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One and the Same: Poems for Abhiya, 4th jan

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 8:40am | IP Logged
Hello guys..thanks for appreciating my work yesterday...Smile Hope this one will also get a similar response...Smile

Abhay's POV

One and the Same

Today I saved her from disaster
Knowing that there will be troubles after
I warned her not to stay alone, she heeded to my alarms
If I had it in me I would keep her in my arms
She cried because she had lost something
Which was very precious to her tender heart
I could not see tears on those angelic cheeks
My heart felt pain for ages for a start
Her pain is mine, her happiness my smile
For her I ran, not caring about the miles
I went back to those memories I had long since forgotten
And remembered a girl similarly besotten
Who loved me to a point beyond measure
Who was my life and my immense pleasure
A girl who would forever be linked with my name
For in essence and in my heart, she and Pia
Will eternally be one and the same....

Criticism will be appreciated..but I don't mind praise...Wink LOL

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 8:51am | IP Logged
So true... his love is immortal...... 
U r fabulous...... this is perfect.... u grasped all the appropriate words.... these words expressed it all.... i liked it..... loved it..... :D

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Res! (I just realised I haven't unres my yesterday one!Ouch). Sorry! I had an exam today so it totally slipped :(


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Ooohhh!! I liked it! Abhay ki dill ki baat poem mein keh di!! Clap


Edited by Chill_Out - 04 January 2011 at 10:34am

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 9:27am | IP Logged
It's okay Neethi..hope your exam went well...Smile

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 9:29am | IP Logged
oh wow. .its so nyc :)

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 9:29am | IP Logged
Aww its so touching and convey Abhay's feeling beautifully! Great work! Clap 
Keeping writing more! :)

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 9:34am | IP Logged
beautifully written & very true..........
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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 9:34am | IP Logged
It is totally awesome really expresses Abhays painThumbs Up

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