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Experimental PriDa Short FF - Part 4 (Page 5) (Page 2)

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 9:35am | IP Logged

Mruuu....

 
Great start Thumbs Up….!!! U builds up d suspense nicely…!!! Seems interesting….!!! Pri in revenge mode…..Damz full with her attitude….n confidence….!!! I can clearly see d fireworks….in future Embarrassed….!!! Continue soon….!!!

 

 
 
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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 9:55am | IP Logged



Chapter 1:  End of a Revenge?


Chapter 2: The Hunt begins..


Bang Bang Bang.. The shots reverberated in the air...


The shots didn't miss their mark .. They never did .. He was impressed...


Sitting at the cafe behind the glass window, Prithvi Saxena sat quietly....


The petite frame of the shooter,  her proud stance  and her attitude, was all on display for the observer.


The observer was not a novice at tracking .. especially considering his speciality at search and rescue...whether it was the mountains or deserts or an urban jungle like Mumbai...


It hadn't been difficult for him to track her at this shooting range.. Her favourite hangout place..


He knew her face from the news sources, but he wasn't ready ( he would never admit this ever) as she turned around suddenly...


All this was a blur... All He could see was her face... He sat there, rooted to his seat .. the coffee cooling in front of him... He was lost...


His eyes traced her face lazily from her proud forehead to the sparkling eyes.. to the flushed cheekbones.. to the perky lips and to her proud chin...


Back to her soft hair framing her face.. playing on her soft cheeks..


The hunt was forgotten .. or maybe a new hunt was beginning!


She walked towards the door.. she stopped and turned back for a second .. Shaking her head slightly, she turned towards the shelf to load her gun again...


She turned back again.. staring long at the glass door.. a slight frown on her face..


She felt someone .. felt someone watching her .. the feeling sent slight shivers down her spine.. She steeled herself and loaded her gun and turned back to the target...


Today she was back again shooting ... something she thought she had lost forever especially after that night in ...


Yet her hands were steady again.. years of rigorous practice and a strong mind had always been her strength....


Bang Bang Bang.. the shots reverberated again... It broke his spell...


He sat there, drumming his fingers on the counter... eyes narrowed.. face inscrutable.. lips curving in a small smirk ..


Guess... this girl was like a proud mustang ... he smiled softly...  " Bhaiyaaa, Girls are NOT horses", Sammer's often well meaning advice rang out in his ears... He never understood his younger brother's obsession with girls.. " But this girl was different, this was Damini Gujral" ..


Suddenly.. His face hardened .. " Bhaiyyaaa ,...Damini Gujral shot Papa..", Sameer's clear words came back to jolt him to reality....



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-- Mru


Chapter 3: Hunk and the Beauty ..





Edited by Mru_bee - 06 January 2011 at 12:23pm

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 10:34am | IP Logged
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You updated?? Somebody's being VERY benevolent.. Kisi ki nazar na lage.. TongueLOL

Naiceeeee part Mru.... Pri lost in her face... can perfectly imagine him raking his eyes and examining her face lazily.. *gets lost in PriDa land* and Hmmmm Damzie felt that stare.. no surprises at all there i guess.. *smirks*

Hehhehe @ the mustang reference Soooo Pri.. and then another dialogue by Sameer... Damini shot Balraj?? Shocked Kia karai hai Mruuu? Something very very fishy going on.. Damini also got lost a bit at a particular shooting incident.. You got me intrigued alright...

Update soon.. Big smile

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 10:39am | IP Logged
Wowww Mru....

Two parts of new FF BACK TO BACKShocked

thnqqqqHugPartyDancing

its a wonderful excellent start ...loved the brave damini.. cn totally visualize it.. n Pri wid gray shades wooowwwww ... this is gonna b one exiting story i feel.. waitng for the next part eagerly... thnks MruuuuBig smile


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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 11:00pm | IP Logged
Dayum...is this good or what..she shot his dad! Holyy...haha...so want to know what's next :D

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
gr8  work
w8ng fr more
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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 1:24am | IP Logged
Sorry for the late n wait Embarrassedsince its THE MRU's post need all


PART-1
very interesting part,pri at his best Revenge mode

PART-2
ahh loved the way u described DamziClap
wait a mint damzi shot dudes dad ye kya twist hain Ouchshe has it coming nw

its getting v interesting
nice updates




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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 3:46am | IP Logged

Ahemmmmm... needless to say, what an exciting start and you updated it so quick...Gr8 haan...

Mystery filled FF and with revenge in mind seems interesting concept. Well..umm. Damini killed Pri's father?? Is it really or something else is gonnna happen? Eager to know more and loved reading these amazing parts.
Your definitely coming with too many twists..TongueTongue

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