.trust me
M:dadima give d phone2geet
dadi:(gives d phone2geet&gestures her nt 2 cry)
G:(wipes her tears)hello
M:geet tum teek tho hena?
G:mein bilkul teek hu
M:haven't u taken d pills?
G:nai
M:kyun?
G:(tries2cheer him up)kyunki Mr.Khurana isn't here2give me d pills alongwith his sweet advice
M:(lil bit relieved)geet nw take d pills
G:ji
M:i'll be on d line
G:kyun?
M:i don't trust u.nw take d pills
G:i'm yet2have breakfast